Okay everyone, it's that time again. I'm going to keep rolling with chapter 13, 24 and so on being our sit down chapters.

9 MAY 18

So I trimmed some of the stuff down below, here are some key points to take away in the story right now!

-Marco's eyes: We seen them change first in chapter, I Still Got It. Then just before walking into the Throne Room to meet the Queen and King with Star and family on tow, last was on when he lost Asuka and now in the current state he is in after looking at the painting of the Jinko.

The eye color is black, not the whites. That just shows to others that he's hurting on the inside or that he's ready for battle.

-Asuka: Like I said before, she is dead and following him. With the last flashback, we understand she was able to talk to the dead. That and in the chapter, The Dark Land. That showed what happened to her after she died.

In Death and Rebirth, those were the moments leading up to her confronting Marco at the castle on how she died.

So now, if you want to read it and fully understand everything. Go by this order!

-The Great Falls: PART TWO

-The Dark Land

-Death and Rebirth

-I Still Got It: When he is walking with the guards checking out the paintings.

Been wanting to clear this up for sometime now!

All the chapters stayed the same during the clean up, all the way to chapter, I Still Got It with him fighting the Knight armor in Star's room on Earth.

It's not a new story, just fixing all the issues I thought were major plot holes!

One more thing, this clean up job started with 84.7K words for the whole story. Right now we sit about 93.6K with two new chapters added in. So the story has moved along, just a lot of back tracking to get it right.

There should be a new chapter after the clean up and I hope to hit about 98K words when that happens! I still got a lot of work in front of me, but I'm working on it everyday.

The story hits one year old on the 24th!

Hope there isn't any issues left in the story to bug you guys, as of this point today!

Last thing, some of the chapter names have been some of my past stories I deleted... They might come back one day... maybe.

If you know my work, then you'll be able to spot them out!

I would like to start off by saying, this story has really taken a life of its own. You guys have really made this a simple cute story of Marco becoming a father with ONE child to this whole twisted mess of how broken he really is.

Truly… thank you so much for all your reviews, favorites, PM's and followings. Never in a billion years would I ever thought I could make something like this. It makes me wonder if I'm more than just a mechanic that loves blood, guts, sex and danger! I LIVE MY LIFE AS A 63 RANGER!

Sorry...

It burns so deeply in me to have people talk about this story and share it with other while saying, "This is some really fucked up shit, BUT I WANT MORE!?" My all time favorite story is Nothing Will Ever Change That by YoungBoch. Everyday I write, I keep wanting my story to meet that caliber one day.

We also have These New Feelings by Jim Hard that my first true M rated story that got me to reading SVTFOE FanFics. 16 Crazy Years by PatatoLife is a new upcoming story that just has me on the edge of my seat wanting more.

9 MAY 18

Whatever happened to 16 Crazy Years?

Like Father, Like Daughter by ADdude… wow, this story is so amazing and he has been so instrumental to my idea making process. Now at this point, at least 50% of this story wouldn't be here without him and I plan to add his name to the summary as a Co-Author.

9 MAY 18

Which I did!

Now let's move onto the story, I know for a fact Asuka is driving this story down a dark road.

She was mostly there to be female he fucked… that was the plan, but God she really made things into a huge fucking mess. I said I wanted to dig more with Marco and his PTSD, she had made it so easy to show you guys a some a small glimpse of what I deal with on a daily basis.

There's really a lot of me in this story and it's odd how at one minute everything is nice and making you guys go, "Awwwww!" Then showing how dark a human soul can be. Everything that happens in our life, good or bad will leave a mark. My goal is to show you how a real monster of flesh and bone thinks and feels.

Ya'll know by now how hard Asuka's death hit me, but I couldn't leave her at that, I never had someone die in my arms… I have seen grown men cry before death takes them. It's horrible how the eyes are the first things to show you death has settled into its new home.

It hasn't been all bad with this part of the story, Miia and Ryoko have been there to lighten the mood some and wasn't afraid to show how much they wanted him. Marco is a real ladies man even if he doesn't know that. The man get's pussy thrown at him left and right lol.

I know it might be hard to see Marco as a drunk, but he isn't drinking because of his demons or anything like that. I like to drink, and as an adult, I have to work with people I hate. Drinking is much better than belting one off on a prick seeing how that's frown upon.

Plus drinking calms his mind to just relax and enjoy the fact of just being alive. I think the women around him takes advantage of this fact every chance they get!

Gidget, Ember and Maria make me smile so much every time I write about them, as a father, there's no greater joy in this life than to hold your child knowing that they'll love you forever… as long as you don't fuck it up.

Hekapoo, Star and Janna… I think I've moved away from what they are on the show… well everyone but Hekapoo. When I write about her, I feel that's what she would have said or done on the show. Star and Janna, well we all change the older we get. I think I'm making Star out to be weak and I need to change that more back to her fun loving self with a hint of super badassness.

Janna is my second favorite (Star and Hekapoo hold the number one spot!) she is so great and I love how in the show's new intro. She's just laying on her stomach wiggling her feet on the phone. Plus I feel when she gets older, she will be more of a perv with Marco. When he's with Star, she going to bang the fuck out of him and Star will be part of it.

I hope you guys saw more into the comment of:

"Claim down there killer, it's just a funny thought of a cult out there somewhere worshiping you!" The other people in the bar was scared shitless but her.

OneClickGod has come out with a great idea for it and this is just the stepping stone.

The wedding is coming up soon, but I don't know what to do. Like does he just marry Star to show them as the new King and Queen? Then have a side one for each Hekapoo and Janna or have them together. There's also have all three lovers being at the first wedding, the hell with the people of Mewni and what they think!

Nameless Dude: Are we going to get a conversation between Asuka and Marco's wives and finally Asuka herself telling him to move on?

It won't be a simple, "Hey guys… what's up" Ya know? She will have a special goodbye for all of them, but I think the next chapter will be more on her talking about the time she had with him and say, "I love you" Who knows, I haven't put much thought into it yet.

Make an account and give me a damn hand with this!?

I think I said a lot and I'll keep an eye on your reviews if there's anymore before the next chapter, be sure to check on this one for a response.

Don't forget to leave a review and thank you. Wow… this was as long pretty damn long lol.