Hi guys... it's me again. I can't believe I haven't in 2... 3 years? A lot of stuff happened in my life, my father joined the Air Force and I had to leave the only home I'd ever known, which caused me to fall into a very depressed state. I've overcome it (mostly) and am doing much better. Not trying to make excuses or get pity, I just wanted to say that if you were like me, and you think there's no way out and the world is against you-it DOES get better. There's no shame in admitting that you are unhappy, and it doesn't make you weak. Please, my PM box is always open for anyone who wants to talk. You are not alone.

Anyways, when I first wrote this story, I was in 7th grade. My writing was mediocre at best, and (hopefully) it's improved a lot since then. I am going to try to update this story again, I want to write again. Writing these stories and interacting with people on my site, it made me feel like I had something to connect to people with.

Now I need your help-what should I do next? I need to revise this story, because I agree with the reviews, it does move way too fast. I'm open to anything!

Thanks for sticking with me and my ups and downs for these past few years, it means so much to me

-lifeisbooks

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New update: I saw reading through my story, and I'm going to make some major changes. As someone who wanted to kill themselves, having Clary do it over something so insignificant is honestly insulting to people who are actually in or have gone through that situation. I'm sorry for my insensitivity, and I will be trying to develop the story to make it more realistic.