Warning; Very Mature Content.

I sigh as I lean back into the pillow, Scorpius sitting in front of me, his hand stroking my hair and the other laying against my stomach.

It's past midnight, Mackenzie and Orion already tucked into bed, Roxanne watching TV in the living room with little Morgan finally asleep.

I look over at Scorpius, his intense eyes watching me carefully.

"Show me." He says sucking in a breath.

I groan, laying my head back against the pillow and letting the tension release from my body, the small fluttering inside gone, telling me that the baby is asleep, I wish I was too.

I look at him, taking his hand that rests on my stomach and squeezing it, biting my lip, showing him I'm nervous.

He smiles softly, warmly, comfortingly, squeezing my hand back as he leans forward, placing a kiss on my stomach, then my forehead, before he hesitates inches from my face.

"I'm here, right here, Lily. Let me save you." He whispers and I sigh, leaning forward, crashing my chest into his before I press my lips against his, his hand moving to tangle in my hair, the other resting on the pillow and pushing himself away from me.

Why does he need to know this so bad?

"Scor, I'm scared." I whisper and he smiles comfortingly.

"I'll be here the whole time, and you don't have to see it if you don't want to. I know it must replay in your head all the time."

I shake my head, pushing my hair out of my face, "No. I, I want to see it. I have to see something besides the pain, and that's all I really remember."

He nods slowly, "I'm so sorry, love." He says offering his hand.

I take it and he pulls me up, wrapping his leather jacket around my shoulders and over his old Slytherin Quidditch t-shirt, before I slip my feet into a pair of lace flats, and he pulls me out of the apartment.

We aparate on the spot, appearing in a small office that reminds me of Malfoy Manor.

"Where are we?" I whisper, my voice cracking.

He wraps his arm around my shoulders before he leads me towards a large basin, a pensieve.

"An office in Malfoy Manor. Used to be my dad's, but he stopped using it a few years ago." Scorpius says and I sigh nodding slowly.

"Do you remember what happened?" Scorpius asks and I sigh heavily.

"A little. I remember pain and screaming, struggling, but the rest I must have blocked out or passed out or something." I say and he nods.

"Can you find it?" He asks offering his wand, since I had placed my own on the twins bedside table, in case any danger was to come to them while we're gone.

"Yeah." I whisper and he nods slowly, cupping my face, before he chastely kisses me, lifting me up off my feet, then setting me down again, his hand holding mine and squeezing it every few seconds.

"I'm here." He reminds me and I nod, before closing my eyes, and bringing his wand to my temple, withdrawing the black as night memory that once I drop into the pensieve and open my eyes I find is exactly that, black.

I look at him and he nods, taking my hand before we dive into the pensieve.

One week before my fifteenth birthday.

October 24th 2020.

I sigh, twirling my red hair that was rib-cage length, my green eyes looking eager as I look at the piece of parchment in my hand.

Damn Scorpius, I had plans.

It read;

Lily, meet me in the Ancient Ruins class at 7. I desperately need your help, or I'll fail Potions! Please help. Love, Scorpius x.

I grin, Scorpius can always make me laugh.

I look down at my outfit.

Dressed in a white button down tight shirt, unbuttoned a bit since it's been a warm fall, my Slytherin tie tied loosely around my neck, my skirt short and blowing in the wind, and a pair of van shoes, my school uniform.

I grin as I open the door to the classroom, the lights are off, and it's quite dark, the moon being the only guiding light.

I shut it quietly behind me, moving my hand across the wall to find the light switch, flipping it on, then looking around confused.

"Scorpius!" I call out, but the silence that responds is ringing, deafening.

It terrifies me to my very core, making me wonder where he is.

He's never ditched me before.

"Not funny! Stop trying to scare me!" I call out.

Nothing.

I hear a low chuckle and I whip around to see Charles Evans, a Death Eater, standing there, his black robes laying on the floor, dressed in only a shirt and black pants, he's old, around my Uncle Ron's age, with black hair with a few grays, and black eyes that were always following me.

I give him a glare, rolling my eyes, before flipping him off, then turning around, pulling on the door knob.

But nothing happens.

I pull on it, struggling, sending silent spells, but nothing happens.

"If you want out, then you must do as I say." The man says, shrugging off his shirt.

"What the fuck do you want?" I snap crossing my arms over my rather large chest before I press my back against the door.

"You must be rather loving of your brothers aren't you? Being fifteen with the reapings, you know Voldemort plans on getting one of you Potter's in the reaping, but he sees you as weak. Not as a problem. You're brothers are the problems." He says clicking his tongue against his mouth.

I narrow my eyes, glaring, "First of all I'm fourteen, my birthdays in a week. And I'm anything but weak, and he's honestly just figuring out that my brothers are problems? What a dumbass. What do you want?"

"Fourteen, hmm, even better. Not weak? We'll see about that. I'll make you a deal, Potter. All the petty little boys in this school see you as a trophy, something to be desired. I will keep you're brothers out of the reaping if, and only if you tell no one of this."

"I don't do deals with Death Eaters, and even if I did what would I not be telling anyone?" I question.

He strides across the room, slamming my body against the door, covering my mouth with his hand, "Scream as much as you want, Potter. The room's silenced."

I struggle against his grip, but he grabs me by my hair, slamming me hard against the ground, and I groan, the wind knocked out of me.

He pulls down his pants, before he moves to straddle me, and I struggle, punching and hitting any part of him I can, finally realizing what he's about to do.

"Don't fucking touch me!" I shriek, before he grabs my wrist, turning it around, a loud crack sounding in the room, my wrist looking disfigured, probably broken.

"Stop fighing Potter, I'll win." He snaps, slamming my head into the floor, before he pins my hands above my head, and I scream, the pressure on my wrist making me want to writhe in agony.

I groan, feeling the blood pour out of my head, pressure building inside of my head as well, my body stilling for only a moment so I can breathe, but in that moment he manages to shove various pills down my throat, and I try to spit them out, only successfully spitting out one, and his hand goes to my throat, before he squeezes, his other hand moving to my mouth, leaving my hands to punch at his back and any parts I can reach, but it's no use.

I scream, coughing as he forces me to swallow them.

"Be a good girl and swallow, Potter. It'll be good practice for later."

I struggle against him, kneeing him as hard as I can, but my attempts are blocked by his legs, moving to trap my own.

"Let me go!" I shriek, my legs thrashing about, my arms feeling slightly numb as my fists punch anywhere I can reach.

He rips off my tie, tossing it across the room, before his hands hungrily search down my chest.

I punch and kick anywhere I can reach, my nails tearing into the flesh on his skin as I try to scratch myself free.

I feel my body start to numb, and before I loose all ability to move I knee him again, this time his leg doesn't stop me, and I hear a satisfying crunch as he yelps in pain, rolling off of me.

"Scorp." I whisper, panting out as I struggle to roll over, rolling over successfully, before trying to push myself to my feet, but it's no use, my limbs are no use to me now.

He grabs me by my hair, pulling me around harshly and slamming my head on the ground, before he rolls me over, and I struggle again, but he slams me down by my head and I shriek in pain, causing my own unstable body to slam back onto the floor.

I scream and he climbs on top of me, ripping my shirt open, a few of the buttons flying to the floor.

I struggle to move, trying to force myself to, but I can't, the pills have made my limbs useless.

My body is frozen, yet I can still feel the pain as his nails dig into my skin as he tosses my bra to the side, his fingers digging and tearing and I shriek, trying to force myself to move.

"Let me go!" I scream again and again, struggling internally to free myself.

He groans, before he pulls down his boxers, knowing I have no way of moving now, yet I force myself to bring my leg up, the only thing that's not completely frozen, but it's no use, because he moves to straddle me again, twisting my leg around, and I suddenly feel something pressed against my thigh and I gasp as he leans down, biting hard at my breasts, his nails digging into the flesh, and not in a pleasurable way.

"Fuck you!" I scream, my body locked in a ball of pain, blood pouring from my head.

His fingers tear into the waistband of my skirt, pushing it up high before he presses his discomfort against my knickers.

"Get the fuck away from me! Don't fucking touch me!" I shriek and he glares at me as he lowers my knickers tossing them behind him.

I feel my body tense, despite the drugs as his tip presses against me.

"Remember if you cooperate it will save your dear brothers lives." He reminds, before he starts to push himself in.

"Fucking stop!" I shriek, but it's too late.

He shoves himself in, but the problem is,it's not fitting, leaving me to my screams and cries of protest, using all of my might just to twitch my fingers.

"It fucking hurts! Shit stop!" I shriek over and over, but he grabs me by my hips, before he pulls out and I breathe a sigh of relief, thinking he's given up, but then he grips my hips tightly, and sheathes himself in, with a deep, hard, and very painful thrust.

I scream loudly, the pain overwhelming, he moans in pleasure, before his nails tear into the flesh of my hips and thighs.

Holy shit.

HOLY SHIT.

MOTHERFUCKER.

OW. OW. OW.

"Ow! Shit!" I scream, my voice so raw.

"You are so tight." He growls as he thrusts hard.

I feel blood pouring out, and I scream as he pulls all the way out, only to thrust back in as hard as he can.

This fucking hurts.

I know losing your virginity is supposed to be painful, but this, this is fucking torture.

It hurts more with every rough thrust, Merlin why, as he slams in and out, leaving me to lay there, helplessly, the sheer and raw pain cutting through me like a knife, slicing every nerve that has ever existed.

I lost myself the moment the memory started, falling into the old me, no longer able to feel Scorpius next to me, or see him or hear him, I couldn't remember anything, except that I was this girl, helpless and caught in this moment.

This horrid moment.

He grabs me by my hair, slamming my head down again into the floor, before he slams into me again, causing my body to ignite into more pain.

Why did this hurt so horribly?

He was going at full speed, thrusting roughly and deeply, and I can feel the blood dripping down my legs, I can feel myself ripping, the flesh down there becoming far beyond damaged.

This is pure torture.

I don't know why I call for him, and not my dad, not my brothers, not my cousins, not my bestfriends.

But instead I call his name, sharply and loudly, "Scorpius!"

Over and over again, my screams and his pants and moans of pleasure filling the room, "Scorpius! Scorp!"

Then I feel his body tense over me, sending a few more rough thrusts that make me want to vomit, the pain overwhelming.

Then he throws back his head in ecstasy, moaning and thrusting hard into me, riding out his orgasm rougher than before, his seed spilling into me, just the thought making my body shake, and vomit.

He pulls out roughly when he notices he's covered in vomit.

He grabs me by my hair, picking me up and slamming me against the door, picking up a small pocket from the teacher's desk.

He punches me over and over again, his first connecting with the side of my face until I feel blood dripping down my lip.

"Should have learned to be a good girl, Potter." He shrieks at me, his temper obviously, slamming my body against the desk, my back making a quite audible cracking sound.

He slams me down so I'm laying across the desk.

Then he climbs over me, shoving himself in me once more.

As he thrusts harder than before, which i don't even know is possible, he grabs the pocket knife as I start to struggle, feeling my limbs become a little less frozen.

I scream, struggling as the drugs start to wear off.

"What's wrong Princess Potter? Daddy not here to save the day?" He hisses, chuckling evilly as he slams into me, blood running down my leg.

I punch him weakly, and he shakes his head, before he pulls all the way out, then shoves himself in and I shriek, before he grabs the pocket-knife, flipping me over so I'm on my stomach.

I scream in pain at the new position that seemed to allow him to go deeper and harder than before, and he slams into me full force and I shriek, the pain overwhelming.

"Stop." I whisper, a tear falling down my cheek as blood drips down my lip, my face, and down my chest, and obviously down my legs.

I feel something else though, some new kind of pain cutting into me on my lower back, just above my ass.

I feel something digging into my flesh there as he stops thrusting, but only for a minute, and then he continues thrusting, and I watch as the pocket knife is thrown to the floor in front of me.

"Now everyone will know, what a little whore you are." He snaps, and I groan.

"What did you do to me?" I whisper weakly.

"I carved whore into your ass." He growls, before thrustig in hard.

I groan, the pain so overwhelming, as I lose all remaining energy, just wanting it to be over and end, letting my face fall on the desk, blood trickling down, waiting until he moans in ecstasy his seed spilling into me again.

He leans down, chuckling evilly, "Wake up Princess Potter, I'll be fucking you all night long."

"Scorp." I whisper, in a daze.

"What was that Princess Potter?" He hisses and I groan.

"Scorp." I whisper again, the word barely slipping off my lips.

A knock sounds at the door and he huffs, slamming my head down against the desk, "If you make one noise I'll kill you and your brothers."

I lie there as he gets up, putting on his black robe as he opens the door slightly.

"Yes?"

"Sir, I left my book in here." A student says and I turn my head, looking at Evans as he stands there, blocking the view to me.

I gurgle slightly, feeling the blood rush to my head, as I plant my feet on the floor, hiking down my skirt and snapping on my bra, then throwing on my shirt, not bothering to button it, knowing this is my only chance.

"Now's not a good time." Charles says and I look around, seeing a window.

I tiptoe to it, opening it and peering out.

It's two stories up, and only a few bushes lay below.

I groan, my wand was laying on my bed.

I groan as I swing my legs out the window, knowing this is the only escape, I hear his voice sharpen to a loud shout.

"I MUST demand you leave! You may pick up your book at a more convenient hour! No off to bed! OFF!" Evans shouts and I shiver, as I gather up my courage, and jump out the window.

I feel myself plummet to the ground, my body slamming into two bushes, my other wrist and ankle making a loud snapping sound as I look around in a daze.

I take off running, running, running anywhere.

My feet guiding me, as I run, run to Scorpius.

My body convulsing.

Aching.

Begging for some relief from this terrible pain.

Blood streaking down my legs and down my face.

As I run, run to the common room, Scorpius and Roxanne will be there.

My feet guide me, as I run, as fast as I can, no one around to point or stare, since there's a party in the Forbidden Forest.

"Scorp." I murmur as my energy becomes weak, my body wanting to collapse from the surges of pain rocking through my body.

Slicing through my nerves.

"Lily! Lily!" A voice screams, but I'm too far gone, shaking and trembling, my body filled with pain.

"Lily wake up! Lily! Lily!"

I let out a gurgling sound, my body convulsing in an almost seizure like state.

"Baby wake up! Lily wake up! Wake up baby! Lily, please! Wake up!"

"Scorpius." I whisper, the memory still playing over and over.

I feel a strong pair of hands crash down on my chest, pumping up and down, then a pair of lips meeting mine, blowing air down my dry throat.

"Breathe, babe, breathe." Scorpius whispers and I scream, opening my eyes quickly.

"Lily! Holy fucking Merlin I thought I lost you." Scorpius whispers, crushing me to his chest, and I look around confused.

His arm is covered in nail marks, blood trailing down, his face is covered in sweat, his muscles tensed, his eyes holding a desperate yet angry look, his finger slowly moving down to stroke my face.

"Is she breathing?" Another voice asks and I turn my face to see Draco and Astoria, standing a few feet back, yet a concerned look in their eyes.

"Yes." Scorpius forces out.

"What happened?" I whisper and he turns his head to look at me, his jaw clenching.

You went into a fit, you were reliving it, it happens sometimes." Draco says.

"It was more than a fit. Lily you stopped breathing at the end. I lost you." Scorpius says.

"The baby?" I whisper.

"Shes's fine." Astoria says and I nod.

Scorpius refuses to meet my gaze and I stare at him warily.

"Scorp?"

He stands up, his fists clenched, as he strides out of the room, a banging sound as the door vibrates as he slams it shut, his feet pounding on the stairs.

Then I hear his screams.

His anguished screams as the sound of glass breaking, the sound of his sobs echoing in the manor.

Anguished, terrified, distressed, depressed, heartbreaking, angry sobs.

Draco helps me up, and Astoria looks at the door.

"I'll check on him." She says and I shake my head.

"No. I will." I say, rushing out of the room.

I run down the stairs, through the various halls, running up the stairs again, then finally I find it.

His room.

I knock gently on the door, the sound of everything being broken echoing across the walls.

His screams filling the room.

"No!" He screams kicking something.

I open the door, watching as his dresser crashes to the floor.

"Scorp. " I whisper, but he kicks his desk, slamming his fist into it as that too breaks.

Then he grabs a photo, that I recognize is of our fifth year.

It includes Scorpius, Logan, Roxanne, James, Al, and I all standing together smiling brightly.

It was taken the day of my birthday.

Only I could see the anguish hidden deep in my eyes, the look of defeat and worry across my face, yet a small smirk still plastered there, Scorpius' arm draped tight over me.

"Scorp, what are you doing?" I ask.

"This." He says gesturing towards the picture, "Is all lies! I wasn't fucking there Lily! You screamed and begged for me and I wasn't fucking there!"

He throws the picture on the floor, watching it shatter, before pressing his back to the wall. like a cornered animal, as he slides down it, sitting on the floor as his sobs echo across the room.

"Scorp?" I whisper, but he doesn't look up to meet my eye.

I carefully step over the broken glass and other broken bits of his room, sitting down next to him, his mucles tensed and clenched.

"You screamed for me. And I wasn't there. I was off shagging some stupid slag. I wasn't there." He says his eyes looking up to meet mine.

"It's okay, Scorpius. It doesn't matter anymore. I'm okay." I tell him and he shakes his head.

"I wasn't there to protect you, to keep you safe. The terrible things he did to you, and I wasn't there to stop it. I wasn't there." He sobs out and I wrap my arms around his neck, burying my face deep in his chest as he buries his in my hair.

"It's okay. Scorpius, it doesn't matter. Babe it doesn't. I'm here. I'm okay."

"No it's not!" He shouts, "I will kill that dick! I swear to you, Lily. I will. I will."

"Scorpius, don't. Please, just let it go."

"No, Lily, no. I won't! The things he did to you! It sickens me, Lily!" He shrieks and I nod sighing as a tear falls off his face.

"I know, babe. But I'm okay. Alright? I'm here okay. Always. I'm right here." I whisper and he sobs again.

He chokes out, "Tell me what to do. Lily tell me what to do make it stop. To make the screaming stop. Tell me what to do to get the images out of my head. Tell me how to keep you safe forever, Lily. Tell me."

"Take me home, Scorpius. Hold me tight in our bed. Tell our children that we love them."

He looks at me one last time, before he leans down crushing me close to his chest before he sobs a little more.

I sigh, closing my eyes and letting him hold me, his body shaking as he sobs a little more, his muscles tensed around me.

I sigh as dawn starts to approach, the sun coming in through his windows.

"Scorpius? I'm tired." I mumble, trying to pull away, but he doesn't let me, his arms still tight around me.

"Baby?" He whispers.

"I'm tired. You can hold me in your bed, alright? We'll stay the night here." I say and he looks at me and nods.

He tightens his grip around my waist, before he rises to his feet, taking me with him, then he helps me step over the broken glass, before I crawl into the bed, wrapping the blankets tight around me.

"Are you coming?" I ask, and he looks at me nodding slightly as he runs his fingers through his hair.

"Er yeah. Let me get a drink, do you need anything?" He asks and I shake my head, before he turns to leave, and I grab his bicep, I know he's not coming back.

"I need you." I whisper and he nods.

"I'm sorry." He whispers, kissing my forehead.

Before he leaves.

I sigh as I lay my head down on the pillow, hearing the shouts coming from downstairs doesn't help.

I put my hand over my ear, before burying my face in his pillow that smelled utterly like him, and completely comforted me.


I open my eyes, startled by the bright light coming in through the windows, my head burning and pounding.

This isn't Malfoy Manor.

This is my old house.

"Mum?" I whisper and she nods slowly.

"Hey, sweetheart. Scorpius told us to watch over you, apparently you were screaming and thrashing about. He's talking to your father in his study." Mum says and I shoot up out of bed.

"What?" I shout and she looks at me surprised.

"Something wrong, Lily? The twins are at your apartment with Roxanne and Morgan. Logan's expected to be there in a few hours." Mum says and I look at her as I throw myself over the edge of the bed.

Scorpius must have changed my outfit, because now I'm dressed in a green ombre tank top, and camo high waisted studded shorts, along with my green lace flats.

I run out the room, and down a few doors to my dad's study.

"Scorpius! Scorpius! Daddy! Let me in!" I exclaim knocking on it hard and trying to open it.

Silence.

"Scorpius! What the hell? Let me in!" I shriek, kicking hard on the door while mum races towards me, pulling me back and then accidentally loosening her grip on me and I crash my back into the wall, sliding down until I'm sitting there, just staring blankly at the door.

"What the bloody hell has gotten into you?" Mum asks but I ignore her, building up my courage.

"SCORPIUS HYPERION MALFOY!" I shriek at the top of my lungs, my voice echoing across the wall.

Slowly but surely the door starts to open Scorpius appearing there, looking disheveled and tired.

I jump to my feet, putting my hands on his chest and pushing him against the wall.

"What the fuck are you doing? This is between us! It was supposed to be between us!" I shout, and he grabs me by my forearms, gently but carefully pushing me away from him, and holding my wrists in his hands, squeezing them as if to show it's all okay.

"I had to. He's the only one who can help me track Evans down." Scorpius says and I shake my head, shoving his hands off of me.

"I didn't want anyone to know! I only felt comfortable sharing that memory with you, and you go and tell other people! What the fuck is wrong with you? I gave you two children, I'm carrying our third child! Why can't you just let this go!" I shriek.

"Lily stop." Dad says, appearing in the doorway, looking tired, his hair ruffled, his eyes bloodshot, his face paling.

"It's none of your business!" I shriek, then I see all three of my brothers walk out after him, wearing much the same expression.

"Any of yours!" I shriek, before I shove Scorpius away from me, racing down the stairs and out the door, letting it slam behind me as I aparate on the spot.

I arrive in my apartment, pulling at my hair and letting out an animalistic cry, before I rip open my kitchen cabinet, grabbing a plate in my hand and squeezing hard.

I shriek as I slam a dish on the ground, Roxanne racing to my side in an instant.

"Lily?" She asks and I scream in anguish, throwing a plate at the wall.

All of the old feelings rising up from right after the rape happened, rising to the surface, trapping me.

"No. Stay away from me." I shriek, grabbing a glass and slamming it to my feet, shattering it.

"Mackenzie, Orion, take Morgan in your room." Roxanne orders as the two children who I couldn't bear to face obey her.

"Lily, Scorpius, he told didn't he? I told him not to." Roxanne says offering me a glass to which I slam against the wall.

"My brothers, my father, they know! Roxanne they know!" I shriek in anguish and Roxanne sighs wrapping her arms tight around me.

"I know, Lily. Oh I know." She whispers rocking me back and forth as my screams fill the room.

"Why? Roxanne why?" I shriek and she sighs heavily.

"Because, you know Scorpius. He has to protect you in every way and once he found out about it he has to tell people so that he can effectively hurt Evans. Of course I did that very good." Roxanne says winking at me and I laugh lightly.

"Roxanne. I should have just told you. Not Dominique. Not Scorpius. Just you." I whisper and she smiles punching my arm.

"It'll be okay, Lils. So they know? It's not the end of the world." Roxanne says and I sigh, nodding slowly.

"Logan's going to be here soon." I say and she smiles.

"I know, why don't we meet him at the coffee shop that way no one else will come by." She says and I nod, before she calls her parents and I knock on the kids door.

She calls her parents, telling them to tell Logan when he arrives there to have him meet us at the coffee shop across the street.

I sigh as I knock on the door.

"Mackenzie, Orion?" I ask, before pushing it open.

"Mama what's wrong?" Mackenzie asks and I sigh.

"It's nothing baby, not anymore. Alright? Everything's going to be alright. Now how about we go down to the coffee shop and eat hmm?"I suggest and Mackenzie nods slowly as she picks up Morgan.

"Mummy are you and Daddy fighting again?" Orion asks and I smile slightly.

"It's nothing to worry about, love. C'mere little man. You two are all I need." I say, pulling my son and daughter close to me, before we walk out of the room.

Hey guys; So I just thought that I should include that part of Lily's life. But for those of you that don't know a few days ago I put up the Prologue to this story, it's called Before Green Melted into will focus around Lily's life from when Harry left, to the summer before the Games that she and Scorpius were in. So make sure you all check that out and let me know what you think! So thanks for the 20 reviews! That was a huge surprise and I was soo happy when I seen that! So I don't have school today so I'd be glad to upload another chapter today, and I have Wednesday off as well so if you guys want another chapter hurry it up! So the Hunger Games Catching Fire comes out Friday, I'm honestly so excited to see it! So maybe I'll post Friday, if you guys review 15 times. So on to your questions; Guest; Thanks. I'm sorry but I'm not going to post if it's not going to be appreciated or criticized. LilyPotter217; Well I can't tell you whether or not Lily will be able to, but you'll find out soon enough! The final battle is going to take place on Lily's birthday, October 31st. And that usually wouldn't be a problem because her last pregnancy only lasted a few months, but this one is going to be longer and slower, but still faster than a normal pregnancy. Thanks, I like the name Calla as well, plus it's a flower name. Calla's personality is going to be a mix of both, I'm not sure which one she will be more like. Alex; Thank you! Okay advice, make sure you spell check, and make sure you go very in depth with Bellatrix's history. I don't think a lot of people know this but Bellatrix was raped, and a lot of horrible things happened to her, so make sure you emphasize what that did to her and how it changed her. Because it did make her who she was in the books and movies. I'd love to read it though! Goldentrio3; I agree, but I'm not very sure where it will happen. Guest; I'll make it as good as I can, without making it seem like a porno. Guest; I am going to go back and edit some particular chapters soon, so I guess I'll do those first! Anyway, so I'm writing chapter 82, and there is definitely some interesting things coming up! And I know I haven't been talking much about the Rebellion but I promise that changes in the next chapters. And Scorpius and Lily aren't really done fighting yet, because they still have issues to solve and they are very young. Anyway 15 reviews gets you another chapter! Anyway as always review!