HEY EVERYONE SORRY FOR THE LOOOOOOOOOONG WAIT BUT A BUNCH OF THINGS CAME UP IN THE RECENT TIMES BUT HERE I AM TO MAKE ANOTHER STATUS ANNOUNCEMENT FOR THIS STORY. LET'S GET INTO IT SHALL WE;
1. DON'T WORRY GUYS I'M NOT DEAD NOR AM I GIVING UP THE STORY ANYTIME SOON. THE REASON FOR MY LONG ABSENCE WAS MOSTLY DUE TO SCHOOL BEING ON MY ASS SINCE IT'S MY LAST YEAR OF REQUIRED EDUCATION AND I DON'T WANT ANYTHING HELD OVER MY HEAD UNTIL I LEAVE. THAT AND I HAVE BEEN DOING EXTENSIVE RESEARCH SINCE I FOUND OUT THAT POKEMON XY ENDED BY WATCHING THE EPISODES FOR NEW THINGS THAT CAME UP THAT I NEED TO ADD AND SINCE I HAVE BEEN WATCHING SOME ANIME TO GIVE ME SOME IDEAS TO MAKE THIS A BETTER STORY FOR YOU ALL TO ENJOY.
2. IN REGARDS TO WHEN THE STORY WILL BE UPDATED AGAIN PLEASE JUST BE A LITTLE MORE PATIENT WITH ME SINCE I STILL HAVE TO WORK ON THE CHAPTER I WAS WORKING ON BEFORE I LEFT, HOW THE STORY WILL PAN OUT IN THE FUTURE, DETAILS FOR THE HAREM GIRLS, CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT(IF ALL GOES WELL),GETTING ASH TO HAVE A ONE ON ONE WITH THE ABRA HE CAUGHT WHEN HE FIRST TOOK DOWN THE ROCKET BASE IN CELADON CITY, AND A WHOLE BUNCH OF OTHER THINGS THAT I KNOW MIGHT SCREW AROUND WITH YOU GUYS. YOU ALL THOUGHT THAT I WAS JERKING YOU ALL AROUND BEFORE WAIT UNTIL THE STORY FINISHES.
3. KEEP SENDING THOSE HAREM RECOMMENDATIONS GUYS BECAUSE, I DON'T KNOW WHEN, THE FIRST LEGENDARY CAPTURE WILL BE UPON US. THOSE OF YOU WHO ARE NEW TO THIS KEEP READING, FOR THOSE WHO KNOW DO THE SAME IF YOU WANT; SINCE I FIRST STARTED WRITING THIS STORY I HAVE ASKED EVERYONE WHO HAS READ IT TO WRITE IN A REVIEW(OR PM IF YOU WANT TO) WHO YOU THINK SHOULD BE THE FINAL FIVE GIRLS IN THE HAREM FOR ASH.(SIX IF EVERYONE VOTES FOR HAVING THE HAREM BE OF 12 MEMBERS. BUT I WILL DECIDE THE LAST GIRL TO GO WITH THE MAIN FIVE WHILE YOU ALL VOTE ON THE OTHER SIX.) I HAVE READ ALL OF THEM AND AM KEEPING TRACK OF WHO HAS HOW MANY VOTES. THERE ARE A FEW RULES TO THIS THOUGH; FIRST IS THAT I STOP TAKING RECOMMENDATIONS WHEN ASH CATCHES THE LEGENDARY AS I SAID ABOVE. SECOND IS THAT YOU CAN SEND IN AS MANY RECOMMENDATIONS AS YOU AND AS MANY TIMES AS YOU WANT. EX. YOU SUGGEST YOUR 5/6 GIRLS IN ONE REVIEW WHICH WILL COUNT AS ONE VOTE FOR EACH OF THE GIRLS YOU PICKED AND IF YOU PUT ANOTHER REVIEW WITH THE SAME 5/6 THEN IT WILL COUNT FOR ANOTHER. THIRD IS TO BE CONSIDERATE OF HOW OFTEN YOU POST YOUR RECOMMENDATIONS SINCE I AM THE ONE WHO HAS TO GO THROUGH THEM TO GET THE SCORE(AT LEAST ONE SET OF RECOMMENDATIONS PER CHAPTER WITH AS MANY GIRLS IN THEM AS YOU WANT I WILL COUNT THEM ALL). THE OTHER RULES WILL BE ADDED IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS BUT THOSE ARE THE ONES THAT WILL BE ELABORATED ON.
4. POLLING FOR THE FINAL 5/6 GIRLS WILL END WHEN ASH GETS TO SINNOH. I STOP TAKING RECOMMENDATIONS WHEN ASH CATCHES THE LEGENDARY POKEMON AND TALLY THE SCORES OF THE TOP 10/12 GIRLS TO SEE WHO WILL BE THE LAST 5/6 GIRLS IN THE HAREM. IF YOU WANT ME TO ELABORATE ON THAT DON'T BE AFRAID TO ASK ANYTIME AND I PROMISE TO GET TO IT ASAP.
SORRY THIS WASN'T THE CHAPTER YOU ALL WERE LOOKING FORWARD TO READING BUT FRET NOT SINCE I WILL BE UPDATING AGAIN (HOPEFULLY) VERY SOON.
AND NOW TO ANSWER YOUR QUESTIONS;
To 'Diogo'; I am well aware that Charizard isn't a dragon type but the reason is that Charizard is a dragonoid Pokemon and that I wanted to describe it as such. Thanks for trying to catch that though
To 'MCRagengan'; Thanks, I happy to know that people enjoy reading this.
To ''eeveetheimmortal'; Thanks man you have no idea how much I take reviews like this to heart. I didn't know if I was doing this story and the whole 'Ash betrayed' genre justice since I wanted to make this story as unique as possible without making it too out there. Reviews like these help me get on the right track whether it be good or bad criticism so please everyone keep them coming. That and this is only the second story that I've written so there's that.
To 'NightmareNeko'; No dude mayonnaise is not an instrument...horseradish either.
To 'masterart'; Until now I guess.
To 'Guest(The one who gives the advise)' Review #1; First question/suggestion. Though that does have some sort of ring to it I don't want the traitors to just attack the supporters with force alone. They will also play mind games, get them to convert sides like Brock tried to do to Misty, cast some sort of doubt, among others to make the reunion all the more meaningful. Besides Arceus will only intervene when things really reach a breaking point. Like if they will die or not because of the traitors, teleport them to safety if a disaster happens, etc. not just whenever they face off against the traitors then no real development will take place. Nothing worse than scrapes and bruises. Broken arms or anything worse Arceus will intervene. Second question/suggestion; Same goes for the legends supporting the ones on his side. Too much intervening and the characters will know that they can do whatever they want with the traitors and no character development will take place. If the odds are really against them then the legends can intervene. Third question/suggestion; Don't worry a renewed version of they betrayal will come out and trust me a lot is going to be revealed. Fourth question/suggestion; I'll answer further down since in the second review you elaborated on that. I really appreciate you trying to help out though and I hope my comments don't put you off or anything.
To 'NICK'; 1. Yes they are. Ash is 17 by the time he finished Kalos. 2. The fanfic began in chapter 2 but things really kicked off in chapter 12. 3. The airport that Ash needs to leave Kalos in in that city. 4. Yes it was. 5. Serena went to Hoenn(I never elaborated where she went when Ash left so Hoenn it is since that's where she went when the anime finished.) Clemont and Bonnie went to the Gym to run it since Clemont is the leader there.
To 'Guest(Same as above)'; With the whole extended lifespan thing I can get behind that. Ash and his supporters might want to make up for lost time and spend as much of it together as possible, I can understand that. But with the whole returned youth thing...not so much. I mean sure they can keep their youthful APPEARANCE as they age but being reverted to the age before the betrayal...sorry no dice. They will all go through things during this story and face challenges they don't want to and that will leave impressions in themselves and their bodies when it's over and to just be reverted back to their ages before it all happened will set everything out of wack. ex. Veronica is 6 years old by the time she met Ash and if the supporters and Ash himself get their ages reverted then Veronica will go from being a 12 year old to being 6 all over again even though she went through all the things I will put them through. Their bodies may have healed but they will always remember the infamous 6 years when Ash left and what they went through during that time. Sorry if I put you down with it but there you go.
WELL THERE GO ALL THE QUESTIONS FOR THIS TIME AROUND I HOPE I ANSWERED THEM TO THE BEST OF MY ABILITY AND HOPEFULLY I'LL GET BACK TO WRITING THE STORY SOON SINCE ASH'S KALOS QUEST HAS FINALLY ENDED. REMEMBER TO SEND IN YOUR RECOMMENDATIONS AND QUESTIONS BEFORE TIME RUNS OUT FOR THE RECOMMENDATIONS AND HOPEFULLY I WILL SEE YOU ALL IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. RATE & REVIEW. PEACE.