Memo and Me Being an Asshole
"My Derailment" is officially complete. I have started the sequel, "God Called in Sick Today." I plan on giving Neema a very happy surprise, and she will receive a very happy ending. Because I like Neema quite a bit, and I'm not into completely cruel/dark stories.
As to me being an asshole... I know the alternate ending was horribly sad. But lets be honest, was that unlike Voldemort? Voldemort, who in this story, does not like Neema being with anybody but him, didn't like her getting married, and pretty much just got owned... was he going to be nice? Or was shit going to hit the fan?
Cass: I appreciate your comment very much in the review section. You were honest with me; you didn't like how it ended. I don't like Draco dead, either, but I wanted to write a dark sequel story with interesting twists of bright light, so I wrote the alternate. I'm a fan of Draco; his daddy doesn't really love him, and his mother never really knows how to truly help him. Does Draco ever get to do what he truly wants to do? No. He always has to do what his daddy wants him to do. And his dad barely ever shows him fatherly love for it, so he lives his life trying to be loved. Aww. Poor Draco. :( Anyway, Cass, I also like how you said it was depressing and all of that. If someone were to lurk in my reviews before deciding to read the story, they could see the comparison between the two endings and all that jazz.
Scara1: Thank you for your continuous support. :) I'm really quite flattered by your review. You said you might cry, meaning, at least to me, that I did a good job in grasping the emotions of Neema, and that the situation was sad, but it was real (as far as FanFiction goes).
FredsForeverFanGirl: I have to ask, what was shitty about it? Was my capture of raw emotion poorly done? Was my vocabulary off? Were my segues between thoughts and occurrences rough and unbalanced? Was it not Voldemort like? Perhaps my overall situation was poorly constructed/thought out/written? Or did you just not like my topic? I do NOT like Draco dying. Like I said, I LIKE Draco, but it's Voldemort like. Which is why my alternate ending, and not my official, real ending. I much prefer happy ever after Neema/Draco life. That's why it's my real ending. The alternate's purpose is to open the door to my dark story with its surprsingly light twists, and happy ever after ending.
I'm probably not going to do a response area again for this story unless I get a review that makes me temporarily blind and fall in love and I have to write back saying something like, "SoAndSo: Will you please marry me? Your review was thoughtful and it expressed your formulated opinion. I am bi-sexual, so I can marry you regardless of your sex. I mean, if we go to Canada or something, because California is still in the process of appealing the anti gay marriage law."