Disclaimer: I do not own Total Drama Island, action or the Season That Must Never Be Named. I also do not own the alphabet theme; that belongs to Frank15 and his incredible story Total Drama Alphabet. I do however own all twenty eight OC's in this story and I would like it if you did not steal them ok? Thank you.

The warning: This chapter contain a sociopath bully, one use of the f word, a little blood, a lot of love, sad moments and a giant pinball table. You have been warned though it is nothing M rated nor will it ever be.

Pairings: SpiderxQuana BarneyxLavender JimmyxEleanor AndyxMable GaryxRaven VinniexUzuri OscarxXaria

Crag's interesting Fact: Jimmy, despite being the youngest character, was in fact the first to be created. He was one of the main five characters in a script series I wrote a few years ago called 'the preteen scamps'. The other main characters are the friends he mentions from time to time. Bet you didn't know that … unless you've seen me say that on Deviantart.

Note: Howdy everyone! I've just finish my LAST math test in high school … and as I have no intention to study it in 6th form and college I might never have to sit another math test again! Woohoo! Yeah! I hope those of you who cry easily have your tissues ready because this chapter is very emotional and I felt sad writing it. You might all despise Kasimar more once you've finished reading this chapter. But this story isn't a tragedy, angst or horror fanfic … it WILL have a happy ending, I promise.

Moral Event Horizon on the horizon


"And we're back." Said Chris with a wave to the camera. "Sorry to keep you waiting … not!"

"As I said; a *cough* seven second pause." Said Spider while slightly swaying on the spot.

"Oh shut up germ sponge!" Snapped Chris. "What you think isn't important; you're just cannon fodder so the best people can go far!"

"Like me." Smirked Kasimar.

"Actually I meant me." Bragged Chris before shrugging. "But whatever floats your boat I guess."

"The boat Kasimar will be riding on by the end of the day." Said Lavender with crossed arms.

"If he doesn't win immunity that is." Smirked Chris. "And speaking of immunity I think its time to see who is the second person to have their turn on the pinball table."

Chris reached into the hat containing coins with the campers faces on them and took out a coin with a picture of Jimmy's face on it.

"Well; looks like it's the shrimps turn." Said Chris as he tossed the coin into the beach's sand. "Seriously; he's so damn short! Is he a midget or something?"

"I'm ten years old Chris; I haven't had my growth spurt yet." Said Jimmy flatly as he went to get into a ball to start his turn on the pinball table; hopefully he would do better in this challenge than he had in the army challenge the previous day.

"Shrimp!" Yelled Chris after Jimmy before somebody through a rock at his head. "Ow! Which one of you meanies did that? Huh?"

Nobody said anything which made Chris frown angrily.


Confessional: Total Drama Rock! Does he know Mr. Coconut?

Chris: I'm really getting tired of these idiotic teens … they're so bland and uninteresting. Sure; Kasimar is fine … but even he pales in comparison to the super extremely amazingly awesome me! After all; I'm why people watch this show; unlike these idiots I've appeared in every episode!

Chef: Except the challenge last season when I got the pleasure of eliminating that punk! Chris has a bad memory indeed.

Eleanor: You got me; I threw the rock, I don't want Chris bullying Jimmy. Is it just me or is Chris acting his shoe size instead of his age. And by that I mean he has size two shoes.

Xaria: Good one Eleanor.

Kasimar: This ought to be funny; Jimmy is about as strong as a girl and about as much of a danger to me as a mud pie.


Jimmy was quickly put inside the ball and shot into the arena. As he was the lightest camper the bumpers were having a slight bit more of an effect on him than they did on Uzuri.

PING PONG PING!

Those were the sounds of the bumpers ricocheting Jimmy around the pinball table and racking up points on his total score. Jimmy was quickly knocked off his feet and bashed around the pinball table. Jimmy then hit a bumper near the bottom of the table and was whacked back up to the top of the table for even more discomfort and vomit inducing breakneck speed.


Confessional: Dizzy snizzy!

Jimmy: (His eyes are swirling around in circles). Look at all the stars … ouch.


Jimmy was going around so fast that his hat had come off and now his very long messy blond hair was flowing around as he and the glass ball he was in bounced around the place and hit another bumper. As Jimmy went up the railings to the raised platform Uzuri had got to be looked down at the contestants below.

"You're a maniac Chris Maclean!" Yelled Jimmy as his ball rolled full speed towards the bottom of the pinball table.

CLANG!

Unfortunately Jimmy whacked into the flippers on the way down and once again fell over inside his ball as it rolled out of the pinball table and into the exit area below.


Confessional: That HAD to hurt.

Kasimar: Yahahaha! Hilarious! If only the little twerp had broken his neck and the dead body got splattered. It'd be one less camper to worry about.


Jimmy walked dizzily up to the other campers and was met with applause. As he put his hat back on and cleared his head Chris was handed Jimmy's score by an intern.

"Ok; I have to say that I thought jimmy was going to die up there! Haha!" Laughed Chris sadistically as he looked at the paper. "I guess being small isn't really a benefit … but Jimmy; you did ok with a total score of Fifteen thousand and twenty one points; that's a good score but not enough to beat Uzuri. For now Jimmy takes second place and loses any chance at the special prize … so it sucks to be Jimmy! Haha!"

"What's so bad with second?" Asked Quana.

"Shut up!" Whined Chris. "I don't have to take flip from a friggin girl!"

"I recommend you don't continue that rant Chris." Glowered Xaria while holding a fist up threateningly.

"Sorry!" Whimpered Chris wimpily as Carlton.

"That's better." Said Xaria.


Confessional: Chris is a word that rhymes with gas hole.

Xaria: I don't like misogynists very much; Chris is no exception to that.


"Ok then; the next person who is going on the pinball table is going to be…

Barney." Said Chris as he took a coin with Barney's face on it out of the hat. "Let's see how good the pirate weirdo does at pinball!"

"He's not a pirate weirdo!" Growled Lavender. "He's MY pirate weirdo thank you very much!"

"Thanks Lavender." Said Barney with a tip of his hat. "Wish me luck me hearties!"

Barney dashed off to get into the ball as Nakia scoffed to herself.

"Anybody who can be that positive all the time and be, like, so incredibly ugly must be retarded or something." Said Nakia as he looked at Barney with disdain.

"I don't insult your boyfriend." Said Lavender. "Oh wait; you don't have one and I doubt you ever will."

"Oh please, I could get with any of these losers in a heartbeat; I just don't like the selection I have." Shrugged Nakia.

"Because you're a shallow brat." Nodded Lavender.

"No! Because they're ugly!" Snapped Nakia.

"I repeat; because you're a shallow brat.

Nakia just scowled as she started to brush her hair to sooth her temper.


Confessional: Hair brushes act like Scooby snacks!

Nakia: Everyone here is not only mean but they are ugly … unlike yours truly; for the first time there will be a pretty winner as I plan on bringing home the prize. Besides; the fan base loves me I bet. And I don't blame them; I'm gorgeous!

Lavender: Nakia. Is. So. Bloody. Annoying!

Xaria: I think I was better off spending more than a week on Kasimar's team than just three days with that brat.

Chef: Hair gets you nowhere in life; I should know, I was in NAAM!


Barney was shot into the pinball arena and quickly smashed through a row of barrels and bricks. He bounced between the bumpers at quite a speed and passed over a flashy spot on the ground. Barney ran into a bumper and shot to the top of the pinball table and hit a golden button which shot fireworks out of the scoreboard. As Barney tore up around the pinball table the others were looking on in amazement at how good he was doing.

"Its been thirty seconds and I think he's done enough to beat Jimmy and Uzuri already." Noted Mable.

It looked like Mable was right as Barney was managing to stay on his feet and was doing as good at Pinball as Killerhurtz in Robot Wars series two at the skittles trial. In other words he was doing very good indeed.

"This is just like bumper cars yaaaar" Cheered Barney as he bounced between the bumpers again.

The pirate and secret genius teen ran through a gate and a few electronic beeping sounds emitted from around the board as he hit a bumper on the wall and went up the railings and down back onto the table. Barney held onto his hat with both hands while his blond dreadlocks flew about his head.

After few moments Barney hit the bumpers one last time before being bounced down into the exit zone to the large applause of almost everybody for his great pinball skills.

"Woohoo! Beat that Kasimar! I dare you!" Cheered Barney as he got out of his ball and surprisingly walked in a straight line out of the exit zone and to the others.

"You did great Barney!" Congratulated Lavender.

"If we can all get scores *cough* like that Kasimar doesn't stand *cough* stand a single chance!" Clapped Spider.

"You could even get first place." Said Quana as she high fived Barney.

"Can we get the attention and compliments back to where they should be … me!" Whined Chris with a stomp of his foot. "Well; I think its fairly obvious that Barney has scored the highest out of the competitors so far … but do you know his score?"

"Well of course we don't; you haven't told us." Said Xaria with an eye roll.

"Shut up bumble bee!"

Xaria scowled but shot back anther insult.

"Shut up! You'll never be the man your mother is!" Said Xaria with a confident smirk.


Confessional: But a mother isn't a guy in the first place … I don't get it.

Chris: (He is wailing and crying his eyes out like a baby).

Xaria: Chris makes it almost too easy to annoy him … and you all know he deserves it.


"Shut up bumble bee! I can make your life miserable now that Oscar is gone!" snarled Chris.

"And what happens when he next sees you?" Asked Xaria.

Chris realized he had lost the argument and pouted.

"You're not nice." Muttered Chris as he looked at a piece of paper another intern had handed him. "Oh; and Barney's score is indeed the highest so far. He has scored a total of…

Twenty four thousand, eight hundred and fifty one points!"

Barney cheered and pumped his fists in the air; he felt confident that he had done enough to at least get immunity.

"Yaaaar! I think I be having a good chance at winning this one!" Whooped Barney.

"Good job Barney." Complimented Tabitha. "I think you really could win this challenge."

"Thanks Tabitha." Smiled Barney.


Confessional: I wonder if the prize is a Macdonald's coupon.

Tabitha: Getting on Barney's good side is a wise move because most of the others like him and he's also a strong competitor, a rare combination. Still … the whole pirate thing makes him seem really eccentric … though not as much a freak as Uzuri.

Barney: I have a good feeling in my gut and its definitely not this morning's blue and pink pancakes.

Andy: If Tabitha gets Barney on her side there's no telling what bad things she could get away with. I've got to do something … maybe … maybe if I told Uzuri when Tabitha isn't around I could start her downfall.

Eleanor: I kinda doubt I can beat Barney's score … but Uzuri and Jimmy have the right idea; its about having fun … though immunity would be nice.


"Ok; the fourth person to play Pinball Peril is Lavender." Said Chris as he took a coin with Lavenders face on it out of the hat. "Can she beat her boyfriend? Or will she dwelve into the deep sea of mediocrocy? Let's find out!"

"You're the one who's mediocre." Said Lavender as she left to get into a ball and score some points.

"She's got you there Chris." Said Mable with a smirk.

"Stop bullying me!" Screamed Chris in anger.


Confessional: Bully wooly.

Mable: And yet he doesn't think that he's been bullying us?

Jimmy: Chris is mean.


Lavender got into her ball and was pinged up into the score zone; instantly she maneuvered her ball into a gold bumper at the side of the pinball table; she rebounded off it and bounced between a fair number of the bright colored bumpers and scored a very reasonable number of points whilst doing so. Lavender kept her balance just as Barney had done and racked up more points through the use of colorful floor panels, bumpers and gates.

"Xaria's right." Said Lavender. "This challenge is easy; I doubt anyone could get hurt from this."


Confessional: You'd think that … but are you right?

Lavender: Chris must be losing his touch; this challenge wasn't even a quarter as bad as yesterday's challenge … is Chris being merciful to lull us into a false sense of security?

Chris: No; I could make this challenge very dangerous if I wanted to … but I've set the bumper power to low so you can't get but … but if it was set to maximum … haha!


Lavender bounced off another bumper and knocked into a set of six barrels arranged in a triangular fashion; the barrels were sent flying as though they weighed less than a single gram. Lavender managed to run up the table and hit a bumper which shot her up to a platinum bumper at the top of the pinball table. Lavenders ball was travelling at quite a speed and hit a lone bumper quite hard which sent Lavender towards the bottom of the arena and into the exit arena which ended her run.

"My head feels like a merry go round at the carnival." Said Lavender as a dizzy feeling entered her noggin as she slowly made her way back to the rest of the campers in a slightly lopsided walk.

"Boy Lavender; you look as stupid as a guy named Bob with an expression like that!" Laughed Chris. "Are all red heads that lame?"

Barney walked up to Chris and held a threatening fist to his face.

"For your own safety me adversary I advise you to shut up yaaar!" Threatened Barney which really scared Chris.

"Eep! Um, err … anyway; Lavender did quite well with a total of …

Twenty thousand and eighty points."

"Alright!" Cheered Lavender. "That means I'm in second place then."

"Indeed it does." Said Chris. "But you won't get the special prize! Haha!"

"Who cares about the prize?" Asked Lavender. "It's probably not worth the effort anyway."

"…I really don't like you." Scowled Chris.


Confessional: Why does he hate her anyway?

Chris: (Censored to the power of infinity).


"Ok; I think its time for the fifth person." Said Chris as he reached into the hat and took out a coin with Nakia's face on it. "Nakia; you're up!"

"I don't want to do this." Whined Nakia. "Last time I was in a ball I got covered in itching powder."

"Wallace is not here now so there is no chance of that happening; if you don't do it then you're going to be kicked off the game again." Threatened Chris impatiently.

"Ok! I'm going!" Said Nakia in fear as she quickly ran to get into a ball.


Confessional: Threats always work.

Nakia: I don't wanna lose!


Nakia was shot into the arena in her ball and quickly lost her footing and hit a bumper. Nakia was catapulted across the pinball table into a spinner and after a couple tens of speedy rotations she was thrown out at quite a speed and smacked into the other side of the pinball table. Nakia could be heard screaming, this was because her hair was getting messed up which was something that caused her to go into hysterics.

"Heeeeeeeeelp!" Wailed Nakia as she was tossed around in her ball.

Nakia hit a bumper one more time and quickly fell downwards to the bottom of the pinball table and to the exit which ended her rather disappointing and poor run.


Confessional: A Smore beats a low score.

Tabitha: Nakia is a whiner and very stupid … but I need her vote … one of these days I can really see myself telling her she has outlived her usefulness.


Nakia was shaking as and brushing her hair as she walked back to the others; nobody cheered for her as nobody really liked her that much. Nakia just soothed herself with an extended hair brushing session.

"Well then … I think it's fairly clear that Nakia didn't do to well." Laughed Chris. "And what's more her hair looks ugly!"

"Don't call my hair ugly you meanie!" Snarled Nakia.

"I guess the quality of your hair doesn't really affect a person's challenge performance then." Said Eleanor.

"Good point." Agreed Jimmy. "Barney has got allegedly bad hair and is winning; Nakia says she has good hair and didn't do to well I think."

"Exactly." Nodded Eleanor.

"Could you runts be quiet?" Asked Chris stropilly. "I need to announce Nakia's score!"

"We're not stopping you." Said Jimmy.

"Shut up!" Barked Chris. "Anyway … Nakia failed to beat Barney's high score by quite a noticeable margin as her score has ended as a grand total of…

Two thousand, eight hundred and sixty one points. A pretty poor performance if you ask me."

"I want a do over!" Demanded Nakia.

"Sorry she devil lass … but page sixty seven, paragraph ten line three clearly states … no do over's." Said Barney with a confident expression.

Nakia crossed her arms and glared at Barney in fury.


Confessional: Learn to take a loss; it's good for you!

Barney: My personal philosophy is … A life without failure is a life without experience. I've failed at things a lot me hearties and by failing I've learned something … trial, fail and succeed me hearties!


"Now that Nakia has just flat out blown her chances of winning the challenge or immunity we can move onto the next person to have a go." Said Chris as he once again reached into the hat and took out a coin with Tabitha's face on it. "Looks like its Tabitha's turn next."

Andy knew this was his chance to tell Uzuri about Tabitha and smiled to himself. Tabitha noticed this and unbeknownst to anyone she signaled Kasimar with her eyes while she walked to start her chance to win ever important immunity.

Kasimar immediately got the message; she wanted him to keep an eye on Andy to see what he did next. Sadly Tabitha hadn't ordered him to maul him … but that could wait a while.

"Be right back." Said Andy as he walked behind the others and tapped Uzuri on the back as he passed her. Uzuri followed Andy while wondering what he wanted to say.


Confessional: Try to see the truth.

Andy: This is my chance; I can bring Tabitha's alliance crashing down … and you know; if she doesn't win immunity she might be gone today!

Tabitha: Andy had better keep his mouth shut; I haven't forgotten my threat … and if he blabs then I have every intention of keeping my word. Besides; I doubt Uzuri will believe him anyway.


As soon as Andy and Uzuri were a fair distance from the others and out of sight Andy stopped walking and turned to Uzuri.

"Uzuri; I've got something really important to tell you … and this might come as a shock." Said Andy hesitantly.

"What is it … do you have a crush on me?" Asked Uzuri with a giggle.

"No; I don't. You're with Vinnie … and I like someone else." Said Andy quickly. "You see … this is about Tabitha."

"What about her?" Asked Uzuri sounding surprised. "Do you know something embarrassing about her?"

"Not exactly … I'm not sure how to say this … but Tabitha is playing you; she's using you Uzuri." Said Andy seriously and apologetically.

"What?" Said Uzuri in a flat sounding voice.

"It's true … she's been manipulating everyone. She was the one who put apple juice in Spider's drink in the eating challenge."

"Andy…" Said Uzuri as she trailed off but it looked like she wanted to say something.

"I know you thought she was your friend … but she isn't." Said Andy apologetically.

"…Liar!" Growled Uzuri in a very rare display of anger.

"Huh?" Said Andy as he hadn't expected that.

"I can't believe this; you're trying to get me on your side and vote my friend off! I know this is reality television but that sort of lying is wrong!" Said Uzuri as she advanced on Andy and he backed away into a tree and she held up a finger to his face and pointed threateningly.

"Tabitha is a nice girl! She hasn't done anything wrong; maybe you're jealous! Or are you just greedy for the million?" Asked Uzuri in a huff. "Oh and Andy … you've got my vote tonight if you don't win immunity!"

Uzuri turned on her heel and stormed back to the challenge while Andy stood silent before groaning to himself.

"Taking down Tabitha may be a little harder than I first thought." Mumbled the Asian astronaut to be.

As Andy trudged back to the challenge after Uzuri he didn't realize that Kasimar had been hidden from sight and had heard everything. Kasimar smirked to himself.

"Oh Andy; naughty, naughty! Tabitha won't like this!" Smirked Kasimar.


Confessional: Oh no … this is gonna be a problem…

Andy: That didn't go as I planned … but at least Tabitha didn't hear it … unless Uzuri tells her. But maybe she won't. Aw man, I didn't expect that to happen.

Uzuri: Maybe Andy has Tabitha confused with Kasimar. I don't like liars and Andy is telling a big old porky pete!

Kasimar: I hope Tabitha lets me hurt Mable … I've been itching to break her arms and ankles ever since she puked in my face.


"And Tabitha has scored an impressive nineteen thousand two hundred and twenty points." Said Chris. "Not enough to beat Barney or Lavender but enough for immunity I'd say."

"What can I say Chris? It's all about balance." Said Tabitha with a very false humble smile.

As Tabitha rejoined the group Uzuri walked up with a frown on her face and Andy followed; Uzuri shot a brief glare at Andy and Tabitha immediately realized that she had not believed any of what Andy had told her. She still had her pawn; her puppet if you will.

"Ok then losers; the next person to attempt the challenge is going to be …

Spider." Said Chris as he took a coin with Spider's face on it out of the hat.

"Fine by me; this *cough* sounds fun." Shrugged Spider.


Confessional: I'm skeptical about that part myself.

Spider: It also sounds *cough* like a very good chance to lose *cough* more fat.

Andy: Now's probably a good time to talk to Barney about something that's been bugging me today.


While Spider went to start his run on the pinball table Andy approached Barney while not noticing Tabitha glancing at him calculatingly.

"Hey Barney; I need to talk to you about something important." Whispered Andy. "Like right now."

"Not a problem me heartie." Said Barney as he took out a signpost with the word 'BRB' on it and put it into the sand. "Be right back that means."

As Andy and barney walked a distance away behind a large boulder Tabitha gave Kasimar another signal with her eyes.


Confessional: Putting a tail on them … and I don't mean like pin the tail on the donkey ok?

Barney: From the look on me hearties face I'd say he is having troubles with his feelings for Mable … aye; well, I'm always ready to help a friend so help him I shall!


"So Andy boy." Said Barney once they were out of earshot from the others. "What's up? And I don't mean the sky me heartie."

"Well … I've got a lot on my mind … and I'm having a few doubts." Said Andy uncertainly. "…About Mable."

Kasimar was listening from the other side of the rock and silently cackled that his mind games were working.

"Really? But why yaaaar? I thought you loved her." Said Barney sounding concerned.

"I do … its just … does she love me? I mean; she's always nice to me and I've seen her wink at me before … but…" Andy trailed off.

"But what?" Asked barney while hanging on Andy's every word.

"What if it's just an act? What if Mable is just pretending to like me so that she can further herself in the game; other people in shows like this have done similar things." Said Andy with a sad sigh. "And do I really know the true her?"

"Well … what do you think of Mable me heartie?" Asked Barney.

"Well … I think she's pretty and not only tough and strong but also compassionate and a genuinely nice person; I love her … but … when Kasimar-." Began Andy.

"Hold up; did Kasimar say something to you?" Asked Barney with a sudden firm tone at the thought of the horrible bully.

"Yes; he said how do I know Mable isn't faking it so she can use me to help her win the million. He also said he knows her better than he as he's on her team." Explained Andy.

"Ok; I speak as your best friend here me heartie … I am positively purple that Mable has feelings for you; I've seen her glance at you and also you two get along great. And your heart is telling you that you love the blue haired sea lass … and who are you going to listen to? Your heart and your best friend … or a raging sociopath yaaar?" Asked Barney kindly.

"…My heart and you." Said Andy as he started to smile.

"Exactly; it seems to me that Kasimar was just trying to mess with your head and throw you off your game because he sees you as a threat. Don't listen to him; just follow your own feelings and you'll get a happily ever after … it worked for me yaaar!" Said barney proudly.

"Thanks Barney; my spirits feel completely rejuvenated now." Said Andy gratefully. "And can I ask you something?"

"Obviously; you just asked me then! But ask anything else too." Said Barney.

"Are you an A student? You have the intelligence of a prodigy!" Said Andy.

Barney gulped; he was cornered now … but Andy was his best friend so Barney could tell him.

"I'll let you in on a secret me heartie … I'm on the honor roll back at school and I get straight A's." explained Barney. "I was embarrassed about people thinking of me as a geek though … as somebody uncool."

"Barney … you are anything but uncool." Said Andy.

"Thanks yaaar … you know; that wasn't so hard to admit; maybe I'll tell the others after the challenge." Smiled Barney.

"If you want to … now let's get back to the challenge; I don't want to miss my turn." Said Andy as he and Barney left back to the pinball table.


Confessional: Heartwarming Alert!

Andy: I feel a lot better now … the problem with Tabitha remains … but I think I'll tell Mable how I feel now; and Barney might be right, she could feel the same way as me.

Barney: you've done good barney … you've done good.

Kasimar: #bleep#! Darn it! That stupid pirate ruined everything! Oh how I want to dissect him like a dead pig! Grrrr!


Kasimar stood in a concealed spot behind the rock for a moment as Andy and barney disappeared from his view. Tabitha walked up to him a moment later with a thoughtful look on her face.

"Kasimar; I can't figure it out." Said Tabitha.

"Figure what out? Why the government hasn't fell yet?" Asked Kasimar.

"No … how is Spider doing so good at the challenges? He won immunity yesterday and he just scored fifteen thousand and three points! How is he doing so well despite being so ill?" Asked Tabitha in bewilderment.

Kasimar blanched and began explaining.,

"Yeah … that might have something to do with me." Said Kasimar idly.

"What did you do this time?" Asked Tabitha will a grumble.

"I managed to convince him that Quana thought he was fat and was going to leave him; he's been exercising like mental since early yesterday … its no problem though."

"How is it not?" Asked Tabitha incredulously. "He could keep winning immunity!"

"Have you seen how pale he is? If he keeps this up he's going to hurt himself! I bet he'll have heart attack by the end of the day." Smirked Kasimar. "Trust me."

"I don't trust you as far as I can throw you." Said Tabitha with an eye roll. "but I'll take your word for it this time … so; what did Andy say to Uzuri?"

"He tried to tell her about you're actions but she didn't believe him." Shrugged Kasimar. "Want me to maul Mable?"

"Sure … but try not to break her limbs irreparably ok?" Said Tabitha with crossed arms.

"Sure, sure, whatever." Said Kasimar as he left back to the challenge.


Confessional: Never trust a murderous sociopath; they'll only backstab you in the end.

Tabitha: That explains a lot ... but Kasimar is taking it too far; a heart attack might be fatal! Neither me and Kasimar are that nice but I don't want anyone to die … Kasimar on the other hand…

Kasimar: I hope Bug dies! Yahahahaha!


Spider had scored decently in his run but he looked less than well; he was white as a white sheet and his breathing was hard and unsteady. Quana was standing beside him in great concern.

"Are you alright spider? Do you need a lie down? You look really unwell." Said Quana to her boyfriend.

"I'm *cough* ok; I just *gasp* pushed myself too *choke* hard in the challenge." Said Spider as she swayed a little.

"I think you did more than that; come on Spider, use your inhaler and have a rest; you look like a train wreck."

"Do I?" Mumbled Spider before he started to sway more noticeably before he collapsed unconscious on the sand.

"SPIDER!" Cried Quana. "Are you ok?"

"Of course he's not ok stupid!" Said Chris before laughing sadistically. "Oh boy! He's passed out again! Haha! If it happens a third time then it'll be a running gag; haha!"

Chef walked up and punched Chris in the arm.

"Ow!" wailed Chris.

Chef picked Spider up over his shoulder.

"Don't worry singer; I'll see what's wrong with him; you can see him after the challenge." Said Chef in a surprisingly nice voice ass he carried Spider away.

"…Well that resolved itself nicely." Chuckled Nakia.

"Are you still holding onto that grudge?" Asked Quana in disgust. "Let it go! You're being friggin pathetic!"

"Watch it you Hispanic h-."

"If you finish that sentence I'll kick your ass like I did this morning." Growled Quana.

Nakia whimpered in fright and looked away silently while Quana looked at her unconscious boyfriend being carried away.

"What's going on Spider?" Whispered Quana.


Confessional: It's only gonna get worse.

Spider: …At the very least *cough* the sand was a *cough* soft landing. I was unconscious for *cough* hours … I'm such a weakling.

Quana: As much as I'd have liked to sit beside Spider's bed until he awakened Chris said if I left the challenge I would immediately walk the dock of shame. (Quana sniffles sadly). It's the eating challenge all over again.


Chris reached into the hat and took out a coin with Xaria's face on it.

"It's time for the bumblebee to make some honey!" Jeered Chris.

"My name isn't bumble bee!" Growled Xaria. "It's Xaria Josie Clark!"

"Whatever! You're still going to lose the challenge!" Sneered Chris.

"Oh yeah? I'm gonna win this; I'll show you!" Smirked Xaria as she went to get into a ball.

Confessional: Show him what? A rock?


Xaria: (Smirking victoriously). I sure showed him.

Chris: (Looking stunned). She sure showed me.


Xaria was blasted into the pinball table; she instantly gained control of the ball and began to smash down barrels and hit bumpers in a very quick speed. She bounced off another bumper and onto the railings before coming down from them and going through a gate. Xaria hit a hidden red button on the side of the arena which opened a gate that contained a rainbow colored bumper; Xaria hit in and triggered many flashing lights as she began to bounce around the bumpers some more. As Xaria continued to rack up a high score Chris could only watch in disbelief.


Confessional: The call of the pinball. Roar!

Xaria: I wasn't lying when I said I was good at pinball.

Eleanor: Go Xaria! Show Chris who's boss! What kind of a childhood did that mean man have anyway?


Xaria exited the pinball table and approached the others a few minutes later; she was met with thunderous applause and a stunned look on Chris's smug snake face.

"How … how." Stammered Chris as he looked at the paper showing Xaria's score.

"Jealous?" Smirked Xaria. "So … what's my score Chris?"

"… You got … forty thousand, nine hundred and eighty points. That puts you in first place by quite a considerable margin." Said Chris begrudgingly. "Looks like you're not getting voted off tonight."

"Good." Smiled Xaria as she rejoined the others with her hands in her pockets.

"You're still a bumblebee though! Haha!" Laughed Chris in an attempt to upset Xaria.

"Oh go to hell Chris." Said Xaria with an eye roll at Chris's immaturity.


Confessional: Say hi to the man in red for me Chris!

Mable: Looks like Lavender and Xaria are both through; I just hope I can do the same … if not it isn't like the other would vote for me instead of Kasimar or Nakia, right?


"Next up to risk their life for points is Andy." Said Chris as he took a coin with Andy's face on it out of the hat. "I think I'm going to really enjoy this! Haha!"

"Just like I'll enjoy your annual end of season karma." Said Andy as he approached the pinball table to begin his turn in the challenge.


Confessional: I'm looking forward to it as well! Mwuhahaha!

Andy: Thanks to Barney I feel as though my mojo is back to bursting point; I think I'll tell Mable how I feel after the challenge … and nether of us are to get voted off. Nakia is definitely not going to win immunity so I think its her time to walk the dock of shame.

Nakia: Why is everyone so jealous and mean? They should act their age and do what they are supposed to do … let me win!


Andy was launched up into the pinball table; with a new sense of determination he began to hit bumpers and floor spots that gave him a goodly amount of points. Andy knocked over barrels like a bowling ball and rode up a ramp and down the other side into a bumper. Andy maneuvered his ball like a pro as he went over a spinning part of the floor which sent him into a quartet of green and purple bumpers with quite some force. Andy began to bounce along them and after about twelve seconds of this he was blasted out and rolled quickly to the bottom of the table but not before slamming down another barrel.


Confessional: Donkey Kong! That would be a really good challenge.

Andy: I not only think I did well at that challenge but I also enjoyed it; most of the challenges Chris sets for us are pretty nasty … like the torture challenge which I would very much like to forget ever happened.


Andy arrived back to the group and was met with applause. Andy smiled modestly as another random intern handed Chris a piece of paper which had Andy's score on it.

"Well Andy; you may be first alphabetically but you didn't come first." Sneered Chris.

"You scored a grand total of…

Fourteen thousand points exactly. I somehow doubt you're going to get immunity tonight! Haha!"

"Lets see you do any better then Chris." Said Andy calmly.

"Are you crazy? I could get hurt!" Said Chris in fear.

"Fair enough scaredy cat." Said Andy as he stood with the others beside Mable who smiled at him.

"I am not a scaredy cat you big mean meanie face!" Barked Chris pathetically as usual.

After a moment of silence the twelve campers burst into laughter at Chris while Chris just stomped his feet angrily.


Confessional: I won't miss Chris.

Chris: Grrrrrrrrrrrrr!

Quana: Is it just me or is Chris getting more immature, dumb and angry everyday? I'd answer in the affirmative … I can't get my mind off Spider; I hope he's ok.


"Ok; we've still got a few people who have yet to go." Said Chris as he once again reached into the hat; this time he came out with a coin that had Quana's face on it. "Ok Quana; you're up … but I doubt you'll do that good with your pathetic boyfriend being crippled and all! Haha!"

Quana scowled as she walked past Chris and punched him in the face.


Confessional: POW! Right in the kisser!

Quana: I really don't like it when Chris insults Spider; I don't insult his girlfriend … oh wait; he doesn't have one and probably never will.


Quana started her run on the pinball table but even as she started scoring points and bumpers her mind was definitely elsewhere. Was Spider alright? This was the second time he had passed out so far … and this time he could he even worse off than last time. Quana really cared about Spider and he was special to her. It appalling the way Nakia treated him and Quana did not want Nakia to get the last laugh.

Quana hit the bumpers and went through a gate thus scoring more points. But her heart didn't seem to be in it anymore; a minute later she bounced of a large bumper and rolled down to the exit area and ended her turn.


Confessional: Turn around please.

Spider: I wish I could have seen Quana's turn in the pinball machine; she probably did great.


"Boy Quana; you didn't do so well … not that I'd expect any different for a ditz." Said Chris as he looked at the paper with Quana's score. "You scored better than Nakia though with a total of …

Twelve thousand five hundred and twenty points. Not enough for immunity or the prize though! Nyeh!" Laughed Chris in an attempt to get a reaction out of Quana.

"Whatever." Said Quana not caring about what Chris said in the slightest.

"Hey! You're supposed to get upset! CRY DAMMIT!" Roared Chris in frustration.

"Why not you?" Asked Barney. "You've cried in the confessional enough me land lubber crybaby."

"…Shut up!" Whined Chris.


Confessional: Rough day for Mr. Maclean.

Chris: (Howling and crying like a little baby). Why is everyone being so mean to me? I'm the main character! They're just meanies! Waaaaaaah! Boo hoo!

Xaria: Props to Barney for making Chris cry; I can see why Lavender likes him so much.


"Ok then; only three campers left to have a go at Pinball Peril." Said Chris dramatically. "Eleanor; Mable and Kasimar … which of you will be next?"

"How about me? This looks fun." Smiled Eleanor.

"No! You don't get to decide! The hat does!" Barked Chris as eh reached in and took out a coin with Eleanor's face on it. "The hat has chosen you so stop complaining!"

"I wasn't complaining." Blinked Eleanor.

"Just go!" Snapped Chris.

"Whatever you say Chris." Said Eleanor as she walked to the pinball machine to start her turn while mumbling to herself about Chris having issues.


Confessional: Issue number one; the pilot episode!

Eleanor: I really try and see the good in people … but I can't see that much in Chris … it could be to do with how sadistic he is. Uzuri is sadistic too but at least she's sweet and friendly.

Chris: Shut up! I'm a sadist and proud of it!

Chef: That explains quite a lot.


Eleanor started her turn in the game of Pinball Peril by hitting a bunch of bumpers after being shot into the pinball arena. Eleanor, like Jimmy, was one of the lighter contestants and was thus having some trouble staying on her feet. If only she was better at gym class.

Eleanor had to hold onto her hat with one hand while her blond hair whipped around due to the impressive speed of the ball.

PING!

Eleanor hit a glowing bumper and a number of retro 'bing' sounds amplified around the pinball table as a fair number of lights glowed like neon.

"Woooooo hoooooooo!" Cheered Eleanor as she rolled around inside her ball with an excited and energetic look on her face.

After a few more bounces and rebounds Eleanor's ball drifted into the bottom of the table and into the exit zone.


Confessional: Fun ferret flight!

Eleanor: That was like a roller coaster! I always did like riding them at the funfair; though I don't think Frost and Dandelion would agree even if they had ever ridden on one.


"How did I do Chris?" Asked Eleanor as she arrived back with the group.

"Maybe." Shrugged Chris.

"That doesn't make much sense." Said Eleanor as she tilted her head to the side.

"Takes one to know one." Smirked Chris.

"I'm wasting my time." Said Eleanor as she walked over to Jimmy with an eye roll at Chris.

"Hey! I'm not wasting your time! Every second with me is like a lifetime spent well!" Snapped Chris. "Anyway; your score totals to the amount of…

Thirteen thousand eight hundred and fifty points. Not enough for immunity! Haha!"

"Ah well; I had fun in this challenge." Shrugged Eleanor.


Confessional: And that's what matters … along with what hotdogs are made of.

Eleanor: What can I say; I liked this challenge. I didn't win but I think I'll scrape through the Bonfire Ceremony tonight … I hope the others do as well … except for Kasimar and Nakia … they're really mean.


"Ok then; Kasimar … Mable. It's just you two who haven't had a turn yet, who's gonna be next?" Asked Chris as he deliberately reached into the hat slowly.

"Could you hurry it up Chris? I've got better things to do than stand around here like a girl at the mall." Said Kasimar with crossed arms and a frown. "And besides; I want to win immunity again."

"If you want to stay here then you should." Said Mable. "As soon as you are votable you're going to be off this rotten island faster than you can say pie … which is a very quick for to say."

"Keep dreaming bitch." Scoffed Kasimar.

"And Kasimar is the next one to go." Said Chris as he held up a coin with Kasimar's snarling face on it. "That means Mable is going last. Good luck Kasimar."

"Boo! Boo!" Jeered Barney and Lavender quickly joined in with the booing.

"Ah go and get castrated." Snapped Kasimar as he approached the pinball table. But not only did he have to win immunity he also had to think of a way to hurt Mable; beating her up would be fun … but after she puked in his face accidently a few days ago he felt something more brutal was in order.


Confessional: I'm crossing my completely none existent fingers that Kasimar is going to lose!

Lavender: This could be the moment that Kasimar loses! Oh if that happens I want to remember it forever!

Jimmy: I'll be thankful when Kasimar is gone; after what he did to poor Gary and Raven I'm wondering why he hasn't been disqualified yet.


Kasimar started his run on the pinball table by hitting the bumpers and bouncing off them into a gold bumper and rolling over a brightly colored part of the ground. He rode up the ramp to the railing above the floor and landed down through the score gate and smashed over a bunch of barrels.

Kasimar's run was quite a strong one; he managed to remain standing all the time and kept a good speed going as well as never getting close to the bottom of the pinball table. Most of the other campers were booing and jeering at Kasimar in an attempt to throw him off his game but Kasimar didn't make any mistakes nor did he trip.

Eventually Kasimar hit a bumper which knocked him down into the exit but he felt confident that he had done enough to get to the next round.


Confessional: I sense deviousness on the near horizon.

Kasimar: After I got out of my ball I set about making sure Andy suffers and Mable regrets crossing me … harsh but necessary … and totally hilarious! Yahahaha!


Kasimar got out of his ball and saw the exit just a short distance away; he also saw what appeared to be the pinball table control panel next to him. As nobody could currently see him Kasimar set to work. He scanned his eyes over the workings and came across a turn dial that controlled the power of the bumpers; it was set at twenty percent.

"Hmm; if it is already strong at twenty percent … lets see how it does at one hundred percent." Cackled Kasimar nastily as he turned the dial to maximum and left through the exit up to Chris and the others.

"Well Chris; how did I do?" Asked Kasimar gruffly.

"Pretty good my man." Congratulated Chris. "You've got a total of…

Twenty six thousand, seven hundred and eighty."

"Yeah!" Cheered Kasimar as he smirked at the others.

"Aw crap!" Grumbled Lavender. "So much for getting rid of him tonight."

"We still have plenty of chances." Assured Mable.

"Ok then; Mable, you're the only one left to go." Said Chris. "Try not to get too hurt in there."

"Good luck Mable." Said Andy.

"Thank you Andy." Smiled Mable sweetly.


Confessional: I can't watch; I'm looking away now.

Andy: Ok … after Mable completes her challenge I'm telling her that I love her.

Mable: No doubt about it … after I finish the challenge I'm going to tell Andy I love him.

Kasimar: This oughta be good!

Tabitha: I wonder what Kasimar did; he gave me a signal that he did something … guess we'll wait and see I suppose.


Mable got into her ball and was sent into the arena. She headed straight for a bumper start scoring points.

It all went downhill from there in a BIG way.

Because of the increased power of the bumper Mable was sent flying at a very high speed into another bumper which sent her to another and so the cycle continued. She was racking up points but everyone on the ground could tell something was wrong.

"Hey; why is Mable bouncing around so much? That didn't happen to us." Said Uzuri in confusion.

"Heeeeeeeeelp!" Screamed Mable from within her ball.

Suddenly…

Mable hit a bumper at such a speed that when she ricocheted off she was sent flying right OUT of the pinball table, over the heads of Chris and the other campers, and straight into a large boulder.

SMASH!

Mable's ball smashed to pieces and she ended up lying on the sand groaning in pain … a large piece of glass stuck in her leg.

"Oh my god!" Screamed Andy in horror and he immediately rushed to Mable's aid with the other contestants not far behind.

Andy knelt beside Mable as she looked up at him.

"Mable! Are you ok? Somebody get Chef!" Ordered Andy.

"Sorry Andy; he's busy with Spider; Mable's just going to have to sit tight. And if she bleeds to death it'll be GREAT for ratings! Haha!" Laughed Chris in his most horrible and sadistic tone yet.

Andy slowly turned and looked at Chris with a look of pure hatred and loathing. He quickly took a towel from his pocket and dabbed Mable's wound and began to use it as a make shift bandage while making sure to avoid the piece of glass.

"Andy … it hurts." Whispered Mable in pain.

"You'll be ok." Promised Andy. "Right now we've got to get you to the medical tent and fast."

Andy gently picked Mable up bridal style with surprisingly little difficulty as he quickly carried her away to the mess hall.

As they walked away everyone turned to Kasimar who didn't look the least bit bothered.

"You did this." Said Lavender; her voice a deadly whisper of anger and fury.

"You can't prove it … and what would I have to gain from doing it this way? I could have more effectively beaten her up." Shrugged Kasimar. "Either way … it wasn't me."

"Mr. Maclean." Said an intern. "The bumper strength dial was turned to maximum. The dial itself is loose … I told you we should have fixed it!"

"Fine; repair it ASAP." Said Chris without much care or compassion for what had happened. "Anyway; I believe Mable scored eight thousand four hundred points. Time to dish out immunity."

"How can you dish out immunity at a time like this?" Asked Xaria in ultimate disgust. "Mable is really hurt!"

"Not my problem; now zip it or I'll have you thrown off the show and I'll sue you for breaching contract!"

Xaria questioned down but was glowering in anger.

"Ok; out of the … eleven of you plus Spider and Mable; six of you are immune. Uzuri, Barney, Lavender, Tabitha and Kasimar are all immune tonight." Said Chris while acting as though nothing had happened. "Xaria had far and away the best score so she not only wins immunity but the special prize. Today's special prize is…

A pinball table that you will receive after the show!"

"…Whatever." Muttered Xaria.

"You teens are so unappreciative; well, I have my fourth daily massage in a few minutes so I'm outta here!" Announced Chris. "I'll see you all at the bonfire ceremony; pick your favorite loser to kick off."

Chris left and the campers looked amongst themselves in horror at what had happened, even Tabitha was mortified. Kasimar seemed not to care and Nakia was thinking.

"At least she had bad hair." Said Nakia.

"Shut the FUCK up you bitch!" Screamed Lavender in rage. "Is hair the only thing you can think about? My best friend has just taken a serious injury! You should be ashamed of yourself!"

Lavender stormed away and Barney quickly followed her after scowling at Nakia who looked stunned.

"I'm going to go and check on Spider." Said Quana in a timid voice. "Oh this is really bad, really super bad! Two people injured in one day … is the money even worth all this?"


Confessional: No joke to make; this is too serious.

Kasimar: Yahahahaha! That worked out even better than I thought it would! I'll watch that scene a lot on the uncut DVD of the season!

Tabitha: (She is pale in shock and seems horrified). Oh my god. I never wanted something like that to happen … I just wanted Kasimar to rough her up! Not for her to end up bleeding. Why did I ally with him? He's insane! But … I really regret to say I need him. Mum and Dad may be proud of my strategy … but this time I'm ashamed…

Xaria: That's it Kasimar; this means war!


Mable was soon bought into the medical tent and laid on a bed. While Chef immediately got to work on treating her injury Andy got to Mable's side. Spider was still unconscious.

"Ow." Whimpered Mable in pain.

"You can squeeze my hand if you want." Offered Andy.

"Thank you Andy." Said Mable gratefully.

A few minutes passed by in silence before Andy spoke.

"I don't know how this happened." Said Andy even though he guessed it was Tabitha but he didn't want to make Mable cause herself pain. "When I find out who did this I'll destroy them."

"Don't Andy … these things happen … ow." Said Mable softly. "Well … looks like my time on wawanakwa is just about over. Shame really … there are still some things I wanted to do."

"Like what?" Asked Andy as Mable squeezed his hand.

"Well…" Began Mable but she trailed off.

"Please continue; you can tell me anything." Said Andy nicely.

"Ok … Andy; I've only known you for a little over two weeks … but I love you." Said Mable.

Chef finished removing the glass from Mable's wound and quickly left mumbled something about cooking dinner when he really just wanted to give the two teens some privacy.

"Really? How long?" Asked Andy in a soft voice while never letting go of Mable's hand.

"Since about the time you helped me in the fear challenge." Replied Mable. "I just wanted to tell you before I left."

"…I love you too Mable." Smiled Andy. "I have for a fair while now; it's why I helped you in the fear challenge. I was going to tell you after the challenge … but now this has happened. If only I could have prevented it."

"It's in the past; what's done is done." Replied Mable. "I may be in pain … but being with you … well … it almost makes the pain completely vanish."

"Likewise." Whispered Andy.

The Japanese male and the blue haired female looked into each others eyes and leaned in for a tender kiss. After they parted both smiled.

"So … are we a couple now?" Asked Mable. "Because I'd like for us to be."

"We are." Smiled Andy.


Confessional: Awwwwwwwwww! That was so heartwarming and romantic!

Mable: That moment alone makes up for all the suffering I have endured in this competition.

Andy: While I feel extremely furious at Tabitha … I think it can wait at least a while.


At that moment Barney, Quana and Lavender came in and saw Andy and Mable holding hands.

"Well, well, it looks like this is a happy ending after all." Said Barney with a tip of his hat. "Yaaar! This is so heart warming!"

"Are you ok Mable?" Asked Lavender as she sat on a chair beside the bed.

"I've been better." Admitted Mable. "But … I don't feel too bad to be honest … though my leg is still really hurting."

While her four friends conversed Quana moved over to Spider while feeling immense sympathy for Mable. Quana sat on the side of the bed her boyfriend was in and looked down at him.

"Oh spider; … are you ok?" Asked Quana sadly. "What am awful day this has been."

Spider's eyes fluttered and slowly opened; he looked up and saw Quana looking down on him.

"Hello Quana; you *cough* look pretty.2 smiled spider before he suddenly noticed Mable in the bed next to his and gasped. "What happened to *cough* Mable? Please tell *cough* me that she is alright."

"She's ok now … but it's a pretty serious injury." Admitted Quana. "First you and now her. I suspect Kasimar of doing that to her but I have no proof … and speaking of which … are you ok?"

"I'm fine … I just feel a *cough* little woozy and *cough* sick." Shrugged Spider. "And I feel starving … but *cough* other than that…"

"Spider; I want to ask you a question … and please be honest, ok?" Asked Quana softly and kindly.

"Ok Quana; anything *cough* for you." Nodded spider.

"Why have you been acting so odd lately? You're pushing yourself too hard and exercising like mad and you're not eating as far as I know. What's wrong? Is something bothering you?" asked Quana as she knelt on the floor so her head was level with Spider. "I love you Spider and thus I really care about you; tell me what's wrong please."

"Well … ok." Said Spider with a nod. "I've … become fairly *cough* conscious about my weight *cough* lately being that I'm fat."

"You're not fat." Said Quana sounding surprised.

"But you said I *cough* was." Mumbled spider.

"Did I?" Blinked Quana. "If I did I certainly didn't mean too."

"Well you said I *cough* had junk in my *cough* trunk." Said Spider. "And Kasimar warned me that *cough* girls don't like fat guys and-."

"Ok; I'll stop you there." Said Quana as she briefly nuzzled noses with spider. "What I meant was that you had a nice butt … but … maybe I was too vague. And it seems to me that Kasimar was playing on these insecurities of yours in an attempt to make your hurt yourself. Listen; I don't think you're fat … I think you're a handsome and truly wonderful boy."

"Really? Wow … I feel so *cough* stupid; why did I listen *cough* to Kasimar? I'm such an *cough* idiot." Said Spider in both relief and shame.

"You're not stupid." Cooed Quana. "Love makes people do silly things … ask my dad. So … out of curiosity did you lose any weight?"

"Err … about … two *cough* pounds." Admitted Spider.

"That doesn't sound good; ok, we'd better get you some food … real food." Said Quana in an almost motherly tone. "Now; I think I'll be your personal nurse from now on; you may be sixteen but I think you could use a little help … and who better than your girlfriend?"

"Thank *cough* you Quana." Smiled Spider happily.

"Oh; and if I ever say something you don't like or anything that makes you feel uncomfortable … just tell me. In a relationship the couple trusts each other; I know you trust me and I certainly trust you … my little arachnid." Smiled Quana.

"I appreciate that my Hispanic beauty." Flirted Spider.

"Now; maybe tonight you can sleep with me; you could probably use some support and perhaps a cuddle buddy." Giggled Quana. "But before that…"

Quana leaned and she and Spider began to kiss.


Confessional: …I love romance!

Quana: Thank goodness that's sorted out; everything is gonna be back to normal … and with luck Nakia will go instead of Mable. What a day … and I must say that Spider is a really good kisser! Hahaha!

Lavender: (she is angry and sad). Kasimar is going to rot in hell for eternity one day. Poor Mable…

Spider: I love Quana; I *sneeze* made a stupid mistake but *cough* she still loves me. Coming on this show *hard cough* is the best thing that has ever happened *gag* to me.

Tabitha: Andy is probably going to confront me soon. I admit I feel terrible … but I can't let Andy blow my cover … if I don't win… (Tabitha trails off) … Well; I have my reasons for my actions.


The thirteen campers sat around the Bonfire Pit on logs and stumps. Quana and Spider were holding hands as were Andy and Mable. Mable now had her right leg in a cast and had crutches. Kasimar was smirking to himself and the atmosphere was quite tense. The moon was up and the stars were twinkling. It would have been a beautiful night if not for the events of the day.

Chris arrived after a minute or two with a tray of twelve marshmallows. He set in down on the oil drum he always stood behind and looked over the campers.

"Hey guys. It's that time of the day again … time for somebody to leave the Island and lose any chance of winning the million dollars. Today's episode is definitely the best yet! It had thrills, swearing and even blood! Haha!"

"Shut up Chris!" snapped Lavender.

"Fine; whatever. Ok; on my tray I have twelve marshmallow … yet there are twelve of you. When I call your name come and get a marshmallow. The camper who does not receive a marshmallow must immediately walk the dock of shame and board the boat of losers. That means that you are out of the contest … and you can't come back … ever."

"Like how I came back?" Asked Andy.

"Shut it! I mean is this time! Nobody else is coming back to rejoin the competition!" Growled Chris as he picked up the first marshmallow. "

"The first marshmallow's go to those who are immune.

"Xaria"

"Kasimar"

"Barney"

"Lavender"

"Tabitha"

"Uzuri"

The sic whose names had been called got up and each took a marshmallow. Six marshmallows were left on the plate and seven campers still didn't have one.

"Ok; now for those who aren't immune. The first of you challenge losers through is...

Spider"

"Jimmy"

"Eleanor"

"Quana"

"Andy"

Nakia and Mable remained without a marshmallow; Mable looked like she had accepted her fate while Nakia looked confident and smug. Andy prayed with all his heart that Nakia would be the one voted off … maybe Mable would stay … maybe.

"Mable … Nakia … this is the final marshmallow. Whoever does not get this must immediately walk the dock of shame and board the boat of losers … and you can't come back ever. Tonight's final marshmallow goes to…

Nakia."

Nakia smugly looked at Mable while claiming her marshmallow.

"Well cripple; the dock of shame awaits." Smirked Chris. He was met with a rock to the head. "Ow!"

Mable got up from her stump and began to walk with her crutches. Everyone besides Kasimar and Nakia said goodbye and gave a good farewell. Mable stopped in front if Andy.

"Oh Mable; I wish it didn't have to end like this." Sighed Andy sadly.

"Don't worry about it Andy; I made the final thirteen … and I met you." Smiled Mable as she gave Andy a peck on the cheek. "I'll miss you."

"I'll miss you too Mable." Said Andy as he hugged his girlfriend.

After one last farewell Mable walked the dock of shame on crutches and boarded it. The boat then set off into the moonlit night for Playa des losers.

"Farewell dear sweet Mable." Whispered Andy.


Chris stood on the dock of shame with a smile on his face as he waved to the camera.

"What a dramatic end to the episode don't you think? Spider passes out, Mable gets an injury and much to my relief Kasimar gets to stay! Haha! With Mable gone only twelve campers remain. The game is going to get tough now as the challenges get harder and harder … or maybe I'm feeling generous and I'll make them merciful, I'm not telling! Haha!"

Chris laughed and clapped his hands as he looked at the camera again.

"Who will be the next camper to walk the dock of shame? What will the next challenge be? What will Andy do to Tabitha now? Will Kasimar hurt anybody else? And which is better; PS3, X Box or Wii? Find out next time on Total Dramas letterz!"


Votes

Andy: Nakia

Barney: Mable

Eleanor: Mable

Jimmy: Mable

Kasimar: Mable

Lavender: Kasimar (Doesn't count)

Mable: Nakia

Nakia: Mable

Quana: Nakia

Spider: Nakia

Tabitha: Mable

Uzuri: Mable

Xaria: Nakia

Mable: 7

Nakia: 5

Kasimar: 1 (Doesn't count)

Voted Off: Daisy, Patch, Fifi, Nakia, Carlton, Yessica, Hector, Zita, Andy, Irene, Wallace, Gary, Raven, Vinnie, Daisy again, Oscar, Mable.


I wish I didn't have to do that … but it had to be done. Well; now Mable is gone (thankfully on a high note) and twelve campers remain. We're definitely over halfway to the end! What will Andy do now that this has happened to his girlfriend? Let's hope nothing too drastic.

Sorry for those of you (probably everyone) who wanted Kasimar to go … but his tyranny on Wawanakwa isn't scheduled to end just yet. But trust me now; when the time arrives … Kasimar will meet his BRUTAL karmatic downfall and get EVERYTHING that he deserves. Just keep rooting for your favorite character and looking forward to Kasimar's end in the game.

Cheers everyone!

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Next time: It's cosplay time ... with video game characters?