Some might think that I have changed too much with this story, well that is just too bad seeing as at the end of the day, I need to approve, mainly as it is I who needs to feel confident enough to post each chapter. I recently read back, was not quite happy with it, and felt I could improve on what was already there. I might use the chapters of how the story is right now and post them as the original version of the story, which I have published on my account, for those who prefer how it is. I honestly appreciate all who have read and continue to review, but at the end of the day it is I that needs to feel that the content is to my satisfaction. Sorry, to those who do not agree I am not about to change my mind.