Bad Form Brother

Phoebs Lyle asked for a one-shot of Liam and Killian on the Jolly Roger where Killian loses his temper and starts cussing and then Liam tells him off for it.

For anyone who reads my fanfiction, you know I don't use cuss words in any of my writing. Mainly because I want anyone of any age to be able to read my writing and enjoy it. For this I will not be putting any actual cuss words in but I will make sure the point get's across. Enjoy!


"Killian you missed a spot" Liam pointed out before going about checking on the other men's work. Killian had about had it with his brother and telling him how he was always missing something or not doing something to the best of his ability. He was doing his best and it wasn't like the other men on the ship were doing any better. He knew that they all cut corners and did half hearted work but he felt like Liam never saw it, probably because he was too focused on him.

"Whatever" He quipped back before continuing to mop the deck.

"Excuse me?"

"Whatever. I never do it the way you want so either do it yourself or move along" Killian snapped

"That is no way to talk to your captain"

"Well I don't care if you are my captain, you want it done a certain way, do it yourself!" He yelled

"Killian...You are testing my patience"

"Really? Well it's about time you know how it feels!"

"You have overstepped brother"

"Do I look like I care?" Killian went on a roll blown rant about how he hated the way Liam acted all high and mighty and how he was picking on Killian while the others never put an ounce of effort into their jobs and got a pat on the pack. Of course he threw in a slew of colorful obscenities. He had had enough from Liam and wanted him to know exactly how fed up he really was.

"Are you done?"

"Yes I'm done! I'm done being on this ship! So help me when we make port, I"m getting off this God forsaken ship and never coming back!" He screamed

"This is bad form brother. I choose to expect more from you because I know that you can deliver. You have shown that you have what it takes to lead a ship of your own. However, cutting corners and being lazy will not make you a good captain. I only choose to 'pick on you' as you put it because you need to know what a tightly run ship looks like. I'm well aware of the lack of effort put out by some on this ship and you will notice that I do not promote them and I never give them additional responsibility. If you want to forever serve a captain then I wills top expecting you to act any different then the next man on this ship. If you want to be a captain, then I'm going to expect more of you." Liam said firmly. He was not messing around with Killian. He loved him dearly but he was not going to allow this type of disrespectful behavior to continue.

"Now, if you are done throwing your temper tantrum, you can go back and properly clean that spot on the deck that you so obviously missed" and with that Liam turned around and headed back to the captain's quarters. Killian was ashamed of himself. He shouldn't have acted out as he did and disrespected his brother, his captain. He went back and began to clean as he never did before. He was going to be captain Killian Jones some day and he was going to show his brother he earned it.