Hey guys before we start off today I have a new story idea! And I wanted your opinion on it so here it goes!

Characters:Zane,Jay,Pixel,Cyrus,Jays parents and Cole (I need to think of a villain, any suggestions?)

Mystery/horror

Zane,and his little brother,Jay, Live in the woods on a property of an old abandoned,haunted, bounty . Owned by (who ever you choose). They have a very strict set of rules that they must obey And a secret they must keep or something terrible will happen. One day a caretaker and his daughter,Pixel, are asked to move into a trailer ,located on the property, to make sure no one messes with the bounty . This makes the rules more complicated for the two boys . Should they break the rules? Or should they not? Soon someone who they have long forgotten comes back to haunt them . Making their memories come back to them . To where the day the bad thing happened...

Scales POV

My face heated up like a fireplace, as my heart fluttered into my lungs.

The feeling...it was so nice .Her cherry lips on mine, her warm body wrapped in my arms and her silky smooth brown hair flowing between my fingers.

'I wish this feeling could last forever...' I thought to myself, before Tia slowly pulled away from me, Her face still shocked and concerned.

We both stayed quiet for a while, staring into space, as our thoughts consumed us.

'What just happened?'

'How did it happen?'

'Why did it even happen?!'

'Do I even really, really! Like this girl?'

'I used to be a snake!A snake!'

Sighing, I closed my eyes,as I began rubbing the top of my template with two fingers .'Hm my thoughts...always so dramatic, right?'. I smiled and chuckled a little at that.

Tia must have noticed, because,she looked over at me, her eyes still wet with tears.

Her head cocked to the side ,before saying."S-Sacles ,I'm so sorry I didn't mean to! I just..."Tia sputtered, as freash salty tears left her Hazle eyes. Slowly, pulling her knees to her chest, she barred her face in shame.

My heart sunk to see Tia like this, she was such a nice person,great kisser, good with solving problems and makes me smile...

"Hm, but she's the sister of Jamie, the nature ninja.I wonder if she's still mad at me?"

The thought made me frown, as I rested my chin on my fist, thinking.

"Maybe, I could just apologize and say that I'll work for them...no no no to stupid and suspicious, but maybe now that I'm human they'll believe me!Yes,perfect!"

Back at the bounty.

The bounty so door flung open as ,six, tired figures came shuffling out, with dareths hands tied behind his back.

As the group reached the exiting of the bounty,Cole, unwrapped Dareths bonds and pushed him off the side onto the hard,cold ground.

Quickly,Dareth, jumped up from his spot and brushed him self off before looking up at Cole, with his eyes squinted.

"Y-Your just gonna let me go?" The man asked, receiving chuckles and snickers from the others.

Cole raised a hand to silent them as he said."Yes, we are letting you go,but, with a message for your master..." Dareth looked into Coles purple eyes and nodded, showing that he was listening.

"Ok," Cole started smiling."Tell master 'four-arms' that we will be planning an attack at 12:00 1 week from now, so he could start preparing for the battle ahead, because ya know, we are the nice guys hehe..now...LEAVE!"

Coles voice made Dareth shake, before he turned and ran into the wood. Not even taking a glimps back at the smirking faces.

"Now," Kai said."It's time for part 2..."