Hi readers! I finally got a new laptop and am super excited. I decided to go back and reread the beginning of my story and found a big flaw/mistake. I put Grant in there but he doesn't do anything and I don't mention him being there much. I decided to go through and fix it right now so the things that need changing:
Chapter 3- I said that Liz and Jonas took out pistols along with everyone else, imagine them in behind everyone else grabbing all the tech equipment and then Jonas failing to get a stunned into scarred silence and frozenness away from the open beach front and behind the dock to cover
Chapter 4- instead of a guy just holding Zach at gun point pretend it says he had Grant and Zach
Chapter 4- at the end of chapter four I said that Joe was her uncle. Never mind that I was thinking of something else and confused myself.
Chapter 5- when they make a run for the car pretend that Grant went before everyone else to try and get around the house, failed and everyone else caught up to him so he helped them get to the car while Bex and Lucy stayed behind until Lucy made her run.
Yeah I think that fixed everything, so thanks for reading and now here's chapter 48!
Lucy's POV
He grunted and I said, "I didn't think you were that old Joey."
"HEY!" he said and the whole class laughed. Then they elevator binged and Grant, Bex, Zach and Cam walked in. "Hey guys" I called.
I received a chorus of hey Lucy's then a unique reply from Cam she said, "Lucy! Give Joey a break you know he's getting old, you could break his back."
"HEY!" he said, "I'M STILL HERE I'M STILL YOUR FATHER AND I'M NOT THAT OLD!"
"Oh really," I said and took a piece of paper out of my bag that I had been saving, "According to this CIA certified copy of your birth certificate that the new CIA Director gave me as a 'I'm sorry the previous CIA director AKA your uncle mike died' present. It says Joseph Derek Solomon, born on April 15 1969. That means your 46 Joey. Your getting old and from up here I can see the gray hairs coming in." Everyone laughed and I couldn't help but say, "Oh I should get down I think the 93.475 pounds that is me is making the grey come faster. You should really get your hair dyed." I then jumped down and gave him a hug cause he looked angry and I don't like being chased around with big sticks as a 'stress relief exercise' for Joey. He hugged me back and kept his arm around my shoulder and put his other arm around Cam. He then wrapped up class and the interesting things of this day by ending his lecture with, "Even though spies live the life where they shouldn't have families because it could get them hurt, they do it anyway because it would hurt too much to not have people you love to fight for. When we bring people into our lives so they can know about us and what we do we get to convince them we aren't actors." he said looking at me, squeezing my shoulder, bringing me closer and kissing my forehead, "We also have to convince some of the people we want in our lives that we love them and didn't kill their father." he said looking at Cam squeezing her shoulder bringing her closer and kissing her forehead, " We love the people we love like all people do and we just live a bit of an abnormal life. Class dismissed." With that we all left and I went with Jane to our room. We did out homework, caught up on our favorite TV shows and went to bed. Ready for the 5th day on the count down to Blackthorne. Tomorrow is the day we are planning an entrance with Rach Joey, Lizzie and Jojo so that we know it will work and I can't wait.
The Next Day
When I woke up I was surprised to see that Jane was watching Agents of SHIELD and wasn't yelling at me to get up. I looked at the alarm clock and saw that it was 9 am and screamed. Jane then turned around pulling a pistol out her waist band looking for danger and said, "What! What's wrong!?"
"It nine and we have school!" I said exasperated and confused by how calm she was.
"No we don't we lost a day when we gave the boys a tour and hung out with the crew for the rest of the day and most of the night. Its Saturday not Friday." she said it ever so calmly and since I had jumped I decided that I would let out a frustrated but relieved sign and flop onto my bed. then she said, "But your mom said 'She needs her sleep so as soon as she wakes up have her get ready and meet Joe and I in my office.' so get ready and go. Any idea why they need you?"
"Well," I said, "Lizzie, Jojo Rach ad Joey are having me plan a big entrance to Blackthorne. The only thing is I don't have any ideas yet. Will you come with me and help?"
"Yeah sure lets go." she said and we got ready and headed for Rachel's office.
Some hours later
"THIS IS GOING TO BE THE BEST ENTRANCE EVER!" yelled one of the sophomores after I explained the entrance to Blackthorne. (You didn't think I would reveal this did you? I swear its pretty awesome wait about 3 to 4 more chapters. I promise its coming!)
"They're right Lucy this is crazy awesome" said Jane.
"It is Lucy, but are we sure it will work?" asked Ashlyn.
"Who has two thumbs and this crazy ass plan approved by the headmistress, covert operations teacher and the CIA two smartest operatives ever?" I looked at everyone and they all looked like they were about to laugh and I did jazz hands and said, "This girl!"
"Lucy I have an idea, we just have to get everyone to approve it." Jane said.
"Okay what is it? right now I want you all to know if you have suggestions we can take turns telling them and I'll bring them to the headmistress and Solomon, if its something little like everyone getting a matching ring we can just decide that on our own. Everyone got it?"
I was given a chorus of everything from 'yes' to 'capeesh'. I said, "So what's the idea Jane?"
"Well I was thinking we could all wear disguises and introduce ourselves to everyone after the big entrance. Then we show ourselves after we introduce ourselves." she said.
"I like it, what do you guys think? hands up for yes and down for no, and this is majority rule guys." I said and counted the hands. Then I said, "I count 21 for 9 against. anyone wish to trade sides?" everyone shook their head no and I said, "Then its settled. Sorry guys but majority wins. Any other ideas?"
"I have one other idea is that's okay Lucy." said Jane.
"Yeah of course it is I'm sure everyone wants to hear it!" I said cheerfully.
"Well I was thinking what if you and I changed styles because then your the big bad ass leader and we are your awesome underlings." she said.
"That sounds cool hands up for yes down for no." I said and counted, then said, "I count 15 for 15 against. I didn't count on this happening and did not come up with a system to solve it so I'll just leave this one up to the headmistress, unless you guys think I should get Cam Macey Bex and Liz and see what they think."
Everyone chanted for me to get the girls so I pulled out my phone and called Cam. She said, "Hey Lucy, What's up?"
"Hey Cam!" I said, "Can you and the girls come up here for a minute. We are deciding last minute things for the trip to Blackthorne and need opinions from you and the girls."
"Lucy I'll come but there's something I have to tell you that is really important after okay."
"Okay, and just a question who from the crew is going to Blackthorne?"
"Macey doesn't have a choice. I've always wanted to see Blackthorne. Bex wants to go kick butt and Liz is going to stay here with Jonas and Preston. Grant wants to go make sure Bex kicks butt while not killing people and Zach won't let me go without him." she said.
"Okay, how about you and Macey come up because it is a fashion opinion. Your the voice of reason and Macey is the voice of fashion so it is kind of perfect so come on up to the common room."
"On the way." she said and hung up. A minute later her and Macey walked through the door and she said, "What do you need our opinions on?"
"Jane had the cool idea of the two of us switching styles while we are at Blackthorne so I'm the big bad ass leader and they are my awesome and matching underlings. what do you two think about it?"
They looked at each other for a minute having a conversation with their hands and eyes then they said, "it sounds so cool." At the same time in sync like Jane and I do. Then Cam said, "Lucy the really important thing now?"
"K I'm coming." I said chasing her down the hall with Jane and Macey hot on our heels. We headed deep into the school until we came to a place that even I hadn't been before. It looked like a prison. I said, "Cam what is this place?"
"School prison." she said.
"Okay," I said, "So why are we here."
"Because we aren't the only ones that survived the facility in the Alps." she said.
"What? I know that Maddie survived all the torture too but that place got blown up with Alyson and her minions inside. We're safe." I said.
"I hate having to tell you this, but you have your very own Goode enemy Lucy." she said slowing down to stop at a metal door with more locks than I cared to count.
"You don't mean-"
"But I do Lucy, I'm sorry but Allyson is still alive and she is still hunting you." she said and I saw spots. I stumbled and as I stumbled the door opened and the boys bex and liz came out. Zach looked to Cam and said, "You told her?"
"Of course I did. I was not going to let her go to Blackthorne without her knowing that she is being hunted like I was."
"Do you even think about what being hunted did to you?"
"I do Zach everyday and I am not in the mood to think about my past problem right now if you can't see my sister had a problem and I intend to kill it for real this time." She said walking away. I stumbled into the wall and Zach gave me a weird look. I grabbed onto it then the bars of an empty cell and started yanking on them screaming in frustration. Zach and Jane ran over trying to get me to stop but I couldn't I was too unhappy. Then Zach pulled me away from the wall and said, "Save it for my sister. Don't waste it on a wall that isn't going to break anytime soon. I suggest storing this new found anger until Blackthorne and then unleashing it on the boys there."
"Okay" I said looking down at the ground.
Then Zach grabbed my chin and made me look at him he said, "I'm sorry Lucy."
"Its okay Zach it isn't our fault." I said.
"Yes it is Lucy. I had an opportunity to kill her long before I met you and Cam. I could have prevented this and I didn't I'm sorry."
"Its okay" I said giving him a hug. I think I surprised him because as he was talking, he came to a point where he couldn't look at me. When I let go of Zach I was still stumbling and he said, "Lucy, are you okay?"
"Yeah, just a lot to take in." I said.
"Okay how about I take you and Jane to the kitchen for ice cream then back to your room so you two can hang out." he said. I was about to say yes, but then bex picked me up Macey grabbed Jane and Liz ran after us. We went to the kitchen, grabbed as much ice cream as we could carry, shoved most of it in the fridge/freezer then got Cam. We all put on our favorite and most comfortable PJs and even though it was the middle of the day we spent the next two days eating ice cream and watching spy movies and tv shows. Even though I tried to drown myself in ice cream so I didn't have to think about it, it didn't work. I could never get rid of that awful pit in my stomach and I was still counting down the days. Four more school days then we get here on Friday the 1st of November.
