I'm going to tell you guys a secret. A goal of MC and mine with all these commentary stories. We plan on getting a TV Tropes page! I don't know why I'm blurting this out but I am! Smiles!

Anyways, this is the last legit chapter, after this is a special. A special.

Cahpert 34: Back Too the clan
Cahpert 34 Back Too the clan

Repeat is Repeat

"AshTki what are you doint here?" asked GleameStar. She didnt se any reson for him to be their righte now btu he couldnt help but fel scarred.

Stargleam is a he and is scarred.

"Im tacking a ckt.' aid AshFur and he grabed TigerKit and wakeld away.

Why does everyone want Tigerkit!

"You rejicted me and so now Im gon aget my refveng on you by RAISNG YOUR KIT TO BE EVIL!1!1!111"

She didn't reject you! She agreed to be your mate but then you made out with Hawkfrost five minutes later!

"GASP NO" YELLED THE CALN THEY COUDNT NELEVE THAT ASHFUTE WOULD O SUCH A TING.

His name IS Assfur. Kind of implies he's an ass.

"Not if i can hlpe it" rored FlufKit and he flew towrd AshFur with is calws open. "YOUR NOT TALING MY BORTHER ALIV!"

Your a kit. Your eyes shouldn't be open.

...

I'm done giving this thing logic.

Al the cats in clan includng StarGlema and JazzFur watched in mazement as the little flufy kit began to attck AshFurt.

Quit watching! Do something!

"NOT MY BOTHER!" FLUFYKIT YELD AS HE ATCKED ASHFUR WITH HIS CLAWS MACKING THE CAT BLED. But evn thoguth he was hurt AshFru stil manged to drag TigerKit off even thoghu the tiget kkti was prosting. FlufyKir fel down and startd to crry.

There, there. He's better off with Assfur then with Stargleam.

"Its ok." said SarGlm and JazzSong as they came to confort the kit. "Im sure he will get back to us eventaly. I men hes your broterh and if hes anythng like you than he s a VRY GOD FIGHTER.

...why are you not going after him? Seriously?! WHAT KIND OF MOTHER ARE YOU?!

Btu Fluffykit waled loudly anywya. His wali was so loud that it alsmto souded like a trmpet. It was sooooooo loudly that a bnuch of cats

What...cats were having brunch of the brunch was of cats?

ran to see waht was goin on.

And amon them...was FIRESTRA!1!1!1111!11

Firestar! Take hold of your clan again! Its falling into madness with Stargleam there!