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Extras and Outtakes: iKeep a Secret.
Want more of iKeep A Secret? Well here are a few extras and outtakes from my story. Some are added flashbacks that I couldn't quite fit in and some are scenes I cut out or changed. So enjoy these few extras and thanks to everyone who read my story! I love you guys, it's been a fun time.
Scene change: My original idea was to have Freddie threaten Rueben and Sam attack Madison. As you probably know, I switched it. Sam threatened Madison and Freddie punched Rueben. I ended up writing both scenes and deciding which one I wanted. I really wanted my original idea but I realized that it was more OOC than the other idea. Freddie isn't the threatening type, although I was itching to have a scene where Sam attacks someone. This is the scene where Sam attacks Madison. Enjoy.
I pushed through the crowd, looking for anyone that I knew that wasn't Rueben. I could barely stand another moment with that nub. To make matters worse, Gibby and Tasha have been all over each other the whole time and Gibby hasn't even been translating anymore.
The fast pace techno music that pumped through the speakers suddenly changed. Now the flow of music was slow and mixed with lyrics talking about love and such. I wrinkled my nose as couples began to pair up with one another. I walked over to the snack table, picked up plate of cake and a cup of punch. I sat on one of the chairs off to the side.
I was the only one sitting down besides a couple making out a couple seats over. Considering that nobody really sat out - alone - at couples dances. Everyone already had dates to dance with. I looked over at the lip-locked couple, feeling something tug at my stomach. I must be hungry.
I scanned the mesh of kids dancing together. I shoved a piece of chocolate cake in my mouth with my fork. Off to the side I saw Jared and Carly dancing. Even though he was quite taller than her in height, they looked nice together. She had her arms around him, resting her head on his shoulder. He held her tightly to him, his eyes closed in calmness. It made me feel sick.
I took a swig of my punch, looking out at the kids again. I hoped to god Rueben wouldn't find me. I'd hopefully lost him in the hallway. I settled my eyes on Tasha and Gibby, who looked more mismatched then me and Freddie. Tasha was so pretty while Gibby was so…Gibby. It still remained a mystery to me, but I chose not to question. Couples tend to work in weird ways.
Finally I rest my gaze on Freddie and Madison. I narrowed my eyes, noticing something wrong. Freddie was looking at Madison oddly and backing away from her. She was smiling widely at him while he looked utterly distressed. He looked around frantically as she held him close to her. His eyes rest on me and he sent me a look that clearly said "help me please".
I rose in my seat and began to walk toward them. That's when I saw Rueben walk back into the gym, evidently looking for me. I back up to my seat again, seeing as Rueben was bobbing above the heads of the couples, searching for his date. I ducked and looked back at Freddie. He looked like he was saying something to Madison and trying to back up. She smiled at him, nearly jumping on him. She wound her arms around him and I stared, dropping my punch on the floor.
She kissed him.
I felt an unfamiliar rage build up in me and I curled my hands around the silver fork in my hand. I set down my cake (I'd probably eat it later) and marched toward Freddie and Madison.
When I reached them, I ripped Madison off of Freddie, fire burning in my eyes. I saw fear clearly strike in her eyes. I pushed her to the ground - hard. Then before I knew it, I tackled her to the ground, yelling obscenities and directing a fork at her neck. She screamed and struggled under my death grip.
"Let me go you crazy, psychotic beast!" She yelled at me but I'd pinned her to the ground of the gym. I faintly noticed that a crowd was surrounding us, chanting "fight, fight, fight."
"What do you think your doing?" I yelled at her. How dare she kiss my boyfriend. Even if she didn't know Freddie was my boyfriend. "How dare you kiss him!"
"Get off of me! Your crushing my ribs!" Madison complained loudly. Only now did I notice that I had my knee driving directly into her side. She let out a wail and cried out for help. I poked the fork at her neck. Then I felt familiar arms around my waist. I kicked and screeched, restraining in the arms. I looked up and noticed that it was Freddie, however I didn't stop my taunting and struggling.
I got to my feet again, only to lurch back at a frightened Madison, who looked weak and defenseless on the floor. Just how I like them. I growled at her as she backed up, trying to distance herself as far as possible from me.
Suddenly, I felt someone else take a firm grip of me by the arm. Then they were dragging me away from the whole scene. I looked to see Freddie looking at me in surprise while I was carried away. I glanced up to see Mr. Howard, forcing me toward the back exit of the gym,
"Samantha Puckett, why am I not surprised." he spat out at me. I looked back at the crowd of people, clearing looking at me. My eyes finally rested on Carly. Her mouth was wide open, her eyes bulging at me. She took a look at Madison cowering on the ground then back at my flustered stature. Oh man, we've been caught, I thought before Mr. Howard forced open the back exit of the gym. "Don't come back tonight." he growled at me, kicking me out of the dance.
"But-" I protested but he slammed the door in my face. I sighed, trying to calm myself down. I looked behind me, seeing that I was now in the alleyway on the side of the school All that illuminated the place was a single lamppost. I groaned, resting on a tall wooden crate beside the door.
Freddie's POV:
"Wait! Sam!" I yelled over the loud music and talking of the kids around me. I didn't bother looking back at Madison to see if she was okay. I left everyone looking at me funny as I ran toward the door that they had kicked Sam out of. I looked back to see Carly looking at me in clear surprise. Oh man, she knows something's up now.
I sighed before opening the door. I stepped out into the alleyway, not having to look far for the blonde-haired girl. She sat on a tall wooden crate, breathing heavily and flushed. In her hands she twirled around a silver fork. The one she'd threatened Madison with.
"Sam." I said calmly. She didn't look up at me. "You are the stupidest girl I know."
"Don't remind me." she grumbled, moving over slightly when I made my way to sit next to her.
"That was…surprising."
"You can say that again." She huffed, looking down at the fork. It was silent a long moment, all I could hear was the music still booming from the inside of the school. They were playing some sort of popular pop song.
"You're not mad at me are you?" I had to ask. She looked up at me, genuinely surprised.
"Why? It's not like you kissed her first." she paused and looking at me in a deadly way. "Right?"
"Right." I answered, smiling lightly. "I can't believe you did that."
"Neither can I."
"Carly saw."
Sam let out a long sigh before lazily resting her head on my shoulder. I was surprised a moment by the action, but scooted closer. Taking advantage of the situation.
"I know, I don't know what I was thinking. I just sort of freaked out and let my natural instinct take over."
"I think I'm more concerned about you would have done to Madison if nobody had pulled you off her." I admitted, smiling slyly into the darkness. She moved her head to glance up at me. Her face was in all seriousness.
"Beaten her to a pulp."
"I find myself not doubting that." I said with a small chuckle. Sam lifted her head but kept her gaze down.
"I might've spared her…" then she seemed to think about the situation again. "Nah."
Extra Flashback: This is the once mention flashback that I couldn't seem to fit in the story, even though I wanted to. This is the scene where Sam and Freddie get caught making out in the girl's bathroom at B.F. Wangs (Dan's knockoff of P.F Changs, a Chinese restaurant) by Mrs. Benson, causing her to pass out:
Freddie's POV
I moved around my Chow Mein that was laying on my plate in a messy blob of noodles. I picked at it, not really sure what exactly was mixed in with the noodles. I picked up something green. What was this? Was it even cooked? I sighed, letting it fall back on the plate.
I usually enjoyed Chinese food at B.F. Wangs. Me and my mom came here every other week to eat Cashew Chicken and Egg Rolls. Today, I just wasn't that hungry. My mind was off thinking about other things. Like my new relationship that I had developed with Sam. I didn't even know Sam liked me, but I guess I don't know her as much as I thought I did. Now that we both knew we liked each other, we were finally dating. Now I just found myself thinking of the blonde more than ever.
I began pouring more Soy Sauce on my Chow Mein and mixed it around. I stabbed my Sweet and Sour Chicken with my chopstick and stuck it in my mouth. Suddenly, I felt my phone buzz in my pocket. I looked up at my mom who was happily talking with one of her friends from down the hall of our apartment, who had decided to join us today.
I fished into the pocket of my khaki shorts and pulled out my PearPod. I looked at the screen, seeing that I had a new text message from Sam. I clicked it open and read the message.
From: Sam
Hey Fredward. You still at B.F. Wangs?
I quickly responded my message from under the table.
To: Sam
Yeah, why?
For some reason, my mom prohibited texting at the table while we were eating. Not that it really matter. She wasn't even paying much attention to me anyway, which was perfectly fine. I picked up my Egg Roll and took a bite.
From: Sam
You should go to the girls bathroom. There's a surprise in there.
I furrowed my eyebrows at the text and quickly typed my response before my mom would notice me looking under the table too long.
To: Sam
What are you talking about? Is this some kind of prank Puckett?
I looked around the small restaurant. There were a few rows of booths, occupied by families chatting happily with each other. The room was rather dark, the lights dimmed. Everything was colored either red, black or gold. Off to the side was a small Chinese fountain and an aquarium with exotic fish, swimming around lazily. I eyed the bathrooms that were near the buffet that was placed along the wall. Behind the buffet was a chef, cooking something that steamed heavily, causing smoke to rise from the dish.
From: Sam
No it's not a prank you pansy. Just come and knock on the girls bathroom and there will be a surprise. Oh and bring an Egg Roll.
I sighed and looked up from my text. My mom was still talking to her friend about knitting or something. I stuffed the phone in my pocket, and decided to just do what Sam had told me.
"Hey, mom?" I said, interrupting her conversation. She paused and smiled over at me, giving me her full attention. "I'm going to head to the bathroom for a second. Okay?"
"Sure honey. Is everything okay?" she asked openly. I rolled my eyes and blushed.
"No mom." I grumbled and scooted out of the booth. I walked past the rows of booths and tables, heading right for the bathroom. I'd totally forgotten the Egg Roll, but I didn't want to make a fool of myself and go back for it.
I walked up to the girl's bathroom, scuffing around nervously. Should I knock? What if someone I don't know is in there, then that would be awkward and weird. However, why would Sam want me to go there? After a while of pondering and receiving a weird look from an employee who passed by, I finally reached forward and lightly tapped on the wooden door with my fist.
It was a moment, as I stood by the door and lightly tapped my foot on the ground. Finally the door clicked open and a hand shot out. They pulled me in quickly, yanking me by the front of my shirt. I was pulled into the single girl's bathroom and turned around to be eye to eye with familiar blue eyes.
"Hey Freddie." Sam chimed. I stared at her confused a moment, trying to register what just happened.
"Sam?" I yelled. "What are you doing here?"
"Shush." she said, clasping a hand over my mouth. "I got bored okay?"
I scrunched my eyebrows and mumbled words behind her hand. She finally let go and I repeated what I had said. "How did you get in here?"
"Well, I could have just walked in, but I wanted to make things interesting." She smiled and pointed at the small window above the sink. "I crawled in instead."
"You're crazy, you know that?"
"I know." she answered excitedly. "By the way, did you bring the Egg Roll?"
I looked down at my empty hands and shook my head. "I forgot it."
"Ugh, why do I keep you around." Sam exclaimed and threw her hands up in exasperation.
"So why are you really here?"
Sam smiled and walked toward me. "I wanted to see you, and I was hoping you would bring some food," She explained. "which you didn't."
"Sorry." I mumbled, looking away. Things were still a bit awkward for me around Sam. She still had that intimidating vibe with me. I knew I didn't need to be as scared of her anymore, considering she was my girlfriend, but I couldn't help it sometimes.
"Who cares, now come here before I decided that coming here was a waste of my time." She demanded, stepping forward and wrapping her arms around my neck. I smiled but was a little surprised by Sam's behavior. Did she really come here just to see me? Somehow that made me feel…good?
She pressed her lips to mine and I wrapped my arms around her small waist. I felt her smiled under our kiss. She ran her fingers through my hair, making shivers run up my spine. I kissed harder and pulled her closer to me. With that, she pushed me against the wall of the bathroom, hungrily kissing me. She ran her fingers across my neck and moved her hands to press against my chest.
I was so into our make-out that I barely noticed that knocks that came from the door. Faintly I heard someone yell and knock a few times. Finally they jiggled the door open and we pulled apart. However, it was too late. They walked inside and stared at us. My mouth dropped when I realized it was my mom.
"F-Freddie…" She gasped. She stuttered a few times, gripping the frame of the door. She let out one last breath before she completely collapsed to the floor. I stared at her wide eyed and unmoving. My gaze moved to Sam, seeing her own shocked and amused face.
Oh crud.
Scene Change: This starts off at the scene where Carly tells Sam that she would like to date Freddie. However, we know that she was only trying to get Sam to break under the pressure and tell Carly the truth. This scene changed because originally I was planning on Sam admitting that she was dating Freddie instead of Carly freaking out on her
Carly's POV
I stared at Sam intently.
"I think I like Freddie." I admitted. Sam turned hastily toward me.
"You what?" she asked, cocking her head toward me.
"I like Freddie." I explained again, trying to contain the smile on my face. "Like, more than a friend."
"You like Freddie? As in our Freddie? Our tech nerd?" Sam questioned, looking at me in disbelief.
"Yes, I was thinking about finally asking him out."
Sam stared at me a moment. Her eyes widened and her jaw fell open slightly. "Ask. Freddie. Out?"
"Well, sure." I said. I shrugged. "He likes me and I like him. He's really changed a lot over the years and I think we could give it another shot."
Sam didn't say anything at first, walking past me, fumbling her hands together. Finally, she turned and looked at me. "I don't think that's such a good idea."
"Why not?"
"Are you sure Freddie likes you?" Sam asked.
I shrugged, pursing my lips. "Well, he's always liked me. I just sort of figured he still liked me like that."
"Are you positive you really want to go out with Freddie?" she asked again.
I rolled my eyes, putting my hands on my waist. "Sam." I said, attempting to sound annoyed. "What is up with you?"
"Nothing is 'up with me'. I just don't think it's a good idea that you date Freddie."
"Oh and why not?"
"Well for one he's a nerd,"
"Sam…"
"Secondly, no girl would ever want to date him. I mean look at him."
Apparently you want to date him.
"That's a terrible excuse. I happen to want to date him." I defended. "Besides, what's wrong with Freddie?"
"What isn't wrong with Freddie?" Sam scoffed. I rolled my eyes. Only Sam would be able to say these things casually about her own boyfriend.
This conversation was getting nowhere so I decided to bump it up a notch. "I happen to think that Freddie isn't that bad of looking. I mean, you have to admit he's changed a lot over the years." I smiled. Sam rolled her eyes and mumbled to herself, turning away. "He's also such a gentleman."
"No, he's a pansy."
"Sam…" I scolded.
"Carly, what about Jared?" Sam piped in suddenly.
I shook my head. "Me and Jared are over, done, so yesterday, no more." I listed off.
"So why start dating so soon?"
I sighed and began to pace in front of Sam. Man, she is hard to break. I need to get under her skin enough to make her snap like a twig. I found myself running out of ideas.
"Well, Freddie's single and I'm single. What's the problem?"
"Don't you want to get over Jared?"
"I was never into Jared." I lied. "What's to get over?"
Sam groaned and turned away, playing with her jelly bracelets on her wrist. "I think it's a stupid idea to go out with Freddie."
"Why are you being so difficult?" I demanded, sounding more harsh now.
"I'm not being difficult." she pressed. "I just think it's dumb for you to suddenly think you like Freddie and ask him out."
"Think? I don't think anything. I know I like him."
Sam sighed and grabbed my shoulders. "No you don't"
"This isn't like last time, Sam. I don't think I like him." I reminded her. She tightened her squeeze on my shoulders.
"Why are things suddenly so different?"
"Nothing is different." I pointed out in an angry tone. "I just happen to like Freddie. What's so wrong with that."
"Everything!" Sam exclaimed. "Everything is wrong with that!"
"Why can't you just be okay with this?"
Sam growled. "Because it's wrong!" She yelled. "You just can't date Freddie!"
"Oh really?" I demanded. "Why not?"
"Because he's already dating someone else!"
Bingo.
"Oh yeah? Who!" I yelled back, trying to keep in character.
"Me!" Sam screeched, pulling her arms back.
Once the word was out of her mouth, she paused. She slowly turned to look at me fully. I grinned from ear to ear, looking pointedly at her. Her jaw dropped and her eyes widened.
"Gotcha." I said slowly, smirking.
Sam immediately knew and she acted on it. Suddenly, she turned on her heel and bolted out of the studio doors as fast as she could.
Deleted Scene: Originally I was going to have Sam and Freddie dance together outside of the dance when Freddie got kicked out. However, I took that scene out. So here is that scene
"We should probably go, I'm starving." Sam complained. I nodded, standing up.
"Yeah, we should go." I agreed. However, I suddenly got an idea. I looked up at the empty doors of the school and faintly heard the slow song that was playing inside at the dance. I looked at Sam and smiled. "But first, how about a dance?"
"Dance?" Sam questioned, standing up as well to face me. "That's corny."
"I don't care." I grinned an stepped forward, grabbing her hand. "Just one dance."
Sam sighed loudly and stepped forward, wrapping her arms around me. "Fine." she mumbled. I wound my arms around her waist, pulling her toward me. The soft sounds of the slow melody from inside hummed quietly. Around us the night had finally set in, letting the stars shine brightly above us. Surprisingly enough, there were no clouds nor rain.
"This is jank." Sam complained, resting her head in the crook of my neck.
"Enjoy the…jank-ness." I answered awkwardly. Sam chuckled lightly and tightened her hold on me. "You know, this whole dance was a flop."
"Yes. Yes it was." Sam agreed. "Good thing you made it slightly more exciting."
I groaned, trying forget about the whole ordeal. "Don't remind me."
"Too late."
I rolled my eyes and linked my fingers behind her back. We continued to sway to the soft music, enjoying the small moment.
*Bows* That's everything folks. That's the total and complete ending of iKeep A Secret. I really did love writing this and I was really surprised that it got so many reviews considering it was my first multi-chapter story for this website. You guys were too nice to me and super amazing about everything. I don't think I got a single negative review. Really if it weren't for you guys, I probably wouldn't have continued with the story much.
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And I know that A LOT of you guys reviewed but these were just some of the people whose names really popped out at me. What I mean is I saw their review almost every chapter or frequently. Thanks so much for the support and I seriously love you guys. For those who I didn't mention, thanks for the reviews as well and the support. It was much appreciated :D
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