Hevan and Hell Basic Plot:
This is part of the basic stucture for a story I plan to write, with some stuff cut out for supsense. I want reactions. Tell me what you think in a review!
Pip dies and gets sent to hevan after a freak accident that misses Kenny and hits him instead. Kenny feels horrible and wants to appologise to pip, proceding to kill himself. Kenny gets sent to hell and meets with a distressed Damien. Damien informs Kenny that Pip was sent to heavan. Both of them are pissed and go to the gates of heavan to speak with Pip. They discover Pip does not want to be in hevan, and they are keeping him prisoner. The duo, Damien and Kenny, break through hevan's gates witht their respective powers of satan and cutulu.
Chapter 1 Plot:
Pip is playing outside the school with the main 4, Cartman ripping on him for something he did in class. Kenny says something and is about to cross the street, when pip realises he is late for something, and runs into the street. Kenny procedes to yell something and try and get infront of him prior to a car hitting him, but is to late. Pip gets his vision fading to black as Kenny joins in a chorus of "No! Not PHILIP!" "Oh my god! She killed Pip!" "You bastard!"
Pip then appears in space, and gets dragged to hevan by a rope. He screams for Damien to help him, but to his loss he is just thrown in a cell, and the end of the chapter is pip screaming a bunch of questions.
Chapter 2 Plot:
Kenny tells his friends goodbye, they ask him what's going on, and Kenny commits suicide. Chorus of "She killed Kenny" and "You bastard" commence. Kenny opens his eyes and he is inbetween hevan and hell. He falls down, and says it hurts to hit the ground in hell. He braces himself for impact, but is instead surprised by floating gently to the ground. When kenny reaches the ground he is on his hands and knees. He looks up to see a crying Damien. He asks what is going on and gets an explination. He tells Damien they have to see his father, and Damien agrees. They rush off to meet satan.
Satan is sitting on a thrown, and is watching an MLP youtube video when damien marches in with Kenny. Satan tells his gaurds to leave the room, and they procede to do so. Kenny and Damien tell Satan what happened. Satan gets very angry and tells them to follow him. He leads them to a training room, where he speeds up time for them, they train for about 3 days, but for Pip it is more like 3 hours.
This montoge ends with Kenny and Damien exiting the room and telling satan they are ready.
Chapter 3 Plot:
Stan and Kyle kiss. Goof off writing chapter.
Chapter 4 Plot:
Pip is being tortured for information on Damien and Kenny. Pip says he doesn't know about Kenny, and the angels can see he isn't lying. They show him information on Cuthulu. Pip gets really scared. Pip screams, and Damien hears this. Damien uses his magic to teleport Kenny and him up to the gates of hevan. They argue with the gatekeeper over letting them in to at least see pip. They tell them Pip, the prisoner, is not allowed visitors, and to come back in a few melenia. Damien is furious and burns down the gate, screaming "TAKE ME TO PIP!"
Chapter 5 Plot:
Pip screams and Damien is led by a flying angel to Pip's room. Kenny is giving them back up by telekenticly by holding back the warrior angels. He is trying to maintain a forcefeild but it is not working very well. The angels give up trying to come at them but they continue to fire their missiles and such.
Hope you enjoyed this little preview!