this is my first fanfic and i am open to any type of critic. Please let me know what you think
-hali- Disclaimer; i wish i could say i own twilight and the characters but i am not lucky enough to be the genius that stephenie meyer is and because of that i give all credit to her...
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Chapter 38- taken again.

Dawn was approaching and quickly. The gps in the bracelet was being tracked but Bella's captor was always one step ahead it seemed. I sat in the room impatiently waiting. I was helpless; I was completely and utterly useless. Every sound at the door filled my heart with hope, and every time it wasn't her.

BPOV

I sat in the back of the car, just watching the red hair flowing down her back. A million thoughts racing through my head and I cringed as I thought how upset Edward would be. The car stopped and my face slammed into the head rest ahead of me. I groaned and glared at Victoria.
-"Seriously Vicky, you're gunna kill me already, why don't we be nice until then." The hatred dripped off my tongue as the taste of blood filled my mouth. I spit some out on the floor of the car and watched as she winced. I was leaving a trail of DNA right in this nice shiny car. Maybe if I stalled some dumb ass cop would finally catch up with us.
-"Don't like the sight of blood? Odd, I pegged you to have thicker skin."
-"I just don't like you. You have taken my life away from me, my husband doesn't deserve this." I think my mouth dropped as I starred at her trying to fully comprehend what she had just said.
-"Like I deserved the scars and the nightmares and the pain he gave me?"
-"I'm sure you did. Karma has a way of working itself right."
-"Well then Vicky love I think your husband will get what he deserves." She glared at me and turned back to face the front of the car. She looked like she was mustering up the courage to do something and I began to panic, praying that she would make the same mistake that James had made and wait before killing me. Yet some how, I seriously doubted she would violate me sexually, which is what had saved my ass last time. Why wasn't anyone following us? They had to know that I was missing by now. Victoria slid out of the car and opened the back door. She had a gun in her hand and I had to fight laughing at the irrationality of it. She was clinging onto with cherry colored finger nails a hot pink 9 mm glock. I knew that it was probably some kind of gift but honestly who takes a pink gun seriously? Note to self; learn how to use a gun. That sounded like a good idea with my luck. That is if I ever got out of this mess. Victoria cleared her throat, her glare sent chills through my spine and I realized the gun color didn't matter. I slid across the seat, my eyes locked on her gun.
-"Gimme your hands." Her voice was harsh and stiff, almost like she was scared too. I held out my hands and she clicked on a pair of steel handcuffs onto my wrist. She stuck the gun into my back and pushed me forward. Once inside the abandon building I was pushed onto a couch. I watched Victoria pace back and forth; the confusion on her face was obvious.
-"You don't want to hurt me Victoria." My voice was weak and timid. I didn't want her to do anything that might hurt me. Her green eyes met mine and the hostility bleed through me.
-"I want you to know all the pain in the world; I just don't want to be the one to do it." I nodded slowly, thinking of how to respond. I felt the smooth metal smack into the side of my face before I registered that it was the gun. I kept my eyes shut hoping that maybe when I did open them, it would be to my bed and Edward. I was in for more disappointments then I believed possible.

sorry it took so long for this little guys. i have been ridiculously busy with everything and what not. Please comment and lemme know what you think.

-Hali-