So… Its been a long time since I last updated this story, almost a year.
Over the last few weeks, I've been changing my decisions about what I'm going to do with it, and as I really can't stand it when people don't finish their stories, I'm going to rewrite this. I'm going to repost it, one chapter per week.
I've grown up a lot since I first started writing this, and my writing style has changed. I've also become a better writer (thank goodness).
I'll post another chapter in this, once I've posted the first chapter of the rewritten story. There'll be different things in the new story, and everything won't happen so quickly, as there'll be a lot more detail.
I'll hopefully post the new chapter over the next week or two