I'm sorry for the story being a bit ummm shaky in the story. I did it without an outline and disregarded many characters. I might fix the story later on however I'm working a new story and I'm making sure I work on all my flaws. I'm glad a lot of you stuck with me and some gave me constructive criticism. I hope my new story "Reach Your Limits" is a step up. If you want great stories try KakashiKrazed he/she has the best stories about him. Thanks again and stay tuned