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I know this ch was posted twice sorry but I forgot to add something...
I think i got my first flame! it was wasn't all that all it say was Mary sue...yeah well when I first saw it i laughed, but i laughed even more when i sent this.
***CONGRATULATION! out of 115 reviews you are my first flame!Thanx a bunch for the flame!
P.s. did you read all 34 ch.? if not i could understand the glorious flame you had honored me with, the 1st ch sucked! but if you did i would be glade to see what your insight on the other ch's!
P.s.s if you think Stubborn love was a Mary sue you should read my other story called the Mary sue cure! and tell me whatcha think!
until the next flame A.W.P bids you adieu!
I was advertising my other story while secretly telling them i didn't care if my sweet Akira was mary sue! 0.o Gosh i such a ninja...or not but who care since i actually update early! claps for me!
Ch. 34 Taken
Akira glared out at the calm night; she bared her fangs holding a sick Kiyoshi closer. Something's not right. The night was too calm and quiet, there was no wind, no sound of singing crickets, there wasn't even a soul out on the streets, though it was 3 in the morning sometimes a few stragglers were out an about, but not this night. Suddenly there was a small gust of wind but the trees didn't sway nor did the grass, the wind only bothered the long deep red gown Akira wore and her hair. The wind caressed her skin pulling her close in a lovers embrace, weaving through Kiyoshi red locks, if anyone saw her they would shit their pants seeing a woman holding a child in the early morning, her white hair and red gown blowing in the nonexistent wind.
Danger, the wind whispered to her.
"Where, where is it?" she asked in the same tone.
Danger
Danger
Danger, the wind got more aggressive with each chant.
You're in danger, the young elements are in danger, protect the elements! Sensing a presence behind her Akira whipped around and hissed cradling her child close to find it was Matsuri.
"Damn!" Akira screeched. "You scared me!"
"Sorry." She smirked.
"What's up?"
"Nothing, actually I was just coming up here to watch the moon." She relied watching Kiyoshi nuzzling his mother breast hungry.
"Kay." Akira turned leaving Matsuri to it as she went back to her room grabbing a blanket to go over Kiyoshi head while she feed him. "Is there a reason why you're following me?" she asked politely.
"Isn't he too old to be breast feeding?"
"No, not until two and even then they still can drink it in a bottle, the longer they drink breast milk the strong their immune systems will be." Akira caught Matsuri eyes flash to the bathroom door, where Gaara was showering, before coming back to her. So that's what she's waiting on…
"So why are you in my room again?" she asked getting Matsuri attention again.
"Oh uh I kinda wanted to ask you something…" she trailed.
"Ok what is it?"
"Well, umm I…" she's stalling.
"Just ask please its getting late." Akira spoke softly.
"Ok I just wanted to say I'm sorry." Matsuri saw shock spread across Akira's face. "I couldn't let Gaara go, I didn't want to…and I took my anger out on you…now seeing how much you love him, I know you won't break his heart, so its time to let go…yeah I'm sorry." She watched Akira's face closely to see the girl face was soft and kind. Wow being mother really make her soft hearted.
"It's ok Matsuri." She smiled and scooted close to her to hug her with one arm. "I forgive, I would be mad too if one girl just popped up and took my love away. I'm really sorry too."
"So you think maybe we can start over and be friends?" Matsuri suggested with a shrug. Akira nodded and hugged the girl before she left.
Akira looked at the closed door as Gaara came out the shower, going over to her and nuzzling her neck from behind. "I don't like being bull shited." She glared at the door. "I really, really don't like it."
"I know." He murmured as he brushed his lips over his son's head, then her lips. "Just let it go."
She kissed back with a sigh. "I want to move the cribs in the room with us." Gaara pulled back to look at her. "And don't let me or the Quads out of your sight."
"Akira?"
"I don't know it just a feeling." She kissed before laying Kiyoish down on the bed then wet to get the other three children before climbing in the bed, putting her arm over their small bodies. "It's been 5 month and nothing has happen, everything been a little too calm, the bed dipped as he crawled over to her holding her to him.
"Isn't that how life supposes to be, calm without stress and trouble." She turned a little kissing him lightly.
"I love you, no matter what happens now that I will always be with you; I'll wait for eternity for you…
"Stop talking like that, I love you too, now go to sleep." He held her tightly.
"You feel it too, don't you?" She felt like crying as he kissed her neck.
"Good to sleep."
"Okay." Her was voice thick from trying to keep from crying.
"Hold still Lu," Akira struggled to put the shoes on her one year.
"DA!" He screamed pointing to Gaara who walked through the door.
"Yes, that's Daddy." She giggled as he wiggled out her grasp and run to his father with one shoe on.
"Are you being good?" Gaara smirked at his son, who was no interested in something on his father shirt.
Akira quickly put the last shoe on the oldest quad while he was busy and kissed Gaara. "One down three to go." She smiled.
"MA, MA!" Aika yanked on her mother's shorts. "C'ndy, c'ndy?"
"No Aika, no candy." The child crossed her arms and pouted stomping her feet as she cried. "You're still no getting any." She picked up her daughter who tried to slip from her grasp kicking, swiftly Akira worked her magic on Aika hair which looked like her father's when it was up but sadly she could do nothing with the thick white strip of hair that always stuck up.
"Okay, Gaara Aika done!" she spoke over her shoulder before toss him his child. "Kiyoish stop running!" But her warning went unheard by the excited one year who was feeling a lot better.
"Gaara get him, you know what happens when he gets excited." Just as the words left her mouth a mini wall of sand appeared in front of Kiyoshi, and he slammed right into it, falling back on his butt.
Kiyoshi put his hand to his face as he looked up at his parents before bursting into tears reaching up for his mother. "See this is why mommy told you to stop running." She cooed picking him up and kissing his forehead. Finally finished with getting the kids dressed and ready, Akira went to do the same, picking a nice outfit for the party; today was the Quads and her birthday, a year since their birth and a year since she became a mother…
"Damn, know I understand what they mean by "they grow up fast"." She mutter as she puts down her hair brush, it only felt like yesterday when they were born and now its been a full year!
"And before we know it, we will be old and wrinkly." Gaara smiled kissing her cheek.
"Tch, I don't know about you but I'm not going to be wrinkly!" she laughed turning in his arms. "You can be an old, wrinkly man, while I'll be young and fresh!"
"Hmm," he moaned into the kiss teasing her with his tongue and slowly hiking up her dress. "Well, let me show you just how this "old man" can make you feel." He grinned into the kiss as he grabbed her by the waist placing her on the counter.
"Gaara the kids' ar—
"Down stairs with my sister and brother." He grabbed at her panties pulling it to her knees while putting her legs around his hips with his other hand.
"Gaara the…pa-party going to st-ar-t soo-oo." She moan as his hand started to swirl around her belly button inching itself lower by the second.
"We have time." He mumbles kissing her neck.
"You have 10 minutes." She told him rolling her head back.
"It's been so long, it will be more like 3." Akira laughed out loud right when the door swung open.
"Hey…Gaa-ra… sensei?" Akira turned beet red as the two girls stared at one another.
At lost for words Akira said the first thing that came to mind. "What? It's my birthday; I can have sex if I want to."
"Matsuri, go down stairs." His student blinked before nodding and practically bolting out the door and down the steps.
"Come on old man funs over." She patted his shoulder. Grumbling his zipped up his pants and fixed his clothing, Akira tired not to laugh at his pouting and under the breath curses, great now she had to deal with 6 kids now, her four then Gaara and Matsuri; Geesh can a women get a break around here!
Walking down stairs Akira and Gaara immediately stopped, there in the middle of the living room was the Kazekage, also with the Hogkage and well everyone. "What's going on?" She asked not moving from the steps.
"We believe that Suna may be under attack in a few days." The Hogkage filled in.
"WHAT? From who?"
"We are sure yet, all we know is that suspicious looking people were circling the village. I'm sending Team Baki, Gai, and Team Kakashi." The Kazekage informed. Akira's eyes flashed to Neko's, who flashed to Neji's, who flashed to Gaara's, all thinking the same thing. The Kazekage was trying to get Neko and Akira alone.
"You better come back safe!" Akira warned her fiancé, as she unwillingly let go of his arms kissing him goodbye. "Love you." Why is it that everything wants to go wrong on my birthday! Just like last year! i was Kidnapped and gave birth!
"I will and I love you too." He whispered back as he took one last look at his family.
Akira watched as the teams left and she wanted nothing more than to scream for Gaara to come back, that she had a feeling that something horrible was about to happen. Sighing she looked to the wind to find it still yet again, it's soft warning were only hear by her ears, why do I get the feeling this is going to be my last time seeing him. She thought as she turned back to go home.
"You're not the only one." Akira looked over to Neko seeing that she actually said her thought out loud.
"You feel it to then?" She asked her friend, who was still watching the road.
"Ever since last night…it woke me out my sleep like if I was punched in the gut." Akira nodded swallowing the rock that formed in her throat, whatever thing danger was it was going to make its move soon.
"You don't leave my sight, and I won't leave yours," Akira grabbed her stomach. "I have a feeling we have until tonight before something will happen."
"Ok." Neko voice was tenses. "Gosh I hate this feeling!"
"Come one lets go."
Later that day Akira checked and re-checked the house for any suspicious activity, anything get set her wild mind at ease but everything came up clean.
"Is this really necessary?" Matsuri asked, watching Neko set traps in the small apartment.
"A mothers worry." Was Neko's only reply.
It was around 7 at night when the danger finally shown itself, Akira was rocking Aika to sleep when a strong gust of wind below every window and door open.
"GET OUT!" It screamed to Akira. She didn't was a second, looking to Neko, Akira quickly made three shadow clones and picked up a sleeping child. Running out the room and down the step she called out for Matsuri but the girl didn't answer back.
"Fuck! Where is she?" Akira hissed running to the front.
"I don't know, she said she had to go to the bathroom but she didn't come back." Neko yelled over the howling wind. "Plus she knows where to met us, let's just get to the Hogkage's!"
Reaching the front door Akira and Neko stopped in their tracks, a figure stood in the door and judging by its shoulders, it was a male. Without thought the girls ran back upstairs, when the lights suddenly cut off make the hallway dark as night.
"AKIRA!" The light was anonymously cut back on but Akira saw she was by herself, no Neko, no Lelouch and Kiyoshi, no Aiko and Aika. Panic enters her heart, why didn't she feel someone take Aika out of her arms! Where were her babies and Neko?
"Ne-" Akira voice stopped short was a wave of pain took over her body, unable to move she fell to the ground gasping for air. My heart, why does it hurt so much! Small images began flashing through her mind, Suna, Gaara, a large bird, and man with long blond hair...but why…then the images skips to what looked like a dark cave and a large statue.
"AHHHH!" She screamed as the pain increased, it felt like someone was trying to pull her insides through a straw all at once. Gaara, something was wrong with Gaara it has to be why she was feeling this pain and seeing those images.
"Well, that was certainly easy." The voice that spoke was deep and thick, as a foot nudged her shoulder. She winced in pain. "I didn't even touch her or anything and she went down like being hit with a kunai right in the temple." Struggle Akira looked up, but it was hard to make out who stood before her, her body was feeling like it weight more the two ton elephant.
"Yes, who cares take her and the little fucks and leave!" Akira stopped breathing, that voice, she knew that voice but no it can't, it wouldn't! Another wave of pain hit her like a car slamming her it a brick wall, but this time the pain was different; The pain came from her right shoulder where her mate's bond with Gaara was, it gave a burning plus that shook her whole body, Gaara no it couldn't be, he can't, he said he would be fine so why is he DIYING!
"GAARA!" Akira yelled as she struggled to move, her arms and legs refused to budge. "NOO!" Hot teas ran down her face as she listened to the slow beats of Gaara's heart, slowly both of their heats lost their rhythm falling out of their dance, until it was only one heart, her heart that still continued to dance.
"Hmmm, well it seems the Kage was right, she feels the pain of the other Jinjuriki." Akira listened to the new voice that made itself known, it was soft and deep with a smooth tone to it, almost how a snake would sound it they could talk. So this was the Kazekage plan, to kill her and Gaara separately and take her kids away.
"Will Gaara, be fine?" the familiar voice asked.
"He has nothing to do with me, child." The smooth voice responded.
"But the deal was-MATSURI!
Akira's eyes widen as she finally pinpointed the voice it was Matsuri's! Growling, Akira felt the pain and numbness of losing Gaara wash away as rage filled her body. Matsuri was the danger, she was the one that let the other two voices in the apartment, she was the reason why her children and Neko weren't with her but God knows where, it was all Matsuri. MATSRUI, MATSRUI!
"You bitch! You fucking, whore ass bitch!" Akira roared as she brought her eyes to the slut above her.
"Didn't I tell you once before that Gaara will be mine." She laughed but before she could react, she found herself in the jaws of Amaterasu; blood flowed into her mouth as she tried to breath. The beast had her by the throat.
Orochimaru and Kabuto watched the white haired girl attack the brunette. Orochimaru watched as Akira slow rip the girl to shreds and wondered why in the hell would the Kazekage want such a girl dead! Her chakra levels were extraordinary! Orochimaru couldn't think of all the things he would be able to do with that much chakra!
"Orochimaru, are you seeing this." Kabuto whispered as he watched Akira's body start to shifting. A long scale like tail stretched from her back, she hands become claws while sharp spike run up the back of her arms and hind legs, and bat like wings sprung from her shoulder blades.
"It looks as if she betwixt, caught between dragon and human but not being either one." Orochimaru mused as the girl stood up on her hind legs, her eyes glowing a poison purple as she bared her fangs.
"Where is the Kazekage!" she roared as rivers of blood flowed down from her chin to her neck.
"Dead, I kill him, I'm truly sorry but it was long overdue." He spoke as the girl dropped on all four and began to circle the two, her tail blocking them.
"Well then…I guess I'll just settle with the two of you!" she jumped Orochimaru but the sannin was one step ahead, ducking he grabbed her by the throat before jamming his hand in her stomach, planting the five element seal on her stomach. Akira fell limp in his hands, her chakra follow stopped abruptly, she slowly change back to her human form.
The unconscious girl's body gave off steam as she change took over her body, checking her plus Kabuto awaited for orders. "I want to make a combination of the heaven and earth seal for her, along with a stronger version of the five element seal, if the rumors are true and this girl is the host of the Goddess Amaterasu, she can be trouble, don't you think Kabuto?" he laughed.
"Just think with Sasuke's body and this girl by my side I'll become powerful enough to take down the Five Great Nations!"
"Yes, and let's not forget her children, they're still young and with their power over the elements they can be handy tools as well." Kabuto suggested.
"Speaking of the children, where are they?"
"They're with Sasuke and the others just outside the village, and still asleep I might add."
"Good, very good, indeed." Orochimaru smirked evilly, as he walked out the Leaf village.
Dun dun dun DUN! there you go hope you like it, i personally think it was not that great but hey Review and tell me other wise!