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Mary Sue Saga: Chapter 54 – The Arrival of Mary Sue
09:36
Inside Dat Pyramid
Crystal and Rose had been fighting for over a minute now. Rose had stood in one spot and manipulated layers of ice around her into attacking Crystal, who dodged the ice while trying to get through her defensive ice methods. When Crystal managed to get within 10 feet of Rose, she stomped the ground, creating a giant icicle where Crystal stood, who avoided getting impaled by lifting herself up using her spear. She dropped down, surprising Rose, and punched her hard on the left side of her face, knocking her back a few feet but only managing to make her flinch slightly before Rose regained her balance and looked back at Crystal. "Ow." She said dully.
"Did that even hurt?" Crystal asked.
"I've experienced enough pain in my lifetime."
"Then I may be a little in over my head, but then again, I might get lucky and actually survive."
"Let's find out." Without a moment to spare, she immediately punched Crystal, sending her flying back. She dashed forward and with a swing of her hand created a long line of sharp icicles along the ground which Crystal dodged by flipping to the right and charging at her. Crystal attacked with her spear, jabbing wildly at the air as Rose easily dodged her attacks, but was then hit as Crystal whacked it over her head, followed by her whacking Rose across the face with it and kicking her in the chest with both feet which caused minimal damage.
Rose took out her frail as she hopped forward slightly and swung it at Crystal, who ducked and jabbed at her several times; Rose avoided the first two then knocked back her spear with the frail before trying to crush her with it. Crystal sidestepped the attack and charged forward, attempting to stab her but missed as Rose ducked then hit her with an uppercut. Rose swung her frail at Crystal again, who quickly recovered and grabbed it, then kicked Rose into a wall as it returned to her. As Rose ricocheted off the wall, Crystal hit her with a flying kick, with enough force to cause a crack in the wall. Crystal quickly discovered this Rose was a fake as it slowly evaporated, at which point Rose punched her from the side.
Still 09:36
In the City
Blaze was still chasing Inferno down a street, who knocked over things and threw various objects at Blaze. Blaze easily evaded most of the things being thrown at her, but as Inferno threw a car back at her, She hopped onto it then leaped forward, attempting to hit Inferno with a flying kick. Inferno flipped over Blaze a second before being hit and extended its arm to grab Blaze and force her through several objects across the road before throwing her through a window. Inferno ran on ahead and leaped onto a car which was heading towards the highway, with Blaze following who happened to recover in time to see.
09:37
The Final Tomb Chamber
Sally Sue finally reached the stairs leading down to the last room within the pyramid, and hummed the Chaos Angel map theme from Sonic Advance 3 as she strolled along. She entered the gigantic brightly lit room below which was purely white with blue stripes along the pillars and floors. There were two floors in the room, pillars around the dimensional gate in the middle of the room, and pillars along the outer edges of the top floor. As Sally Sue approached the middle, Knuckles suddenly jumped up out of the ground and hit her with an uppercut. Sally Sue quickly recovered and dropped back slightly. "Oh, it's you, the mole."
"I'm an echidna!" Knuckles yelled.
"So what are you here for, I'm quite busy right now."
"Well you've got some trouble on your hands, because I'm not letting you anywhere near that dimensional gate." Knuckles said, getting into a fighting stance.
"Heh, you seem pretty cocky." Sally Sue cracked her knuckles. "Are you ready to die?"
Knuckles wasted no time and began his assault, unleashing tons of punches which Sally Sue blocked while moving back. Sally Sue swung at him a few times, and Knuckles ducked under them before getting in two hits and knocking her back. She slapped away his next punch and hit him in the chest before roundhouse kicking him to the side. She leaped up and stomped the ground where he once stood as he jumped out the way, causing several cracks in the ground.
Still 09:37
That 'V' Place
Tails and Lily had begun their fight, which seemed mainly to be laying traps, which were countered with traps. Lily flew higher up and threw 5 small bombs at Tails who ran by, narrowing missing him. As he stopped by the edge of the area, Lily fired a large beam, which Tails dodged by simply ducking under it. Lily punched a wall after witnessing this. "Damn it! I didn't expect him to duck!"
Tails winded up a robot mouse bomb and let it go. Lily ran away from it and into a circle of super glue which Tails surprisingly had time to put there. Tails took this opportunity to let loose with missiles and energy blasts, which Lily had assumed he'd do so she included a part in her suit which allowed her to absorb energy attacks. Lily then blasted the glue to pieces and jumped behind a wall while Tails did the same. Tails took out a small ball and activated a robot droid which looked like himself, then sent it in Lily's direction. As it got nearby, she quickly blasted it to pieces. It became silent again until Tails heard footsteps approaching the wall and fired at Lily, who turned out to be a hologram. By the time he realised this, he was hit by several missiles and sent propelling through a wall.
Lily grabbed her machete which was still lodged in the wall and jumped through the hole in the wall into a room which as similar to the other one before she started swinging madly at Tails who backed up and evaded her attacks before firing another energy beam at Lily who deflected it diagonally. The beam hit a mirror in the top right corner and was sent back at Tails, who somersaulted out the way, but was quickly hit by a blast which Lily fired.
09:38
The Highway to Hell (Love that song)
Inferno was riding atop the roof of a car as it began speeding down the highway. Meanwhile, Blaze was trying to catch the car by leaping across the cars close by. Just as Blaze reached the creature she attacked with a roundhouse kick, which Inferno evaded by hopping back, and then tried to impale her. Blaze slid under its attack and hit Inferno with a fiery uppercut, knocking it off the car, as Inferno quickly grabbed Blaze as this happened. Blaze managed to slice off a part of its hand and grab onto the back of another car.
Inferno leaped onto a truck which was speeding by and fired a barrage of fireballs at Blaze who ran towards the truck. The fireballs were powerful enough to cause small explosions upon impact, which they did to the roads and cars nearby. Using the inner source of its full power, Inferno gathered its energy, forming a bright red aura just before throwing a giant wave of fire, which caused a massive explosion as it hit the ground, blowing up the part of the road that it hit and preventing any cars from crossing over. Blaze leaped over the gap and took off after the monster.
Still 09:38
Outside Dat Pyramid
Amy and Cream had just finished taking care of the last few Camerax Crew robots, besides the leader, and promptly high fived each other. As they got ready to finish off the last one, they spotted a hundred more approaching the area, with at least a dozen giant robots accompanying them. As they braced themselves for another large wave of robots, tons of GUN soldiers suddenly rushed by, opening fire on them. As all this went on, Rouge landed beside Amy and Cream. "I think they can take it from here." She glanced over at the both of them and raised an eyebrow. "Well I certainly missed a lot..."
On the mountain close by, Mads was still observing the action through his binoculars. "Man, just how many robots can one guy make in such a limited time?"
"A lot apparently." Sonny replied.
Mads then glanced around. "Hey, where did Shade go?"
"He said he had to go check something."
"And Amber?"
"She said she isn't coming back. She went to a hot spring instead."
Mads scratched his forehead. "So it's just you and me?"
"Yup." Sonny nodded, followed by an awkward silence. "...Let's find out who can headshot the most robots." Sonny said, summoning an icicle.
"You're on." Mads replied as he charged his arm cannon.
Still 09:38 Again
Back Inside Dat Pyramid
In the room where Shadow and Virus' fight was taking place, the battle was slowly coming to an end. Shadow leaped up and threw a chaos spear at Virus who sank in a purple puddle. As the spear hit the ground, dust circled the area. Shadow then quickly slid back as Virus attempted to stab him. Virus flew out of the smoke and separated into five, reducing the copies powers as he did so. They all attacked Shadow head-on, who had the upper hand until one managed to land a hit, at which point they continued to beat him senseless until they finally blasted him into a wall nearby. Virus touched the ground and stood straight before combining again. "Well, it seems I have won. It's a shame really, but your vitality has diminished to such a point that I could easily kill you as you are."
"Then why don't you?"
"Because then I wouldn't be able to gloat, obviously. If this had gone on another 30 seconds, I most likely would have lost from exceeding the full force of my current power, and Shade even bet me that I'd lose today. Unlucky for him, he now owes me 10 bucks. So, I assume you'll be fighting Mary Sue soon enough, right?"
"What's it to you?"
"I just thought I'd remind you that you're nowhere in the same league as her, considering that you're having trouble beating me right now." Virus suddenly pulled over a chalkboard and drew a power level chart on it. "Lets say that my full power right now is around 15-20 out of a hundred...Mary Sue is a hundred."
"And I'm guessing there's a reason you want Mary Sue to return?" Shadow said as he recovered and got to his feet.
Virus chuckled for a few seconds. "Well of course, think about it, how do you think that numbskull found out the requirements needed to bring Mary Sue back from that other dimension? I told her, or should I say, one of my siblings did. I simply researched a lot of info on her, and on supernatural summoning rituals. Overall, Sally Sue isn't of much use to me, but Mary Sue's achievements and abilities never cease to amaze me, so I must take control of her body and make her my permanent host! With her power, there would be nothing in the galaxy which could hope to stop me!"
"And you possibly think you'll be able to control Mary Sue so easily?"
Virus smiled as he slowly sank into the concrete floor. "But of course, for you see, I'm a virus."
Inside the main tomb, Knuckles was still struggling to hold off Sally Sue when Sonic suddenly arrived, spin attacking Sally Sue as he leaped into the room, propelling her past the dimensional gate. He then slid along the ground and came to a halt a few feet away from Knuckles and waved. "Hey there, Knuckles. How did you arrive before me? Well then again, I was stopped a few times..."
"I dug all the way here underground, although I did pop my head up a few times to make sure I wasn't lost."
"Well it's good to know I've got backup."
"Why?"
Just then, Eggman's robot smashed through the entrance and opened fire upon them just as Sonic pointed and said, "That's why." The second Sally Sue got up, she ran straight through all of them, and up to the dimensional gate. "You morons annoy me!" She placed the Fujin gem in a glass bowl right beside it that seemed connected to the machine, and then recited the following words. "From the deepest part of my heart I ask the powers from above, to give back the sister that I truly love, she has the power to do the what the gods can do, so bring back my almighty sister, Mary Sue!"
The whole room started shaking violently and flashed bright colours as Sonic got to his feet and said, "That was a pretty lame speech."
"You're telling me." Knuckles agreed. "But we've got bigger problems now."
"I'm not so sure yet..."
"What's that supposed to mean?"
Suddenly, the shaking stopped and there was a flash of lightning which hit the dimensional gate and surrounded the area in smoke, and within the smoke stood a single figure.
