this is my first fanfic and i am open to any type of critic. Please let me know what you think
-hali- Disclaimer; i wish i could say i own twilight and the characters but i am not lucky enough to be the genius that stephenie meyer is and because of that i give all credit to her...
no copy right infringement intended.

Chapter 39- I never knewHours, it had been hours. All I could see were her brown eyes meeting mine and the whispered words of I love you on her lips, all I could hear was the flat line of the heart monitor and all I could feel was her body limp in my arms, the only smell that surrounded me was that of her blood and all I could do was hope. Hope to never experience that pain again.

BPOV -

I was getting very impatient watching Victoria pace back and forth biting on her thumb nail. At this point I would have welcomed a gunshot wound or something just to escape watching this girl walk.
-"Hey Vicki, what the hell are we waiting for?" had I really just said that in a sarcastic and annoyed tone? Was I stupid? Apparently I was. She just glanced at me through her pacing and ignored my comment. This agitated me more but I bit my tongue. No need to go on a rampage and purposely get shot, even if it would make my life way more interesting at the moment. Footsteps echoed on the stairs outside of the room and my heart fluttered, in hope. The door flew open and I fought back a smile. Margret was here, the others couldn't be far behind. Her red hair was pulled back tightly across her neck, and her blouse was unbuttoned at the top. She didn't see me though and this caught me as odd. Shouldn't she be looking around for me in a panicked daze?
-"Victoria I got your 911, but I can't stay, Bella Swan was taken." Victoria just pointed behind her at me, but I was too taken aback to say anything. The red hair and the green eyes, the noses that were extremely similar.
-"SHIT VIC! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!?" Margret started toward me but Victoria stepped in the way.
-"She has to pay Margret."
-"What are you going to do to her Victoria? Keep her locked up here and pace her to death?"
-"Oh god no, shoot me now please!" What in the hell was wrong with me? Where had all this attitude come from, this woman had a gun and hated me! Despite the fact that the gun was hot pink, this was a very serious situation, and yet my mouth kept going on its own accord. Margret chuckled and moved to go around Victoria again.
-"What are you doing?" Victoria's voice seemed worn down, but the anger was still there.
-"Let her go, she didn't do anything and you're not capable of doing anything to her." The gun was up and the clicking of the trigger made Margret freeze. I inhaled slowly. It was beginning to look like Victoria was growing a pair.
-"At least let Margret leave, you really think it is smart to get your sister involved in murder?" I was resigned to the fact that I was going to die. At least in my heaven Edward would be there. Then looking up at Margret she winked at me. Yes I wasn't sure but it really looked as if she had winked. Her head cocked to the side and then I heard them. There seemed to be muffled footsteps on the other side of the wall. I started coughing then, hoping to cover them.
-"Victoria, I think you need to let her go. You don't want your baby to live without either parent do you?"
-"She'll tell them it was me. Make up more lies on how I cut her or something. Either way my son has no parents. She deserves to die Margret." Margret sighed and held up her hands in defeat.
-"You're wrong Victoria. I tried though, I really did." The door slammed open yet again and someone tackled Victoria to the ground. A gunshot filled the room and it was just my luck to feel the piercing sharpness burn through my stomach.
-"FUCK!" My voice rang out as the blood started to seep onto my white shirt. That was going to suck washing out. Margret was on her knees next to me in an instant, her palm pressing into my stomach. It only occurred to me as I saw her tear stained face that I had been hit in the worse spot. There was a lot of blood, and I was probably bleeding from an organ or something important. The room was beginning to haze and my breathing was getting staggered. I felt the cuffs unlock and I pushed myself up to move. Deep toned arms caught me as I stumbled and I felt myself being lowered to the ground.
-"Bella? Bella honey can you hear me?" The rich husk of his voice was spilling out worried words. It didn't fit his care free personality.
-"Jacob? Is that you?" My eyes found his and a shiver passed through my body.
-"I love you Jake. Remember that for me?" He shook his head stubbornly.
-"No way Bells. You'll have to remind me." I smiled meekly and felt myself begin to laugh. It quickly turned into a hoarse cough and I felt the thick liquid fill my mouth and spill onto my lips. It was salty and I fought not to spit it out. I felt my cough sputtering and my body gave on last quiver.
-"Tell him I love him Jake, love you to, always."
-"Bella, no don't do this. You have to fight and stay strong."
-"I fought too much last time; I have nothing left to fight with."
-"Isabella you have me, you have Edward and Alice and what about Charlie?" I opened my mouth to answer him but a shudder took over, and soon I gave in to the darkness. I never knew that the voice in the darkness would sound so sweet, just like I never knew that leaving them all would be so easy. I never knew that this wasn't suppose to be the end. I never would know that I was supposed to know his love again.

EPOV

Alice and I were racing to a car. They had found her and were going to take the building soon. We were almost to the car when I felt the pain in my stomach, just to the left of my belly button. It twisted inside of me and I could feel the pain seeping through me. I slammed into the car door and flung it open. Alice took the driver's seat and I saw her give me a side look.
-"Alice you have to hurry. Something went really wrong." She only nodded. I could feel the security as the pain eased into my body, but a hole seeped into my heart. Bella was giving in to the pain. I was losing her again, this time, maybe for good. I never knew the pain I'd already felt in losing her before could be any worse. I never knew it could hurt so badly. But it did. I knew that now.

two chapters in one day period, wow im on a roll. i should attempt to keep busy more often. hopefully you guys like the last two chapters and havent forgotten what is going on. anyways please review.

-Hali-