The day has finally come...are you ready? It's time to unveil the new multi-part story...which is based on one of the scariest and quite frankly, most popular horror game of all time...Five Nights at Freddy's. Since you guys gave me 10 episodes, I'm prepared to give you this in return. You wanted it. It's finally here...
And since nobody was able to figure out the hint I gave everyone, here is the answer:
The hint was the text written in the author's notes at the end of all 10 of the previous episode chapters: (number) chapters until the new story. This text is actually a reference to a text in the fourth installment of FNAF (# days until the party). So yeah, sorry if that was a hard clue.
But before we get started, I have to tell you guys about another freaky Grojband-related dream I had (don't worry, there's no blood or death in this one). I know what you're thinking: corneyforever, we've been waiting for this story for so long, why do you have to waste our time with your stupid dreams? First of all, this one isn't that long so I doubt I'm wasting that much time. Secondly, you can skip the author's notes if you want to or just read the chapter now and come back to them later. Just saying.
Anyway, in this dream, I was watching a spin-off of Grojband called "History Grojband" (I think that's what it was called; weird title I know), which was basically about what the characters of the show would be like in the future. Frankly, I don't know why the show had the name "Grojband" in it because there wasn't a band in it at all. And let me just say, if this show really existed, the creators would have gotten almost everything wrong about the characters. First of all, Corey and Laney's clothes and attitudes were enough to make me bang my head against the wall. Corey practically acted like a rich gentleman and Laney was super-girly and always wore dresses. Not to mention, she wasn't even in love with Corey! But the weirdest part was that the main villain of the show wasn't Trina; it was Mayor Mellow, who for some reason transformed into a robot. Kin and Kon were robots too and they were working with Mayor Mellow to help him destroy Corey and Laney. That's right. Kin and Kon were working for the bad guy. Seriously brain? What is wrong with you? Trina was in the show too except she was no longer Corey's sister. She just acted like a bully to Corey and Laney. The only things that were the same was that Mina was still Trina's slave and Trina still had a crush on Nick Mallory.
Gee Kon, I guess you were right when you said that "dreams are weird". Anyway, let me know what you guys thought about my dream in your reviews. And now...the moment you've all been waiting for...the first part of Nightmare at Freddy's...begins now...(disclaimer: I don't own any songs used in any parts of this story)
Chapter 53
Nightmare at Freddy's Part 1
It was a dark and stormy Sunday night in Tranquil Town. Rain was pouring down on every street and corner. Lightning struck and thunder boomed every so often. The citizens had boarded themselves up inside their houses in attempt to avoid the dreaded storm. Despite the terrible weather, none of the townspeople were upset. In fact, most of them were quite happy actually. Some were sitting cozily near a roaring fire. Others were playing board games by candlelight. And some were just enjoying spending time with their loved ones. However, on this particular night, there was one citizen who was not happy. Mainly because she was all alone and had nobody to spend time with. Some know her as the "brunette-next-door". Others call her "the one with the demon sister". But most know her as…Jackie Matthews, manager of Grojband.
Jackie was sitting on the bed in her room, which was completely dark, considering the storm had caused a huge power failure at her house. The young teen looked out the window and watched the rain fall. She clutched the picture frame she was holding to her chest and tears began to stream down her face. She looked at the photo, wiping some tears away. The picture was of her and her dearest, closest friends.
"I'm so sorry…" Jackie whispered. "This is all my fault…"
Then the girl rested her head against her arms and cried heavily. Lightning struck and revealed four familiar items sitting on Jackie's bed: an orange skull beanie, a hair clip, a pair of glasses, and a red sweatband. These things were all that was left of Jackie's best friends and band, Grojband. And while you're reading the beginning of this long awaited multi-part story, you may be asking yourself just what exactly brought upon this horrific scene? Well, as the narrator, I'm prepared to tell you everything. So listen closely…if you dare.
It all started Friday morning, the day before the tragic event took place. Jackie was helping her friends practice their music, like she always does.
Corey strummed one more chord and ended the song. Jackie stood up and clapped.
"Nice work guys! I don't think you could sound any better!"
"Well, that'd be saying something Jacks." Corey bragged. "I sound good no matter what!"
"Uh, Core? She was talking to me." Laney corrected him.
"No way!" Kon argued. "You wouldn't be able to play anything if it wasn't for me!"
"Guys! Guys!" Kin interrupted. "You don't have to fight. You're all the best! That is, the best at being second-best to my keyboard skills! Right Jackie?"
Jackie giggled. "Your keyboard skills are amazing Kin, but I think you all sounded incredible! In fact, you guys deserve a break. Let's take five and get some juice boxes from the kitchen. My mom got the variety pack with all of our favorite flavors!"
"Yay!" Grojband cheered.
The five of them left the garage and headed for the kitchen. Jackie opened the fridge and took out five juice boxes, each one a different flavor. Then they all sat down and sipped them.
"These things taste so great!" Kon commented. "We never had juice this good back in our world!"
"Well, let's finish these fruity fluids fast so we can get back to practicing, guys!" Corey said. "We gotta make sure we're ready for our next gig!"
"And what exactly is our next gig Core?" Laney questioned. "And more importantly, how are we going to get lyrics for said gig?"
Corey patted Laney's cheek, making her blush.
"Cool out dude! It's summer! There's practically gigs on every corner! And once we find one, we'll score some lyrics from Tracy!" Corey paused. "Huh, speaking of which, I wonder what she's doing right now?"
SHE'S PROBABLY UP TO NO GOOD!
Tracy was in her room, pacing the floor.
"Argh! Macy was totes supposed to be here twenty whole seconds ago!" she griped. "What is keeping her?!"
The door to Tracy's room opened and Macy stepped in.
"Tracy!" she panted. "I'm here!"
"Well, it's about time or whatever. When are you going to learn how to get here faster?"
"Well, I left my house as soon as I got your text telling me to come here, and then I-"
"Ugh! It was a rhetorical question Macy! I don't care about your lame excuses! Now, I suppose you know why I made you come over."
"Well, you didn't put that in your text so-"
"Hmph! Figures you wouldn't know. Macy? Today is the day…the day I've been waiting for my entire life! Or at least since last year."
"What day Tracy?"
"Seriously? I've reminded you about this like seven times already! It's the day that I, Tracy Matthews, will finally destroy Grojband!"
"Really? It's that day already?" Macy looked at her phone. "I had that marked down for next week."
Tracy snatched Macy's phone from her and began changing her settings. When she gave the phone back, the date was different.
"There! Now it's official! At last, I'll finally be rid of my annoying sister's even annoying-er band! Never again will I hear that tortuous noise they call music!"
"That's great Tracy! So, uh…how are we going to get rid of them?"
"Uh, duh! That's why I called you over here Macy! I don't have a plan, so you're going to think of one for me!"
"Oh! Of course Tracy! But uh…I'm not sure I can come up with one…"
Tracy facepalmed. "Ugh! It's like this is your first time destroying a gross animated band! Honestly Macy, you're so pathetic!"
The taller girl picked up a magazine labeled "Super-Cute Villain Monthly" and threw it at Macy's face.
"I so have to do everything myself! Here, look through this and see if it gives you any ideas!"
So Macy flipped through the pages of the magazine, until she found an advertisement that was particularly interesting to her.
"Huh…hey Tracy! Listen to this! They're opening a new restaurant in town!" she began reading the ad. "'Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. A magical place for kids and grown-ups alike, where fantasy and fun come to life. Opening this Saturday near Tranquil Town square. Come and meet Freddy and all his friends!'."
"Macy? Who cares about some dumb restaurant?" Tracy looked at the advertisement and screamed when she saw the animatronic characters. "Eeek! Scary puppets!"
"Aww…they're kinda cute Tracy. The bunny especially."
"Macy, you know how I feel about puppets! Get them out of my face!"
"But they're just robots. They wouldn't hurt a fly, unless of course they were programmed a certain way."
"I don't care! Just-" Tracy paused. "Wait a minute…what was the last thing you said?"
"Uh…they're just robots, they wouldn't hurt a fly?"
"No! After that!"
"Oh! Unless of course they were programmed a certain way?"
"Yes! That's it! Macy, your creepy puppets have just given me the greatest idea on how we can get rid of Grojband for good!" Tracy ripped the ad out of the magazine. "First, we'll trick those losers into going to that restaurant. Then you'll sneak in and reprogram those freaky animatronics to make them want to destroy the first people they see!" Tracy opened her dresser drawer and pulled out a lighter and a little picture of Grojband. "Once those puppets do their thing, Garbojband will finally be gone forever!" Tracy lit the picture on fire and laughed maniacally.
"Great idea Tracy!" Macy said. "But um…how are we going to get them to go to the restaurant?"
Tracy just gave a wicked smile, for she knew exactly how to get Grojband there.
Corey zipped into the garage, holding up the ad for the restaurant.
"Guys! Check out this advertisement I found sitting by Tracy's bedroom door!" he cried. "It's for some new place called Freddy Fazbear's Pizza and it says they're looking for a band to play on opening night!"
Laney and the twins went over to Corey to get a closer look. Tracy and Macy were by the door, listening in.
"Why at night?" Macy asked.
"There'll be no witnesses. Now shh!"
"Whoa, check out those animatronic animals!" Kin exclaimed. "They've got their own instruments and everything! Looks like the perfect place for us!"
"I hope being the opening night band means we get free food!" Kon wished.
Jackie took the paper and read it.
"I don't know guys. It kinda sounds like you wanna turn yourselves into animatronic puppets again. And we all know how well that went last time."
"Relax Jacks! You're starting to sound like Laney! You think we haven't learned by now? There'll be no Grojband puppets this time!" Corey remarked.
"But, this place looks kind of babyish." Jackie observed. "And playing there might make you look babyish. Do you really wanna be known throughout the town as a kiddie-band?"
"C'mon! It'll be fun!" Corey persuaded. "And once it's over, all the kids in town will love us!"
"For once, I actually don't have a problem with this plan." Laney took back the ad. "Especially since those animals look sooo cute!"
"Then it's settled!" Corey declared. "Grojband? We're gonna play at that restaurant tomorrow night and become the go-to band for kids everywhere!"
Jackie shrugged. "Well, you guys can go if you want, but I'm just telling you now, I can't go with you. It's my cousin's birthday tomorrow and we're going out to a REAL restaurant."
Corey realized something. "Hey, wait a minute…if there's a birthday party tomorrow, why didn't you tell us about it?"
Jackie blushed. "Oh…yeah…about that…remember when my aunt Patty invited you to play at her wedding a few months ago?"
"Sure, but what's that got to do with anything?" Corey asked.
*Flashback to the wedding ceremony*
The door to the church opened and Jackie's aunt Patty began walking down the aisle in a beautiful white gown. Jackie was sitting up front with her parents.
"Okay guys!" she whispered to the band. "That's your cue!"
Kon counted them in. "One, two, three, four!"
The all began playing a very loud and fast-paced version of 'Here Comes the Bride'. Everyone in the church covered their ears and rocked in their seats. The band's music caused the roof of the church to crack and eventually fall apart. All of the guests managed to exit the building before they got hurt. All except Aunt Patty who was knocked unconscious by a piece of the ceiling. Once the church crumbled to the ground, all of Jackie's family and relations made angry looks at Grojband.
Corey cleared his throat and talked into the mic.
"So uh, we still get free cake for this right?"
"Someone's in trouble!" Tracy sang to Jackie.
*End flashback*
"It took weeks to repair the church and Aunt Patty almost got a major concussion!" Jackie recalled. "After that incident, my parents told me they don't want me to bring you to family events anymore."
Kin's eyes filled with tears.
"They don't like us?" his fantasies of marrying Jackie were crushed.
"Cheer up Kin." Corey insisted. "There's plenty of time to get on Jackie's folks' good side later! You know what they say: The show must go on!"
Tracy giggled to herself, happy to know that her evil plan was set in motion.
KIN WANTS TO MARRY JACKIE!
Saturday night had finally come. Tracy, Macy, and Grojband were on their way to the new Freddy Fazbear's Pizza for the band's 'show'. Jackie and her parents had already left for the party.
"Thanks for giving us a lift to the gig Tracy!" Corey acknowledged. "I can't wait to see the looks on those kids' faces when they see us on stage!"
Tracy smiled innocently. "Anything for my baby sister's band!"
"Is anyone else somewhat suspicious of Tracy being nice to us?" Laney asked.
"Nah." Corey decided. "The author probably ran out of insults, so she's giving us compliments instead!"
Tracy snickered and whispered to Macy.
"This is too good to be true! Those fools will believe anything! Once those puppets eliminate them, I'll finally be free! That is, as long as you reprogram those things the right way. You will do it right, won't you Macy?"
Macy nodded nervously. "You bet Tracy! I won't let you down! Not after what happened last time…"
"Good!" Tracy tossed Macy her phone. "Text my parents and tell them I'll be late for my dumb cousin's party. I have to…take out the trash!" she giggled quietly.
After a twenty minute drive, Tracy's car finally pulled up to Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. Grojband stepped out of the car so they could get a closer look at the new restaurant. With the band distracted, Tracy and Macy were able to sneak around to the side of the building. They looked through the glass window and saw three animatronic animals on stage: a brown bear with a top hat, a purple bunny wearing a bowtie, and a yellow chicken wearing a bib with the words 'Let's Eat!' written on it.
"There they are Tracy!" Macy said.
"I know that Macy! Unlike you, I can see fine without glasses. Now get in there and reprogram those monstrous marionettes already!"
Macy reached into her purse and pulled out a laser cutter, which she used to cut a hole through the window. She then crawled through the hole and snuck over to the stage where the animatronics were. Using the tools she kept in her purse, she began to reprogram the animatronics.
"Wow! This place looks fun!" Kon cried. "Let's go in!"
"Um, guys? It doesn't look like we can go in." Laney pointed to a sign on the door. "See? It's closed."
Corey scoffed. "They probably just hung that up to keep people out while we rehearse! It's closed to everyone else, but to us, it's open!"
The blue-haired kid pulled on the front door, but found that it was locked.
"Huh?" he pulled even harder, but it still wouldn't open.
Tracy was watching them the whole time. She facepalmed when she saw Corey struggling to get the front door open.
"Ugh! They are sooo pathetic!" she turned around. "Macy!"
Macy popped out of the hole in the window and handed her BFF a key. The dark-haired teen then threw it at Kon's head.
"Ow!" Kon looked behind him and saw the key on the ground. "Hey guys! Maybe we should use this!"
"Yes!" Corey took the key. "Way to go Kon!"
As Corey unlocked the door, Laney couldn't help but feel uneasy.
"I don't know Core. I still have a feeling we're not supposed to be here."
The door opened and the four band members stepped inside. Corey flicked a switch to make the lights in the room turn on. That's when they all saw the animatronics standing on the stage.
"Hey look! It's those robots we saw on that advertisement!" Kin observed.
"Wow, I know I said these guys were cute before…" Laney said. "But up close, they look kinda creepy."
Then suddenly, the eyes on the bear animatronic began to move downward and he saw the band in front of him. Thanks to the upgrades Macy gave him, he was able to scan all four of the teens. When the scan was complete, a message popped up on the bear's programming screen. The message was in all-caps and it was only one word: 'Destroy'.
"Aw c'mon Lanes!" Corey shrugged. "They're a band just like us! I'm sure they're just looking for a good time!"
"Hey everyone!" the bear animatronic said. "And welcome to Freddy Fazbear's Pizza! I'm Freddy Fazbear and these are my pals, Bonnie and Chica! On the count of three, let's strike up the band!"
"See?" Corey claimed. "They're totally harmless!"
"One…two…(time to die)…three!"
Corey froze. "Wait, what was that last thing he said?"
SLAM!
The front doors of the restaurant banged shut and the room went dark.
"AAA!" Grojband yelped.
"What's happening?!" Corey panicked.
"Guys? I don't like this anymore!" Kon exclaimed.
The animatronics began to play creepy music.
(Original Song: Welcome to Freddy's by Madame Macabre)
Chica: (to Corey) I can see you there
With your beanie and blue hair
Soon you and your band
Will fall under our command
(To Laney) Excuse me little boy
Don't touch me, I'm not a toy
Touch me and I might
Have to give your hand a bite
(To Kin) What's this? Oh my word
You're a funny-looking nerd
Though you're small in size
We like children with four eyes
(To Kon) And last but not least
Is the biggest of our feast
His weight is acute
But he might still fit in a suit
Bonnie and Chica: Time for us to move in closer
Give up now, your life is over
Try to hide, but we will find you
You'd better look out behind you
Singing like this wastes our power
But we still can last for hours
We can hear your hearts pound heavy
Time to play, we hope you're ready!
Freddy, Bonnie, and Chica: Shouldn't have come here
To this house of fear
You look quite scared already
As the clock ticks on
You pray to reach dawn
But you won't last long at Freddy's
The animatronics stepped off the stage and moved toward Grojband.
"What do we do Core?!" Laney worried.
"There's only one thing we can do Lanes! RUN!"
The four screamed and ran away from the animatronics.
"You can run but you can't hide!" Bonnie called.
The band sprinted as fast as they could down the halls of the restaurant. Corey spotted a room with an open door.
"In there! Quick!"
The kids scrambled into the room, which appeared to be a security guard's office. Laney noticed two buttons on the wall. One was labeled 'Door' and the other was labeled 'Light'. She quickly pressed the door button and the door closed before Bonnie could get in.
"Hey!" a man sitting in an office chair said. "How'd you kids get in here?"
Kon pushed the man out the other door, causing the tablet he was holding to fall out of his hands. He fell right in front of Chica. She looked down and saw him by her feet.
"AAA!" the man covered his face. "Don't kill me!"
Chica kicked the guard aside and planted her face to the office window.
"You kiddies can't stay in there forever! Using those doors uses up the restaurant's power! Once the power goes out, the doors will open right up and you'll be all ours!"
"Oh man, she's right Core!" Laney clamored. "What do we do?"
"Hold on! Hold on!" Corey reached into his pocket and pulled out his cell phone. "Yes! Don't worry guys! I'll call Jackie and she can come and get us out of here!"
He dialed Jackie's number and waited for her to pick up.
"Hi!" Jackie's voice said on the other end.
"Jacks! It's me Corey! We're in big trouble! You've gotta-"
"I'm sorry, but I'm not available right now. Please leave a message and I'll get back to you as soon as possible."
"What?! Are you kidding me?!"
"What's wrong now?" Laney asked.
"She didn't answer!"
"Knock, knock!" Bonnie banged on the door. "The Easter Bunny's got some candy for you!"
"CALL HER AGAIN!" Kon shrieked.
Corey redialed the number while the animatronics started singing again.
Chica: They don't let us out
All the people scream and shout
After they go home
That is when they let us roam
Once we got a taste
But they shut us down in haste
We began to smell
Why you ask? We'll never tell
Who's that on the phone?
You're supposed to be alone
You're not playing fair
We'll just have to break in there
You can join the crew
We have got some suits for you
I cannot see how
Your manager can save you now
Bonnie and Chica: Stalking hallways getting closer
Got you now, it's nearly over
Try to hide, but we will find you
You'd better look out behind you
Careful not to waste your power
We can still go on for hours
We can hear your hearts pound heavy
Here we come, we hope you're ready!
Freddy, Bonnie, and Chica: Why did you come here?
Your end is quite near
Pray that those doors hold steady
You've made it quite far
It's rather bizarre
But you won't last long at Freddy's
"C'mon Jacks! Answer! Answer!" Corey begged.
Jackie, meanwhile, was dining with her family at a fancy restaurant for her cousin's birthday.
"Madam? What would you like to order?" the waiter asked Jackie.
Jackie was about to answer until her phone went off. She looked at the caller ID and saw that Corey was calling her again.
"Madam?" the waiter repeated.
Jackie declined the call and turned her phone off.
"So sorry about that." she chuckled nervously. "Um…I'll have…"
"Voice mail again?!" Laney wailed. "We're doomed!"
"Okay, let's not panic!" Corey reassured his friends. "We only have to wait long enough until Jackie calls us back! And like that creepy bird thing told us, those doors will stay closed as long as we have power! And we have plenty of power left!"
"Uh, Corey?" Kin showed his leader the percentage of power left on the tablet. It read 0%.
Both doors in the office opened and the animatronics got in.
"Aha! Now we gotcha!" Freddy shouted.
"AAAAAAA!" Grojband screamed.
"On second thought, forget waiting for Jackie!" Corey announced. "Let's get out of here!"
Using their wits, the four managed to dodge the robots and escape the office.
"After them!" Freddy ordered.
The band ran all the way to the back of the restaurant and found a curtain with a sign in front of it that read 'Sorry! Out of order'. They decided to use it as their new hiding place. On the way in, they bumped into something tall and furry. They looked up and saw a red fox animatronic with a hook for a hand.
"Arrgh! Who dares disturb Pirate Captain Foxy?" the fox demanded. "Ye barnacles will walk the plank for that! Any last words?"
Corey still had his phone up to his ear and had just finished listening to Jackie's voice mail message for the third time.
"At the tone, please record your message." the phone beeped.
Corey: I just want to go home
Laney: Don't want to be alone
Kin: Why can't this be a dream?
Kon: On the count of three, scream
All: One…two…three…
AAAAAAAAA!
Corey and the gang ran away from Foxy and started looking for the exit. The animatronics continued to chase them.
Animatronics: Shouldn't have come here
To this house of fear
Your time has come, hope you're ready
As the clock ticks on
You pray to reach dawn
But you won't last long at Freddy's
Why did you come here?
Your end is quite near
Your time has come, hope you're ready
You've made it quite far
It's rather bizarre
But you won't last long at Freddy's
Finally, after a bit of a chase, Grojband made it back to the main dining area.
"There's the way out!" Corey ran to the front doors and started pushing them. But they wouldn't budge.
"Hurry up!" Kin warned. "They're coming!"
"The doors are stuck!" Corey informed his bandmates. "It's like there's something blocking them!"
"Look!" Kon pointed toward the glass window and the group noticed someone familiar standing outside and blocking the door with a board of wood.
"Tracy?!" Corey cried.
"Looks like you've played your last note, Fromojband!" Tracy let out an evil laugh.
"Yar, har, har!" Foxy chuckled. "What do we have here? Let's divide up the booty, lads!"
"You go first Foxy." Freddy insisted.
"Very well then." Foxy used his hook hand to pick up Kon by his shirt collar. "Ahoy there fatso! You're going to love being a part of the crew!"
Kon was dragged away by Foxy's hook.
"No! I'd rather walk the plank!"
Bonnie got ahold of Kin.
"So, you're a science nerd huh? Boy, are you gonna love what's gonna happen next!"
"Wait! I'm too young!" Kin protested. "And I haven't told Jackie how I feel yet!"
"You're coming with me, little boy!" Chica grabbed Laney.
"I'm a girl!" Laney yelled.
"And I've got something special in mind for you, Mr. Front Man!" Freddy laughed and lifted up Corey. He and the other animatronics proceeded to take the band to a room in the back. More specifically, a utility closet.
After the reprogrammed robots' work was done, the doors to the restaurant opened and four objects came flying out. These four objects were the same four objects that we learned about in the beginning of this story: an orange skull beanie, a hair clip, a pair of glasses and a red sweatband. Otherwise known as the only things that remained of Grojband…
To be continued…
Well what do you know? Looks like my previous dream predicted the future after all. DUN DUN DUNNNNNN!
So now that you're done reading the first part of the story, I bet I can guess what you're thinking again: "corneyforever, you got it all wrong. There were five kids killed at Freddy Fazbear's, not four! Also, where the heck is Balloon Boy and Mangle and the Puppet?"
First of all, yes I know this isn't how the story of Five Nights at Freddy's goes. I watch Game Theory sometimes too, you know. The truth is, I've had this story planned out for a long time and even when I finally did learn about the true story, I didn't want to change anything about mine. Because honestly, almost everybody knows the story of FNAF by now and I didn't want to give you guys that same old story. Rather, I wanted to create a story of my own and present it to you. And the reason for why the newer characters (Balloon Boy, Mangle, etc.) aren't in this is because I only wanted to base it off of the first game. So please don't explain to me how the story of FNAF should go because I've heard it a million times already.
Okay, now that that rant is over, I want to introduce a new segment in the author's notes. If you enjoy surfing the Internet like me, then you are probably familiar with the website, TV Tropes. If you aren't, allow me to explain. Basically, TV Tropes is a wiki that explains different aspects, or tropes, in TV shows, movies, and even fanfiction. Some of the tropes featured on this site include character traits, plot devices, or personal opinions. For example, there is a page for Grojband on this site and on it, Kin Kujira is described to be a "Ditzy Genius" which means someone who is really smart, but lacks common sense.
So for this new segment in the author's notes, I'm going to be talking about a trope known as "Dethroning Moment of Suck". In other words, this is a specific moment in a movie, TV show, or book that some people just don't like. This may be because the scene makes characters unlikeable or stupid, or because it's just plain boring. One thing I've noticed about Grojband's page is that there is no DMOS section for it. And let me be the first to say: there should be.
Now don't get me wrong, I love Grojband very much and I think every episode is enjoyable for the most part. However, there are plenty of moments in the show that I believe should count as "Dethroning Moments". So for the next 10 chapters, including this one, I will be discussing my top 10 Grojband Dethroning Moments. Most of them come from the second half of season 1, by the way. Here we go.
#10: As most of you know, Grojband was originally intended to have one 22-minute segment per episode. This first dethroning moment comes from the original 22-minute long pilot episode (aka: the long version of Smash Up Terby). The scene occurs right after Corey explains the plan on how he and the other band members are going to embarrass Trina in front of Nick Mallory and get lyrics from her. After Corey tells his friends the plan's super long title, Laney compliments him by saying "Catchy title.". To which Corey responds: "Thank you sir." Really? Sir? Are you kidding me? This has got to be Corey's dumbest nickname for Laney yet. Seriously, I was able to tolerate all those other names like "dude", "fella", and even "bro", but "sir"?! That just makes it seem like Corey doesn't know Laney is a girl. I am so glad this scene was omitted from the revised episode, because it just made Corey look like an idiot.
Okay, I'm done now. Man, I think this chapter has had the longest author's notes out of all of them. I'm still working on Part 2 so I most likely won't have it up this weekend. Still, if you want it up sooner, leave me some reviews. The new rule is I upload new stuff when a chapter gets at least THREE reviews. See you guys later!
