So I was lying in bed one night and this scene was playing over in my mind. I started to think about it in all the dirty details. So I wrote the last love scene in a different way. I have never written in this style before but I like it. It was hard to choose what scene to include, but I chose the first one as it fit more with the style. This however is your treat.
I tried to send these out to the reviewers, but there were so many it's becoming time consuming, and at TWCS I'm having a hard time reaching out to individuals. I have chosen to add it as an outtake. Your reviews are amazing, and I am touched by the responses I have received. So sit back, make sure you are alone and enjoy, you are in for a great night…
"Well, I am going to sit on the bed over there, and you are going to place this little toy deep within you and ride it while I get to fuck your mouth."
"And why would I do that?"
I'm trying to stay calm, but my words are coming out more of a moan than anything. He knows he has me right where he wants me.
"Because you, my love; love to get off while sucking my cock."
"Get over there, now." I manage to breathe out.
He walks slowly to the bed.
Too slow.
I push him down.
He laughs at my neediness.
I hush his laugh with the removal of my clothes.
His are next.
I watch as his cock bounces free from its confinement.
I drop to my knees.
Not caring about the pain when they hit the floor.
I look at him.
I see only passion, and lust.
I want him.
No, I need him.
I take him in my mouth.
He hisses at my warmth.
I move slowly.
It's payback for his teasing earlier.
Tonight is for teasing.
For pleasing.
I suck him deeper down my throat.
He watches me.
His cock sliding in and out of my mouth.
Watches my tongue as it licks him.
"You're forgetting something," he says.
He reaches his hand between my thighs.
His hand is not empty.
I feel the toy at my entrance.
I allow him to push slowly into me.
I groan as it fills me.
It's not Edward, but it will do.
"Turn it on," he moans.
I reach down and turn on the toy.
I feel it begin to vibrate against my swelling clit.
I give him the same pleasure.
Moaning around his hard steel rod.
Producing vibrations of my own.
He groans and places his hand in my hair.
I love it when he takes me like this.
He leans down.
Bites my neck.
Sucks the skin below my ear.
"Ride it baby. Ride it while you suck me off."
His words make me hot,
Needy, wet.
I begin to move my hips.
Up and down.
Just a bit.
The sensation on my clit is warming.
I feel the coil building up in deep within my body.
I wrap my hand around his base.
Stoke what my mouth doesn't yet swallow.
I'm close.
He knows it.
He can feel it in the way my mouth moves.
It's starting.
"No! Don't you dare come yet."
His words excite me.
I don't know if I can stop it.
I'm so close.
I shut it off.
The spiral feeling in my body begins to lessen.
I moan at the loss.
He guides my head faster
Deeper.
I feel the wetness dripping from my mouth to his cock.
God, he tastes so good.
"Again, baby."
I turn it back on.
I hum loudly as he slams his cock to the back of my throat.
Not in a hurtful way.
No, I love it when he is like this.
Using me.
For his own pleasure.
Taking what I give him freely.
Knowing I do this to him is the best feeling ever.
My spiral feeling of love is building again.
I'm close.
Because he stopped the first one, this one is slow.
It's building agonizinglyslow.
I love it though.
My legs begin to shake.
I'm so close.
My heart is racing.
My mouth moves faster.
My hands grip his thighs.
His cock is in the back of my throat.
My ass is tight.
My lower half is no longer under my control.
No, it's the vibrations and Edward's moans that control my body.
I need to release.
It's building.
Stronger.
Harder.
Painful.
Deliciously painful.
I've never felt this before.
I want it to end.
I want it to go on forever.
My body begins to shake.
My hips are rocking back and forth.
My feet are cramping.
"Bella…"
I love hearing my name fall from his lips.
"Fuck, baby."
"You look so good like this."
"Look at me."
I look up through my lashes.
The love is there.
It's written all over his face.
He moves his hips.
Meeting my mouth.
Thrust
For
Thrust.
He's close.
I can feel him swell.
I'm closer.
The look on his face tells me he knows this.
One word is all it takes to send me over the edge.
"Come."
My body let's go.
My core grips the toy deep within me.
My cheeks hollow out.
I bring him to the back of my throat.
I suck him hard.
I scream around him the best I can.
He holds my head to him.
My body is a quivering mess.
I somehow come down from the high.
Somehow, he still hasn't come.
I continue my movements around him.
"Fuck that was hot. Watching you get off with my cock buried in your mouth."
I smile around his cock.
"Do it again."
It starts over again.
I'm so sensitive.
This one is quicker.
I can feel it build.
My body begins to shake.
I'm not sure how much longer I can support it.
In a matter of seconds, I'm coming again.
I wonder how he has held out on me.
My assault with my mouth has been some of my best work.
He removes himself from my mouth.
"I only want to come when I'm in deep in you, love."
He pulls me to stand.
I'm weak.
He slides his hand up my thighs.
It meets the wetness that is dripping from my body.
"My turn."
He thrusts two fingers inside me.
I hiss and moan in pleasure.
Together they are smaller than the toy.
But feel so much better.
He's moving them in and out.
Faster and faster.
He curls them up.
His finds the one place he knows will push me over the edge.
He rubs.
He pushes.
I can feel it building.
I'm going to snap.
Something is different.
The pressure is different
Not bad.
Just intense.
Suddenly, I scream his name.
There is liquid gushing from my body.
It's running down his fingers.
Running down his arms.
Flowing down my thighs.
Pooling at my feet.
What the fuck was that.
I have no time to recover.
"Again," he demands.
I'm not sure I can.
I can't stand on my own.
"I can't," I moan out.
"You can. Trust me."
I do trust him.
With my life.
He pulls me closer to him.
I bend and rest my head on his shoulder.
His free arm wraps around my waist.
He is the only thing holding up my body.
His fingers don't stop.
How can it be so intense so soon?
It's happening again.
I can feel it.
Once more, I scream his name.
I bite his shoulder.
I feel the liquid.
I've never felt anything like it.
This time his fingers slow.
I'm about to ask him what the hell just happened.
But I have no time.
He stands.
Tosses me on the bed.
Before I know what's happening, he's in me.
Hard.
Both his cock and his thrusts.
We have made love several times.
Tonight, he is fucking me.
My hands run over his body.
Searching.
Not knowing what for.
They touch.
Squeeze.
Caress.
Anything they can reach.
His hands grab my breasts
They squeeze and pull.
He bites and nibbles.
He thrusts harder
Faster.
Is that even possible?
It is, because he's doing it.
In
Out.
In
Out.
He grabs my ass.
Pulls it up.
I notice he is still standing on the floor.
The bed is the perfect height.
My body is close
So close.
"You"
Thrust
"Are"
Thrust
"Mine."
Thrust.
"Come"
Thrust
"With"
Thrust
"Me"
Thrust
"NOW!"
His body stills.
He released deep within my womb.
He screams my name.
My body shakes;
It grips his cock
There are words leaving my mouth.
I can't tell you what they are
They are not coherent.
His body falls on top of mine.
We are still connected.
His weight feels amazing.
Our breathing is matched.
Fast
Hard
Deep.
We come down from our high
Together.
He looks at me
I look at him.
"Do you have any more boxes?" he asks with a smile.
I laugh and kiss him.