I have a hundred reviews. Thank you to everyone here... I'll be honest, I never thought my story would come this far. I think I should reveal something: I will be expanding on the concept of the Star Children. You may not see it now, but I will get to it eventually.

DanceDream: I would think Kirby's persistent... Do you know what happened when someone stole his cake? Waluigi's insane, I've said this before. The funny thing about that is that Bowser claims to have an IQ of 9800... Tails is smarter than Bowser, and his IQ is 400.

Anyway, now something a bit different is going to happen.

Super Mario Colors

Glimpsing the Plot


After awhile, Bowser had finally gotten bored of being in the room with Peach, Amy, and Cream. He left. Hours later, Peach and Amy fell asleep. That was when Cream took her chance.

"Cheese," she whispered, pointing to the keys hanging on the opposite wall.

Cheese nodded, flying over to the keys. He took them down, and flew back to the cage to open it. Cream shook Amy and Peach awake.

"Eight more hours, Toadsworth," Peach mumbled, as she went back to sleep.

"Huh?" Amy asked, sitting up. All it took was seeing the open door for her to shake Peach awake vigorously.

"What?" Peach asked, as she sat up. She too saw the open door.

"We can escape," Cream whispered, "Come on, before morning comes!"

The three left the room silently, and were finally able to see what their location looked like. They were in a gleaming white hallway.

"How do we get out?" Amy asked.

"Ask directions?" Peach asked.

Amy and Cream both looked at her apprehensively.

"It was just a joke. Our best bet is wandering around aimlessly, not making any noise, until we find a way out."

Amy and Cream nodded, and the three set off down the hallway. It wasn't long until they came across the sort of map you see in malls, detailing the building they were in with a big red arrow pointing to their location.

"Seriously?" Amy asked quietly.

"Bowser's done it before..." Peach said.

"Mr. Bowser seems like..." Cream trailed off, not sure how to finish her sentence.

"An idiot?" Amy asked.

"Someone who wouldn't know competence if it was labled?" Peach asked.

Cream nodded.

"Well, his plans are usually sound," Peach said, "But he's such a goof that if anything goes slightly off-plan, it all falls apart... Which usually involves 'Those pesky plumbers!'"

"I'm not sure Eggman's plans would work anyway," Amy said.

"Can we get going?" Cream asked, "I want to go home."

Peach nodded, and the three set off for the exit.


While Peach, Amy, and Cream were leaving Eggman's base through the front door, Daisy and Rouge had snuck in a different way. They crawled through the ventilation shafts (which Daisy thought was awesome, and Rouge wondered how the taller girl had even fit), soon coming to the room Rouge had said the Master Emerald would probably be in. Sure enough, it was there, and hooked up to a machine.

"What's it doing?"

"I think," Rouge said, "It's being siphoned of power to go into those." She pointed at two spiky metal arm bands, which were, indeed, hooked up to the Master Emerald.

"Those are Bowser's!" Daisy exclaimed, "He must be planning something..."

"Who's Bowser?"

"Well, why doesn't a lovely lady like you turn around and find out." Rouge gasped. She knew that voice... It was the same voice that had asked for the Master Emerald. She turned around to see a giant yellow and green turtle-ox with flaming red hair and red eyes. "The name's Bowser, the Koopa King. I hope you enjoyed your visit, ladies, but this is the end. THE END OF YOU!" he finished with a shout.

"Run!" Daisy shouted, grabbing Rouge's wrist and taking off. After Rouge got her bearings, she started running alongside Daisy.

"Bwahaha!" Bowser laughed as he crashed through a wall, "No one's getting away this time! My plan is too perfect for two teenagers to ruin!"

"I'm eighteen," Rouge shouted as she ran, "So, technically, I'm not a teenager."

"Now is not the time to be arguing, red!"

"What did you call me?"

"Rouge means red, batty bat!" Bowser shouted, flames gathering "And I'm about to end you!"

"Not today!" Daisy shouted, slamming her fist into the ground. A wall of crystal shot up in front of Bowser, blocking his fire from getting through.

Rouge and Daisy ran out of the base into the Tropical Resort, and kept on running through the hotels until they were sure they'd lost him. Rouge punched Daisy in the shoulder. "Don't call me red."

"Fine," Daisy pouted, "Well, at least we know he's planning something. What? It's gotta be important, he usually saves the end threats for Mario, Luigi, and Yoshi."

"I'm guessing that he's trying to use the Master Emerald's power to make himself stronger."

"Nah," Daisy said, "He did that before, with the Grand Stars - I'll explain later - and he only threatened the Mario Brothers. He's gonna do that, obviously, but his plan is bigger."

"Great, just great," Rouge said sarcastically, "Now we have to find Sonic, and tell him about this so he can do the whole 'hero act' and save the world. Again."

"You make that sound like it's a bad thing."

"For my treasure hunter career,-"

"Jewel thief."

"-It is." Rouge finished as she walked off, ignoring Daisy.

Daisy sighed, and followed Rouge.


I already have part of the next chapter written - It's something different, as well.

EDIT: Huh... I usually spell those words right.