Another chapter! This ones a nice and fluffy one so I hope you all enjoy! Read and Review!
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"So this is Mistral? It feels like a mountain town." Jaune chuckled and Pyrrha punched his arm.
"Well it's my mountain town then Jaune." She looped her arm around his and the two walked through the streets. Pyrrha realized that she screwed up in not disguising herself and karma being the bitch it was, had people swarming around them screaming at Pyrrha for questions.
"Nikos! Is this young man your significant other?"
"He looks a bit scrawny if you ask me!"
"MARRY ME PYRRHA!"
"What happened at Beacon after the dragon was killed?"
"Have you two had sex yet?"
And with that final comment, Pyrrha sent out a magnetic pulse and fried their cameras. Jaune picked her up bridal style and pumped aura into his legs to jump onto the building. The couple sighed in relief from getting out of that embarrassing situation and started to laugh together. They sat down and held one another tight as they stared off into the horizon.
"Y'know, it's nice to be somewhere that doesn't have the constant threat of death hanging over our heads huh Pyr?"
Pyrrha smiled and gave him a nice kiss. "It is nice to be able to take a breather. There is one thing I'd like for us to do today though Jaune."
Jaune looked at Pyrrha with a questioning gaze and she continued.
"I think it's time for you to meet my parents." She said with a smirk and Jaune's eyes widened in fear.
"Y-you sure about that?! I-I don't need your dad killing me! What if they find out we had sex already?!" Jaune spoke in a voice full of terror and Pyrrha laughed at how flustered he was getting.
"Jaune, my parents will love you. I already told them that I was going out with you a week after we became a couple!"
This made Jaune snap and he felt that his death was inevitable. He started to shake uncontrollably and Pyrrha smacked him across the face to calm him down and bring himself back to his senses.
"Calm down Jaune! What's done is done and you are going to meet my parents today whether you want to or not!" She grabbed him by the hoodie and started to drag him away toward the Nikos household. Jaune was about to go as far as cutting off his own hood to escape but Pyrrha wasn't having any of that. She whispered in his ear about cosplaying as one of his characters in an anime he watches if he met her parents. This gave Jaune a whole new fire and he nodded furiously that he would stop struggling. They took the rooftops until they got to the entrance of a massive house with Pyrrha's symbol above the door. She knocked on the door and the woman that answered it could've been Pyrrha's twin, just more developed and mature wearing a nightgown.
"PYRRHA! Oh my lovely daughter is safe and sound!" She squealed and glomped Pyrrha in a motherly hug. She pulled away and grabbed Pyrrha's shoulders before throwing out a barrage of questions.
"How long have you been traveling? Have you kept up on your training? How's your boyfriend, I can't wait to meet him! Does he treat you right? Or do I need to go grab my spear and shape him up?!"
"MOM!" Pyrrha yelled loudly and her mother stopped. She gestured toward Jaune who was watching the scenario with barely controlled laughter. Pyrrha's mother lit up and pulled Jaune into a bonecrushinghug as well.
"Oh you must be Jaune! It's great to finally meet my beautiful daughters first boyfriend! OOOOOHHHH I'm so excited! My name is Athena Nikos and I am Pyrrha's mother." She pulled away and gave Jaune a brilliant smile. He shook his head in shock and nodded in agreement.
"It's good to finally meet you Mrs. Nikos. And to answer your question about treating Pyrrha right, I do. She's the most important person in the world to me and I'd fight anyone who wished to do her harm." He gave Athena a confident smile and she smirked at Pyrrha.
"You chose a good one dear. Enough of standing around outside! Come in and tell me all about your trip here! ACHILLES!" She yelled the last part and a deep voice responded.
"WHAT?!"
"Pyrrha's back and she brought her boyfriend!"
What was heard next was the sound of metal clanging and a whole lot of cursing as Pyrrha's father sprinted down the steps in full battle armor. His helmet hid most of his face and he pointed his sword right at Jaune. He was a tall and muscular man with the body of a full grown huntsman.
"If you wish to date my daughter you have to prove that your strong enough to beat me in-!" He was interrupted by Athena smashing the flat side of her spear into his helmet. He stood there nursing the pain from his newly acquired headache and threw off the helmet, revealing a head of black hair and emerald eyes like Pyrrha's.
"Thena! What the hell was that for?! I just wanted to see the boy piss himself in fear!" He whined and she gave him a glare to sit down. He complied and sat down next to his wife grumbling about ruining his fun. Pyrrha was laughing so hard that she was crying and Jaune was doing his best to stifle his own. Achilles gave Jaune a glare and sighed.
"Well I guess I should introduce myself. Achilles Nikos, I'm Pyrrha's father and if you make her sad, cry or displease my daughter in any way! I'll castrate you and choke you with your own testi-" *Wham!* Athena smacked her husbands head again as he started to get carried away once more and glared at him to reintroduce himself.
"Achilles Nikos, I'm Pyrrha's father and it's a pleasure to meet you Jaune Arc." He held out his hand and Jaune gave him a good shake.
"There. Was that so hard dear?" Athena said sweetly and Achilles continued to grumble in displeasure.
"So Jaune, when did you start developing feelings for my daughter?" She asked with a chesire smile and Jaune laughed nervously.
"Well, it started when she kissed me on the cheek after I had to leave Beacon. I had falsified transcripts and lied to get into Beacon. The headmaster gave me another chance by having me wait a year to take a test and re-enroll into Beacon. I found a trainer who made me stronger and revealed my feelings to Pyrrha at the school dance which I was her date. We've gone on many dates and feel like we both belong to one another."
"You faked your way into Beacon? I think that warrants me to be able to stab him honey!" He grabbed the hilt of his sword and Athena flashed her spear across face.
"Dear, why don't we let him explain?" She said in an irritated voice and Achilles relented.
"If my last name isn't obvious enough, I come from a line of heroes. My father never wanted me to become a huntsman and a friend of mine helped me get a hold of fake transcripts. My mother didn't want me to become one either, but respected my wishes. I said goodbye to her, my seven sisters and left a letter for my father."
Achilles spit out the water he was drinking at what Jaune said about having seven sisters.
"Did you say seven sisters?!" He spoke in sock and Jaune nodded. Achilles shook his head and thought about what a household with eight women would be like. He shook his head and had a new amount of respect for Jaune.
"Well hats off to you Jaune! I don't think I could've survived having eight women in the house so I salute you! I could barely get by when it was just Pyrrha and Athena!" He felt Athena's glare and gulped as she spoke.
"What's that supposed to mean Achilles dear?" She spoke too sweetly and had an aura of rage around her.
"N-nothing my goddess! You can be on top tonight!" He spoke quickly and Athena was pleased with his answer.
"Good. I don't condone you faking your way into Beacon but you've proved yourself from what Pyrrha has told me and I'm fine with you two being together. Oh! One more thing, am I gonna get any grandbabies soon?" She spoke excitedly and it was Jaune and Pyrrha's turn to do a spit take.
The two teens looked at Athena in shock and Achilles was laughing at his wife's question.
"Come on Athena! There's no way they already had sex!" He laughed and stared at Jaune and Pyrrha's beet red faces. His eye twitched and he pulled out his sword to kill Jaune.
"YOU"RE DEAD NOW ARC!" Achilles screamed as he chased Jaune around the house. Athena giggled and wiped away her tears from laughing so hard.
"I know you're too smart to get pregnant Pyrrha. I just wanted to know if you two have done it yet. I'm glad you have but it looks like your father begs to differ." The mother and daughter looked on as Achilles narrowly missed Jaune's ass as he continued to chase the Arc boy.
Jaune was able to tire out Achilles long enough for Athena to step in and tell him to stop. They ate dinner and invited Jaune and Pyrrha to stay for the night. They agreed and went up to Pyrrha's room. Jaune was shocked that she had a game console, X-ray and Vav comics and a plethora of posters with characters such as Master chief, Genji from Overwatch and Scorpion from Mortal Kombat.
"Well Pyr, didn't know you were a gamer!" He chuckled and she blushed from this new revelation to him.
"Yeah. I always like unwinding after a hard practice by shooting people in Halo or Overwatch. I do have to say though, Mortal Kombat is bloodier than what we do as huntsman!" She laughed and Jaune put his hands around her waist as he leaned his head on her shoulder. He kissed her neck and she moaned as he sucked on it. Pyrrha made sure the door was locked and proceeded to strip Jaune of his clothes as he did the same to her.
Outside Pyrrha's room, Athena and Achilles had their ears to the door.
"Just let me kill him a little!" Achilles begged as Athena had a light blush from hearing her daughter engage in intercourse.
"Why don't you kill my aching pussy with the sword in your pants dear?" She said as her dress came undone and Achilles was on her in an instant and carried her to the bedroom. All that could be heard was muffled moans and beds creaking as the night went on.
So I'd like to know what you all would think about me updating this twice a week with longer chapters at about 3,500 words plus or continue with the current schedule. This could give me more time to work on other stories and I would update this every Monday and Friday if that's all your choice! Review what you want!