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Mickey- Lots of thing to talk about... For your first review. I'm glad you like. Same but different... I don't understand. My computer brain isn't comprehending this logic. (Seriously though, I don't get it) WHY DID I KILL SALLY!? (cries) addictions are bad man. I always make mistakes, I'm human. But I hopefully have gotten better with mistakes. (Right?) Percy has always been oblivious to the fact people care about him. Let's face it, if killing himself, in the original series, was the only way to save a friend, he'd do it in a heartbeat. Review two- I dont support any Percy or Annabeth paring, unless it's percabeth. I love those two together so much. I'm pretty sure it's illegal in my household at this point. This to check for spelling. Hmmm, I could do that but I don't have a word doc. And the one I do have doesn't save, so I'd have to write it in one sitting then copy and paste. See my problem? It's doesn't matter what other think. What matters is what I think. BUT I THINK IT SUCKS! My sister likes it, my friends like it, BUT I DONT! (sobs) number three, I get every review, don't worry little one. The Diana story almost gave me a heart attack, GOD IS WITH ALL OF US. Sometimes when I have to say things like, "Oh my gods," I just can't because I'm Christian. So I try to avoid it as much as I can but sometimes I just have to. The only down side to this series. You like the I'm not the girl/I'm the girl thing? I do to but my favorite thing on the whole thing is either the, friends do/best friends do thing or the story about the kid that saved the other kid from suicide. Number four. Don't worry about how much you write in reviews. It's good news for me. I thought your name was three Mickey until you said it was supposed to be a heart. Hahahahahaha. Number four, Eh it was okay. Five. I am glad you like chapter 32. Yup Percy cares for everyone. Percy will always be oblivious. I don't know about perfect or well written. Its okay. Its my favorite too. Sorry this was so long.
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guest(chapter 33)- Thanks for the vote!
Guest(chapter 35)- though your review,does make since, no. You see Frederick married into Athenas family, so it's still her families blood line, he just married into it. He is also just taking the throne till Annabeth is old enough, who was declared the next ruler when she was born, Athena just happened to die before she was old enough and Frederick is taking her place for the time being.
Stuff words. More words. (why am i being so crazy today. I didn't get any sleep. I BLAME THIS STORY. I SPENT ALL LAST NIGHT THINKINNG ABOUT THIS CHAPTER.) words. More words and stuff in my head.
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POV-Annabeth
I wake up and hear someone snoring like a lunatic. I open my eyes, at first they are blurred and I can barley see. The bright light doesn't help either. But I eventually find myself looking at Austin. He's on his side, snoring, with his hand behind his back at an awkward angle. He's loud. I would definitely take Percys drooling, over Austin snoring any day.
I sit up and look around, sort of confused to were I am. Till I realize I'm in my room. Back at the palace, not on the ship. Were I get to see my so called father everyday. And I get to miss Percy. I blow a bit of hair out of my face and get up.
I walk around and get dressed. (Austins in the room? He's asleep and you learn to not care.) I was in my closet for about twenty minutes, trying to find a modest looking dress, that wasn't the size the of Percy and Jason combined.
I finally found one in the very back. It reminded me of the dresses on the ship. (The girls on the ship were allowed to wear pants and shirt but most decided to wear dresses.) The cool thing is, when I grabbed it, I realized something. It is three pieces.
The first piece is a normal shirt. It was short, stopped around my belly button but it was cute. It was long sleeved and had a neckline that wasn't low or high. It was the perfect length. The second piece is a skirt. I'm guessing you put it where the shirt ends. It's long, stops at my anckles and it look cool when I spin it. The third piece is a pair of pants that goes under the skirt. It's cute. I put it on and I find myself liking, a lot.
To think I would have never found this if I never gotten kidnapped. I sigh and walk out. Austin is practically falling off the couch, his face is inches away from the ground. How does he manage to do that?
I smirk and walk out of the room. I walk around aimlessly and some guards wave. They have a smile on there face and a glint in their eyes that I've only seen on the ship. They're with Percy. While others look at me with sympathy and pity, they ask if I am okay. They aren't. I past five guards and they were talking about the ship and Percy. They asked me a few questions when I walked by, like it was completely normal.
My walk was uneventful, so I went back to my room. Austin was up, in a change of clothing and he has a small red mark on his cheek. He looked grumpy and complained about falling into the floor. We both talked for about half an hour before we are called to breakfast.
Life went on. In the next three days, I went on missing Percy and Austin missing Danielle. We both sent two letters each and we spent most of our time together or avoiding my dad.
My dad has... well... for a lack of a better word, 'caught' us together really late at night and even two nights ago when we were both sleeping. He has also 'caught' us together whenever we see him and every time we see him, he looks like he's going to blow a fuse. His eyes harden and he grits his teeth. Frederick keep giving me very subtle hits to stop hanging out with Austin so much. (No sarcasm.) The snake.
Luke's should have come back yesterday but he was running behind. (thank the gods.) But he should be here any minute. I can't wait. (Not the sarcasm.)
I was with... guess who. Austin was writing a letter and is talking about the, 'dumb size of this place,' and about, 'Constantly getting lost part of his stay.' He went on talking till I got word that Luke was there. Yeah.
I smiled at Austin and tell him to wish me luck. When I got to Luke's room, he crushed me into a hug and started pestering me question after question. I answered them all and acted like I missed him a lot. It actually wasn't that hard since I have missed him, up to a certain day. He asks me to talk a walk with him and I do.
I think I knew where this is going.
we walked in the gardens, I talked about 'my time on the ship.' But I made sure I kept leading the conversation to Austin. I tried to make it obvious that, 'I like, like him.' I was doing it so he ends up not asking me. It seemed to work for a little while. Till I was done with the story and Luke starts saying he's sorry, blah, blah, blah, he got so worried about me, honestly I don't even remember that much.
All I really remember is when Luke said he wanted to keep protecting me and got on one knee, got out an over designed ring and popped the question.
That leads to right now.
I didn't know what I would have thought as soon as he said those four little words. The people of Athens? All the lives he has destroyed? My brothers having to put up with my constant gushing over this idiot? My mom? Maybe Austin? Maybe even the good times I had with Luke? None of the above. In retrospect, I had four images, but they had the same concept.
The first two was of my dreams about Percy, the one were Percy gets hit by Gabrial, and the one where he almost died. The third was Percy bare back. All those long scars. Then the fourth was just Percy. He has laughing at something someone said, in the dining hall, on the ship. It was all Percy.
On the outside of this little scene, Luke on one knee, I look shocked. On the inside, these four images keep playing in my head like little plays, and I am yelling for Luke to get throwing a dungeon. His crime? For his part in making Percy life Tartarus. For his part in making Percy feel guilty for no reason and for his part in breaking Percy for no reason. For his part in ruining Percy family. For causing lot of people pain.
I smile apologetically.
"I'm sorry Luke." I say sweetly. I want to say so many things to him but I am doing my best stick to something sweet. I see Luke frown. "I have to say no. I... kind of like someone else." I see Luke's jaw drop and I feel like laughing at him. Again, stay sweet. "I am flattered and I'll admit I had a crush on you, but I kind of realized I only think of you as a brother." I smile again. "I'm sorry." With that I leave.
As soon as I'm in my room, with the door closed, Austin asks, "So how'd seeing Luke go?" I burst into laughter. I laugh out of hysteria, because of Luke's face when I left, because of how happy I am to get that over with.
Austin raises an eyebrow at my reaction and throws a piece of paper, a bottle of capped ink, and a pen across the bed.
"Oh this should be good." He says with a smirk. I walk over to the bed and try to stop my fit of giggles. After a couple minutes, lots more laughing, and Austin falling off the bed, I get done with the story. He is laughing when I describe the idiots face.
"That's amazing." Austin breaths. I nod. We both go into a long silence that is broken when Austin sighs. "So... how are we going to do our 'proposal.'" Austin asks with air quotes around proposal. I think for a second, I remember talking to Percy about this, but I was basically half asleep when we got to that part of the conversation.
"I think... Hey didn't Percy give you a ring?" I ask. He frowns and nods. He rummages through his pocket till he brings out a simple silver banned. It's plain and has nothing on it, just a silver ring.
"Yeah this. He had two other but I chose this one." He tosses it into my hand and I look at it.
"Out of three rings, you chose this one?" I ask. "I mean, I get this is all sort of fake but still, we want to make this believable." Austin sighs and takes it back.
"One was Percy mom ring. He got it from a friend who bought it off the guards that killed her. Apparently, she was married to this guy who died, before she met Poseidon. I didn't think it was right to take it." Austin sighs deeply. "The other was so overly designed, I don't even think it's wearable. So this was the only one I thought you wouldn't mind." I nod, okay that makes a ton of sense.
"Okay well I guess we can pick a date and one day I'll just start wearing it. Tell Frederick at breakfast and we can go from there." I suggest. Austin nods. We talk for a few minutes till we hear a small knock. Austin gets up and opens it, I hear Fredericks voice say, "Austin? Uhh, may I speak with Annabeth." Austin nods and leaves. Frederick comes in and closes the door. He walks over and sits on my bed. He looks at me up and down.
"Honey." Frederick starts. I internally roll my eyes. "Luke came in and said you said no to his proposal. It's confusing to me because I thought you liked him." He says it with lists of sweetness but I can see an angry glint in his eyes. I tell him the same thing I told Luke. I like someone else.
"It's that Austin boy isn't it." Frederick says a little bitter and a little accusing. I smile and look down. Instead of Austin, I think of Percy.
"Yeah. He's a really good guy dad." Frederick subtly intakes a breath.
"Honey, I don't know about him." He says kindly. "I don't believe he's a good person, he doesn't sit right with me." I make my jaw drop and I let it hang there for a few seconds. If Malcolm can do this, so can I, I think to myself. I tell him he's a good guy and a few other things. But Frederick keeps fighting back, it's get to the point were you can clearly hear the anger and disapproval. We fight about it for quite a while, till... Fredericks eyes land on Austins letter from earlier.
I don't mind sense Austin and I had agreed that we will lie saying Danielle is a cousin of Austin.
"What's that?" Frederick asks. He reaches across the bed, with a frown on his face and looks at it. His frown deepens. "Who is Percy?" My eyes widen and my heart rate picks up. Austin wrote a letter to Percy. That stupid idiot! Why didn't he take it with him!?
I try and remain calm and tell him I have no idea. But my eye twitches a dead give away I'm lying. I can lie pretty well but not under this much stress and pressure. Austin and I have never talked about this, what am I to do?
"Annabeth," Frederick says a bit horrified. "This letter... it's too that pirate. Austin must have wrote it. I knew he was bad news." Frederick gets up and heads to the door.
"Wait." I yell. It makes Frederick stop. "Are you sure? I mean, this could be some misunderstanding." I try and say but Fredericks eyes harden.
"Annabeth if your writing this type of letter to a criminal, there is no misunderstanding!" He turns around to leave. I get back up and run after him, this is not good. This is not good!
"Dad wait!" I yell. I catch up to him as he turns a corner into a different hallway. Frederick yells to three guards, two are with Percy, the other, I'm not sure.
"Guards!" Frederick yells. He points to the two who are with Percy. "I want you to arrest Austin lake for treason." The twos eyes widen and they look at, then the letter in my fathers hand. I can see a bit of anger flash. Oh gods, they are getting the wrong idea!
"Dad!" I scream. "Austin was in there for two years, I heard him being tortured! I know he isn't some spy!" The two guards eyes seem to loose there anger as they turn around and run in Austins room direction.
"Annabeth, we didn't think Malcolm was a spy, but he was!" Frederick yells and he walk closer to the mystery guard and whispers some thing I don't catch. The guard nods and runs past me.
"Are you sure he even wanted to send it?" I ask quietly. "Austins sister was kidnapped by that pirate, he may be doing this against his will." I try and reason. I know this may not help, but I want to try and show a little doubt so Frederick doesn't get more suspicious than he already is. Plus it may help Austin get off with barely anything.
Frederick shakes his head and opens the letter.
"Dear, Percy.
Everything is going just fine over here. Annabeth is currently out with Luke. Everything is going to plan and we have Frederick wrapped around our fingers. I hope you read this letter in good health, captain. When will..." He dropped the letter and looked at me with anger. "Explain that." Something hit me when I saw the letter drop. It was in Greek. Since when can he read Greek! "I told you Annabeth, he is a spy!"
Just as he yelled the last words the two guards came with guilty looks on their faces, they were dragging he Austin who is gagged, and handcuffed. His eyes are wide with fear and worry. When he sees the letter at my feet. He seems to stop struggling. Not him too!
I shake my head. Thank the gods Frederick didn't notice.
"Maybe he didn't write." I suggest, to further prove I didn't do anything. "Maybe he found it. And he brought it to my room to look over it." Frederick shakes his head and picks up the letter. He points to the top right corner, where Austin put his name.
Austin if you survive this so help me...
Austin is forced to his knees in front of my supposive father. A see someone tap on my fathers shoulder.
There is six guards, the one who Frederick whispered to earlier hands Frederick four envelopes. They are all opened, but one is out of its envelope. Frederick reads that one first.
I am frozen and Austin is a statue. He went through my room! He ordered for my room to be searched!
Fredericks eyes are wide, as he stares at the letter.
"Annabeth..." He whispers. I look at Austin with a silent question. Austin nods. With that I sprint down the hall as fast as I possibly can. I manage to turn a corner when I heard Frederick yell something and heavy footsteps.
Not every plan works, but this is the definition of a failed plan. Everything that wasn't supposed to be found out is out in the open. And I can't help but feel like it's my fault. Even if I did think it was just a letter to Danielle, I should have hid it or tell Austin to get it. I shouldn't have even just assumed that it was to Danielle, Austin will write letters to Percy too sometimes. Now, only the fates knows what's going to happen.
I turn around another corner and I slam into something, hard. I fall to the floor on my stomach and when I look up. Luke is on his back, holding his head. I get up, only to be grabbed and have my feet kicked out from under me. I land back on my stomach, with my arms behind my back.
I feel something cold wrap around my wrist. I feel defeated. I feel helpless. Stupid Luke, stupid me.
I look up and see Luke starring wide eyed and jaw slack as he watched me being arrested.
Might as well let all my true feelings out.
I growl and glare at the idiot.
"Mark my words Luke, I'll kill you if you do anything more to Percy and Thalia or their family." I say in a harsh whisper. Luke's already large eyes double in size. I'm hauled back up and pushed back to my good for nothing, so called, father.
Austin has the gag out of his mouth and Frederick is yelling at him to answer some questions. I'm pushed to my knees in front of him and Fredericks eyes soften. He looks at me with the letter in his hand.
"Annabeth... why?" He asks as he holds up the letters. Austin spits at his feet, much to my pleasure.
"Like you don't know." Austin growls. "You didn't really think she'd never find out. It was only a matter of time!" Frederick shakes his head and looks at me for an answer.
"What he said." I move my head in Austins direction. "You really didn't think I wouldn't find out all that you have done our kingdom. Your a murder, a thief, a maniac, and a liar! I should've known what you were doing and i was an idiot to not see it, father! Wait no, I shouldn't call you that, since my real father died of a heart attack, before I was born."
Fredericks eyes go wide and so do a few others. He shakes his head in disappointment.
"Annabeth what have they done to you." He mutters with so much sadness I almost believed him. Why I don't, there is a bright gleam of pure happiness in his eyes. "Send them to the dungeon. And call an emergency royal court meeting."
POV-Reyna
My heart is pounding in my chest, my heart is in my throat as I walk back into the carriage. With Jupiter, Zeus, Poseidon, Hades, and Dionysus following behind.
We just got out of Fredericks emergency Royal court meeting. It was so hard to not cry or scream in that room. It was like all hope for Athens slipped away. We are doomed.
We all sit in the moving carriage in complete silence. Poseidon and Hades are emotionless with blank faces. Dionysus is glaring out of the window. Jupiter and Zeus keep messing with there hands and I am messing with my hands, glaring out the window and I can't help the tears that are forming around my eyes.
When we get out of the city we all decide to head to Half blood since that's the closest kingdom.
"What are we to do?" Hades asks out of the blue. "Annabeth was our last hope. And she is sitting in a jail cell while doctors try and, 'un-brainwash her.'" Silence again.
"Let's face it." Zeus growls like it's obvious. "We have no choice! We must declare war."
"Are you insane." I ask whipping my head to look at him. "Yes we are desperate, Zeus. But in reality it's not our decision." Well it's not his anymore. He really should have gone with his brothers.
"What do you mean?" Zeus growls. I roll my eyes.
"Well first..." Dionysus says. "we aren't talking about just any type of war. This is a rebellion. A revolution. Our kingdoms are only helping the rebellion, and that start when a citizen declares war on the government. Last time I checked, none of us are citizens of Athens. So in great reality, it's Peters decision." That makes Zeus shut up.
"And," I add. "If you asked your brothers about the treaty they made with Percy. You would know you lost the right to declare war on Athens and gave it to your brothers." Zeus blinks in shock, Hades and Poseidon frown and seem to think for a few seconds.
"Oh please tell me you read that part." Dionysus slaps his hand to his forehead. "'Only those who sign this treaty shall have the right to declare war (or make other treaties with other kingdoms to help with this cause) on Athens. No excuses.'" Dionysus quotes. Idiots, I think when I see there confused faces.
"oh yeah. " Poseidon mutters under his breath. "I didn't quite understand what that meant." I remember when I read that part. I was confused to why it was in there, till Percy confessed he didn't quite trust very many people, it was just a precaution.
"Well let's face it." Jupiter speaks. "This Percy fellow is at a stand still. He has no choice but to start a revolution. And not even the gods knows what Frederick is going to do now that he knows his children are 'traitors.' So what are we to do." It's quiet again. I hate to admit it, but Jupiter is right. Percy really doesn't have a choice. Annabeth was the one and only hope we had and she's been declared a traitor.
"Well..." Dionysus mutters. He looks at me. We have talked about this, we hoped and prayed we would never need it. "We need to separate all the Athens guards and knights in our kingdoms. Send all the ones completely loyal to Frederick to a dungeon or something...
"But let's get this clear," I interrupt. "we will not harm them in anyway shape or form. That's not how Percy is." Dionysus rolls his eyes.
"get all the ones who have absolutely no idea what Frederick is doing and get them somewhere, where we can tell them everything. And get the ones who are loyal to Percy to a safe place where they can help Percy without getting killed first." I nod.
"We will get every Athens knight and guard to Dionysus palace. And every person who comes we simply ask them this, 'finish this sentence, we may be pirates...' if they finish with, 'but we are not evil.' Then there with Percy. If not then Ask them if they know what death on arrest is. If they know they are with Frederick, if not they don't know what's going on." I hate this. I really hate this. I hate that we have to use this plan. That there really is no other way. That we are screwed ten times over.
The other look at us a little shocked.
"You've thought of this a lot?" Hades says. We both nod.
The rest of the ride, we don't speak, and it was a six day trip. We all just have one thought on our minds, Frederick just started a war.
POV- Percy
Three weeks have gone by since I've dropped off Annabeth, and it's been the longest three weeks of my life. My room feels empty, the ship feels quiet and I am bored beyond belief everyday. It's just not the same without Annabeth.
The ship has been sailing for the same amount of time because we just decided to not dock for that time. I also think everyone's notice how fidgety and on end I've been the last few days. To be specific, about two weeks. I don't know, I just woke up after another... new nightmare and I just had this bad feeling. It didn't even make sense!
All it was, was Annabeth arresting me. I told you it didn't make sense, but it seems like my brain has branched off it. I really hate thinking about it.
Anyway, we are at sea right now, and we just saw a ship. I really don't feel mentally ready to possibly raid a ship, so I'm just laying down in my bed. I don't k ow how long I've been trying to sleep but it's not working. It may have something to do with the mental images that I can't seem to get out of my head. Nightmares, just nightmares. I wish Annabeth was here, I don't know why but I can't tell anyone about my dreams anymore without... I don't know. I just can't talk about it to anyone anymore, everything I try, I choke up and I just can't. But I know I can talk to Annabeth. What is wrong with me?
I lay there for another long while, I finally get the images out of my head, when my door opens.
Thalia stands there in front of me, she looks both worried and angry. Not good combinations.
"Perce you need to see this." She says and she drags me out of bed and up the ladder, through the weapons room and to the deck.
I see a ship and at first I don't see a big deal. Till I see the idiot, Luke. He's tied up and has bruises and cuts in his face that makes me smile.
"Listen." Thalia demands. She takes her dagger and points it to Luke's throat. "Respect what you said." She demands harshly. Luke smiles wide.
"Jeez Thalia have you forgot our history." He says stupidity. She presses is closer to his throat.
"After that, and don't play dumb." She whispers. The rest of the other ships crew is staring at us, with gags in there mouths and ropes tied around there wrist. Luke gulps.
"We may not have caught you yet but we will. Soon, mark my words." Luke repeats. I frown. Thalia gets up and looks at me.
"They know we were taking this route." She whispers to me. The rest of my crew is watching the pile of people. They seem confused and worried.
But how would they know that? We don't always take the same route but how did they know?
"King Frederick will catch you." Luke spits. "He has a great source." That definitely gets my attention. Thalia doesn't even have to wait for my order. She puts the dagger back at Luke's throat. This time pressing hard enough to draw blood.
"Who?" I ask. I don't know what to think. It could be someone who was caught and Frederick is...gods I don't even want to imagine what he are doing to them. But I might have a traitor, shouldn't be the first time sadly.
Lukes eyes turn devilish. Malcolm step up next to me, he seems worried about his answer. I know I am.
"Annabeth and Austin." Luke laughs. "They told Fredericks everything! And they'll continue till you're all behind bars!" Malcolm eyes go wide. My heart properly stops and I forget how to breath for a good five minutes.
In books I've read that when you get betrayed, especially by someone you care about on a romantic level, you feel like your heart has been broken or shattered, or ripped out. I don't feel like that, I just feel empty and stupid. I don't feel anything.
"Gag him!" I hear Jason yell. I don't move or do anything. I just watch, I feel like in one of my dreams, oh please be a dream.
"Put him below." Thalia yells as she storms off from my side. Luke has an evil happy look on his face.
"Oh didn't you know?" Luke says before the gag get put into his mouth. "We're engaged." Nothing, numb, I feel stupid. The gag is shoved into his mouth at long last and I hear Jason yell for everyone to get off the ship and to set sail. Malcolm has tears going down his face and the evil smiles from everyone don't help.
I somehow manage to walk onto my ship and I don't even help or do anything for the whole time. After a millennia I feel someone touch my shoulder.
"Percy." I recognize it as Piper says. It all comes and hits me hard. I pull away and just walk down to my room. I close and lock my door. I sit against my door and tears form in my eyes, eventually I grab a pillow and start to cry into it.
Betrayed, beaten, defeated, stupid because I thought that she off all people would care about me, careless, sad, angry. It all that I feel. I feel my chest ache and my heart is pounding. You might think heartbroken but heartbroken is an overused word that has lost its meaning, so if you want to go there then yeah heartbroken, if you want to stay away from the cliches, then I just feel dumb and useless. I don't know.
It finally hits me that my one and only hope of rebuilding my home has just stacked against us.
I don't even want to think of the word, but I don't have a choice do I? I'll need to talk to Jason and Thalia but I don't have a choice.
It just makes me scared and when I remember that one nightmare from a few week ago. The one from before we picked up the boys, it just make the tears stream down my face faster.
I don't have a choice. My dumb decision and blindness cause a war.
I just started a war.
*sobs!* gods I hate myself!
*more sobs*
well id never thought I'd say this. But...
THIS IS THE LAST OFFICIAL CHAPTER OF THIS STORY!
I didn't plan for this to be the last but it is! I will be doing a sequel, obviously the option for a war won the vote by a landslide.
Im sorry this was late. I am sorry for all the mistakes but I have an explanation!
For those who chose to know, why I missed last Saturday/Sunday. Well... my mom knows I've been writing fanfiction for a long time and she's been wanting to read this story. I kept telling her no but she's worn me down. I copy and pasted my story onto a google doc (the account belongs to my school so that's why I haven't used it to help write my story) and revised it a bit so it was better for her and do you know how long it look me! I spent a whole week doing that! I finished on Sunday so I've been busting my butt off to get this chapter out. (I didn't start on this chapter till I finished copying and pasting) Anyway... I'm giving her this as a Christmas present so... Yeah. Now I am sick with A huge stomach ache and instead of using it as an excuse to not write... I'm using it as a, "You've got nothing better to do. Now you don't have any excuses!" So I am here!
Anyway! I will post another chapter after this one but it will be for what my sequel will be called and blah blah blah. Anyway! I hope you have enjoyed, I'll se you later!
Bye
-Kayla