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Last Time:

Suddenly, her hair turned black, as she began to fall toward the ground. Gohan picked her up before she could and flew back home. You did good, Pan. You've made me really happy. Your the first female Super Saiyan. Now, just rest. He took out a sensu bean from his pockets and put into her mouth. Pan slowly chewed it.

The Z-fighters soon arrived back home and put Pan to rest. He smiled at Videl, as she began to cook dinner. Gohan turned on the TV and put the news back on. "Already looking for the next fight, bro," Goten asked.

"We should know who our enemy is first, Goten," Gohan said.

There was a news reporter talking about something curious (again). The reported began his report. "In a city not to far away there have been strange events happening. Electricity in the area has not been working, as if it has been sucked. Electricians can not figure out what the problem is."

"We know who our next fight is," Trunks said.

"That bird is mine," Broly exclaimed, as he began to pound his fists.

"You'll leave tomorrow," Gohan said.

"You're not coming," Trunks asked.

"I've got some stuff to do. I'll come later," Gohan said.

"What do you have to do," Goten asked out of curiosity.

"You'll see."


The Next Day:

The Z-fighters, excluding Gohan, left to toward the city that had Broly's shadow dragon. Gohan waited until they left and then disappeared. The demi-Saiyan soon reappeared at Kami's place. He walked to Dende and said, "I'm here. Can you fix my problem because I'm pretty sure I'm gonna need it to win this battle."

"Don't worry, buddy. I'm going to try to fix your problem. But close your eyes," Dende replied.

Gohan closed his eyes, as Dende hovered his hands above Gohan's head. His hands turned white and he began to "scan" Gohan's head. He suddenly stopped, as he realized the solution.

Gohan opened his eyes and looked at Dende. "What is it, Dende?"

"The problem is ... And the only way to solve the problem is to ...," he replied.

"Damn it. I can't believe I did that. But I'm going to fix it. So how do I do that?"

"Close your eyes, Gohan."

He did so and suddenly he fell to the ground. Dende had hit him on a nerve point, rendering him unconscious. Good luck, bud.

Gohan reappeared into where he was supposed to be. He looked around and shouted, "Come out you weakling!" the half-Saiyan shouted.

Soon enough from the shadows, a figure came out. (A/N: I'm so evil. What a brilliant mystery! Hehehe!!)


Broly and the others soon reappeared at the city and saw everything that was electronic having an electricity electrify itself, as if there was a major malfunction.

They began to walk around when they heard multiple screams. Suddenly, the building next to them exploded, as they saw innocent people flying into the air, most of them already dead.

The others looked at the people in sympathy. They turned toward the source with angry eyes. There came out the maroon bird shadow dragon.

"Ah, so you've found me," Rage Shenron laughed.

"You bastard, I'm gonna kill you," Broly said in fury.

"Is that so," said another voice. Soon enough, Rage Porunga came out, holding someone by their vest. "That's what this guy said. He put up a fight, but he had no chance."

He tossed the person he was holding. Goku turned him around only to discover that it was Majuub. "Majuub! You okay?" Goku yelled.

"Sorry, Goku. I couldn't beat him," Majuub stuttered, as he passed out.

"You're going to die a painful death," Broly said, as he began to power up to fifty percent in his base form.

"Bring it," said both shadow dragons as they also began to power up, reaching the same level as Broly.

The two shadow dragons charged at Broly, who quickly went on the offense. Broly threw a barrage of punches and kicks toward the two shadow dragons. Rage Shenron, hit by one of the punches, was sent flying back, while Rage Porunga kicked Broly in the jaw, sending him into the air. The short maroon bird-like dragon flew into the air and shot a barrage of ki blast at Broly.

Broly, recovered from the kick, put his hands in front of him and formed a shield composed of his ki. As soon as the barrage ended, Broly disappeared and reappeared in front of Rage Porunga, hitting him with a roundhouse kick, sending him into the ground. Rage Shenron and Rage Porunga soon reappeared and charged back at Broly.

The three fighters began to shoot a barrage of punches and kicks toward each other, Broly going mostly on the defense. He managed to hit his enemies a couple of times, but was also hit that same number of times. Broly spaced himself from the shadow dragons and began to power up even more. He soon stopped and charged at the shadow dragons.

He threw a barrage of punches and kicks, and this time, he hit the two shadow dragons every time with ease. He finally smacked both of them into the ground, at which they groaned in pain.

Broly then put his hands in front of him and began to gather green ki. "Blaster Shell!" the Legendary Super Saiyan shouted.

The ki blast hit both of the shadow dragons, who yelled in pain again. When the smoke that had spewed cleared away, both of the shadow dragon growled, as their power level began to increase. Suddenly, electricity began to surround them. They both put their hands in front of them and suddenly shot out a ki blast surrounded by ki.

Broly moved away from the blast, only to be sent flying back by Rage Porunga's fist. He was then roundhouse kicked into the ground by Rage Shenron. Broly was sent crashing into the ground sending multiple rocks into the air. Smoke began to spew.

When the smoke cleared away, Broly stood there with a few scratches and bruises. Nothing too serious. "Not bad, bird," Broly stated.

"I can't say the same for you," Rage Shenron laughed.

"You are way to weak to even stand a chance," Rage Porunga laughed.

"Is that so," Broly smirked, as he suddenly disappeared.

He reappeared behind the two shadow dragons and sent a ki blast into their backs, sending them into the ground. When the two dragons got up, they had once again powered up. Broly smiled, as his aura turned golden, his hair turned gold, his eyes teal, and his strength magnified.

"Let's dance," said the Legendary Super Saiyan.

He charged at the two shadow dragons, shooting out multiple ki blasts all over. Broly shot toward the two shadow dragons and began to gather ki into his hands. He shouted, "Blaster Bomb!" as he shot his open palm into the shadow dragons' stomach.

A minor shockwave shot out of the two shadow dragons' back, as they were suddenly sent flying back, crashing through multiple buildings. "I can't say your a challenge any more."

"I'm gonna kill you, you son-of-a-gun," Rage Shenron screamed, as he began to accumulate electricity into his hands.

Rage Porunga did the same. Filled with electricity, both shadow dragons began to shoot electricity at Broly, who was having some trouble dodging the attack. Broly was finally hit by a thunderbolt, as he yelled in pain.

He sent out a powerful wave of ki at the shadow dragons, so he could recover from his injury. The shadow dragons were prepared for this and went higher into the air. They began to shoot more bolts of thunder at Broly. Broly growled in anger, as he was put back into the defense.

Broly began to gather green ki into his hands, while dodging the bolts of electricity. He suddenly smacked his two hands into each other, yelling, "Blaster ShockWave!!"

A wave of green ki shot all around Broly, hitting the two shadow dragons. Broly then threw a ki blast at the two shadow dragons. The two shadow dragons took the hit and were sent flying back. They crashed into the ground, spitting out blood on their way.

When they got up, electricity danced around their entire body. Their power level exceeded Broly's. Broly looked uncaring. The two shadow dragons charged at Broly, shooting out a barrage of ki blasts. Soon enough, Broly was hit by one. Broly lost balance. Rage Porunga took advantage of this and kneed him in the stomach. He then punched him in the jaw, sending him even higher into the air.

Rage Shenron followed up, by putting his hands on Broly's back, while he was flying upward. Rage Shenron then yelled, "Electricity Circuit!"

Dark blue electricity surrounded Broly's body. As soon as Broly prevented himself from going any farther, he screamed in pain, as a sudden explosion occurred right where he was. He crashed into the ground. When he got up from the ground, his white shirt had been torn a little. His left arm dripped with blood.

"I'm going to kill you," he yelled. He began to grow into a nine foot tall man, with huge muscles and a ripped body. His pupils vanished, as his iris turned white. His hair turned lighter and was more spikier.

"I'm in my Legendary Super Saiyan mode. You're dead," Broly screamed.

"Oh yeah," Rage Shenron and Porunga screamed.

Even with the two shadow dragons, Broly was beating the crap out of them with ease. He put his hands behind him and began to gather green ki, similar to the kamehameha wave. "BLASTER WAVE!!"

A beam of green ki shot from his hands, that sped toward the two shadow dragons. The shadow dragons shot their own ki blasts to send the blast flying back, but all was in vain. Broly's ki blast sent the two shadow dragons into the ground, coughing out blood.

Broly laughed. "Your not even a challenge for me."

"Shut up, you bastard," Rage Shenron yelled.

"I'm going to f----n kill you," Rage Porunga yelled.

The two shadow dragons screamed, as the earth around them began to crumble into pieces. Broly stood there, unmoved by their demonstration. Suddenly, the two shadow dragons grew bright, and a huge explosion occurred. Broly shielded his eyes. When he looked to see the two shadow dragons, he only saw one. There stood a six foot maroon bird with sharp claws. It's eyes were blood red.

"Now face the wrath of Rage Shenrunga," the shadow dragon laughed menacingly.


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