This chapter isn't in my abbrivated writing style, which means it's skim-able/skip-able.
Jasper's POV
I took a minute to analyze this woman on the roof while Rosalie fused her arm back to her body.
She was wearing a pair of cut off jean short that were well worn out and a button up olive green short sleeved shirt. The hem of her shirt was ragged and she was wearing no shoes. Her hair was plated tightly against her head, probably to keep it from being used against her. I could see a few twigs keeping her hair in place.
Peter had been right about those curves of her's. I already wanted to bend 'er over a table. I started comparin' her with the females of my coven automatically. Alice had next to no curves, Esme's body was more rounded like she had some baby fat left over, but still looked delicious, Rosalie had the body of Mrs. Jessica Rabbit, luscious yet impractical. Bella's legs looked like she was standin' in the highest of heels, even though her feet were flat on the roof. Her rear wasn't overly exaggerated like Rosalie's, instead it was perky, not immediately eye cathin' but when someone did notice they didn't look away. She was slender, but not in the unhealthy lookin' way like Alice is. Breasts were a bit small for my taste, but I really couldn't complain.
Vamperism had done very well on her body, but even better on her face. The darkness of her lashes and slight tilt at the edge of her eyes almost made her look French. Lips plump like someone just kissed her breathless. Cheekbones high, accenting her petite nose nicely.
She had no battle scars from what I could see.
Overall she was a damn fine lookin' woman and I have no idea how an Omega like Edward was keepin' her all to himself.
"You gonna stare at me the whole time, Cowboy, or are we going to negotiate the release of my husband?"
Of course, that last line was from Bella. What do you think of Jasper's analysis?