Well, it's almost time for Mary Sue to actually make an appearance after all this time, but the question is, what kind of personality is this person going to have, and will she be actually likable despite being broken as hell? We'll see soon enough.


Mary Sue Saga: Chapter 55 – A Suetiful Experience

Previously on Sonic Z, the almighty being, Mary Sue was just released, completely engulfed within the smoke emitting from the dimensional gate. Mary Sue had long radiant golden hair, glimmering so brilliantly that it had its own aura. Glorious golden eyes which could glow in the dark, creamy white skin that felt as smooth as silk, perky C-cups which were firm and surprisingly soft, not that I would know, and other marvellous features not important enough to mention. She wore a thin yellow open sweater, and not just an ordinary sweater, but one of the very best, but below that sweater was a simple yellow t-shirt with a star on the front. She also wore a yellow skirt of medium length with matching yellow shoes, so as you could tell, she really liked yellow. And you could tell this person was Mary Sue, because I actually bothered to spend more than one sentence on describing her, even if it wasn't enough.

Knuckles turned to Sonic and asked, "So is this exactly a good or a bad thing?"

"Well I haven't really received enough proof for it to go either way, so I'm not too sure."

"If I get sucker punched I'm going to assume the worst." Knuckles said before focusing his attention towards Mary Sue.

"Now you're just being paranoid."

Within the smoke, Mary Sue turned her head in their direction and in a flash, dashed towards them and sucker punched Knuckles through several pillars. Sonic, being somewhat surprised, faintly said, "Guess I stand corrected." Mary Sue quickly spun round and fired a flurry of finger beams towards Sonic who ran around, flipping and jumping over them. Eggman charged at Mary Sue and swung at her but missed as she effortlessly dodged then roundhouse kicked the robot into a wall. Sonic touched the surface of one pillar and leaped off it back towards Mary Sue, curled into a ball. She blocked his attack with one hand then backed away from his hurricane kick.

Mary Sue then sidestepped as Knuckles tried to punch her from behind and tripped him up, and then kicked him into Sonic. She punched the ground, causing a shockwave which knocked them all back and made sharp rocks come up out of the ground, which they avoided. Mary Sue flew after Sonic and Knuckles, who were running back, and threw a large energy ball, which split into dozens of laser beams aiming straight for them. Knuckles dug underground to avoid the incoming blasts while Sonic dodged them again and used some of the environment around him to avoid getting hit.

As he continued running, Mary Sue ran past him while winking, shocking Sonic. "Whoa! She's actually faster than me..." She tripped him up, and then caught Knuckles' fist as he jumped out of the ground towards her. She let him go half a second before punching him across the room, then flipping into the air as Eggman fired a laser beam at her. She flew straight through his next blast and through the robot's left arm, making it explode as she touched the ground.

In one of the earlier rooms, Rose was still trying to impale Crystal with her complete control of the thin layers of ice around the room. Rose formed two rows of icicles heading towards Crystal that soon formed two large Chinese dragons made of ice which crossed over each other and lunged at her. Crystal flew into the air as the two dragons passed by, then spun round towards her. Crystal threw her spear and it curved to the right as it sliced through the bodies of the dragons, allowing Crystal to take control of them with her powers. She threw them towards Rose, who jumped into the air, avoiding one dragon which crashed into the ground. The second was sliced in half as Rose turned her arm into a blade and flew straight through it.

Rose dropped to the ground and reformed her arm before saying, "I feel a far greater presence has just made itself known."

Crystal then dropped down and shrugged. "Yeah, but that doesn't really concern us, now does it?

"Of course, so let us continue."

09:39

The Big 'V'

Tails and Lily were still in a heated battle, involving traps being countered by other traps. Sadly, Tails' traps were the ones mainly being countered. Tails was currently hiding behind a wall when he noticed Lily running towards the small wall. He fired at her as she tried to sidestep his attack, and though it hit her he realised it was a hologram. Lily then came running towards him from the right, and was also revealed to be a hologram as Tails fired again. Tails continued to keep firing at the holograms, but soon stopped to try and tell the difference between them all. While he stopped to think, another ran up to him, and he poked the figure before discovering she wasn't a hologram. As he looked up, she nodded at him, "Yes, I'm real." She fired a large laser beam in his face, blasting him across the room.

She then began firing more energy blasts and then several bombs that Tails avoided until he stopped by a wall. Lily then threw a large bomb at Tails, which he shielded from, but surprisingly, the fuse on the bomb never went off. As Tails lowered his guard to see whether the bomb went off, it suddenly exploded in his face, sending him flying through a wall.

Still 09:39

Back in the City

Inferno reached another random city after leaving the highway, hopped off the car and ran down the street. Blaze was far off in the distance, struggling to keep up with the creature, and decided to use the rooftops to catch up to it. The creature soon approached a construction site and began climbing up the girder's shortly before Blaze arrived, looked up and sighed. "Why here of all places?"

Just then, Tails contacted her using his walkie-talkie. "Hey Blaze; I kinda need a little advice on something."

"And you didn't consider I might be quite busy right now? Not to mention there are several people you could be talking to instead?" She replied as she began to climb the girders.

"Well most of them seem to be busy. Anyway, I'm fighting this girl, who seems to be a lot smarter than I first thought, and it's like she knows what I'm gonna do before I do it! Like she thinks two steps ahead, and then finds out how to reach that spot. How can I fight this girl when it's like she can read my brain waves?"

"For someone so smart, you aren't using that brain much right now. The answer is simple, just stop thinking."

"Huh?"

"Obviously, she must know all about how you would normally act through research and observations, so acting unpredictably with your attacks should throw her off-balance for at least a short while, at which point you should finish the battle before she catches on to what you're doing. Go with the flow, don't think about it, just do it."

"Wow, Blaze, that's great advice! How did you think that up?"

"Have you forgotten that I'm facing a copy of myself? I figured this out before I even showed up to face that monster, but it's still trying to make things harder for me..."

"Okay, well good luck, and thanks again." As Tails disconnected, Blaze climbed up to a girder far above the ground on the construction site. Inferno leaped onto another just further ahead of her. "This is where we shall finish this fight. And although you're afraid of heights, you have far worse things to fear right now."

"Well I'm sure kicking your ass will relieve me of my fears, so let's begin."

Inferno extended its arms and tried to grab Blaze, who leaped into the air, spun into a ball and attacked with a flying kick. Inferno somersaulted under it and kicked her off before going after her. She grabbed the lower part of a girder and climbed up just before getting kicked towards one girder further back, and then she jumped as Inferno tried to pounce on her. She missed Inferno with a downward punch, but hit the creature as she immediately attacked with a flying kick, followed by a vertical hurricane kick.

Yes, it's still 09:39

The Final Tomb Chamber

Things weren't looking so good, as Mary Sue was easily capable of handling Sonic, Knuckles and Eggman with little effort. For the majority of this, Sally Sue stood by, clearly watching her sister and the two times she tried to help her out, Mary Sue quickly appeared beside her and held her back before continuing her fight. Knuckles hit her right in the chest with his Maximum Heat Knuckles Attack, which made her giggle slightly before she backhanded him across the room. She then hopped over Sonic as he spin dashed past her while deflecting a giant energy blast Eggman had fired with her pinkie, knocking Eggman's robot to the ground.

Sonic spun round, leaped up and activated his light speed attack, managing to surprise her with a spin attack at light speed, knocking Mary Sue into a wall. She quickly got to her feet and copied Sonic, before dashing towards him. They both moved around the room, creating large shockwaves where they clashed and nearly destroying the dimensional gate as they moved around while Sally Sue barely avoided them. They soon clashed once more and hopped back before Sonic tried to spin attack her again, Mary Sue whacked him away and then quickly hit him with a spin attack, with enough force to knock him through several pillars and into a wall. As he bounced off the wall, Mary Sue head butted Sonic into the ground and then took a deep breath.

"So Sally, where am I exactly?" Mary Sue asked, scratching her forehead as she looked around. "And why did you call me back? I was actually having a good time in that other dimension."

"I called you back so I could see you again, Mary. You don't seem very happy to see me..." Sally Sue frowned as she finished.

"Well, it's not that, it's just that this was unexpected, you know. Though fighting these guys was pretty fun, so it's not all bad." Mary Sue noticed Sonic was starting to get up. "Oh, you're haven't given up yet? People tend to do that at this point. You're not even afraid that I might accidently kill you?"

Sonic struggled to stand straight. "Well, you can't kill me, because I've got close friends, rivals, and even a guardian angel on my side."

In a room close to the entrance of the pyramid, Crystal suddenly blushed for some unknown reason, at which point Rose waved after standing in one spot for more than a few seconds. "Crystal, are you awake?"

"Hmm, oh right." Crystal returned to normal. "I just had this weird feeling that someone just said something really nice, so where were we?"

Rose pointed below her to a sharp icicle. "Well I was about to impale you through your chin, and I assumed you'd sidestep it and throw your spear at me. Shall we continue?"

"Yeah, of course. I'll just shut my mind off for a while so I don't get distracted..."

Back in the main room, Mary Sue chuckled at his response. "I like you, blue hedgehog, so I'm gonna let you get a few hits in, how does that sound?"

"Regardless of how pleasing that may or may not be, could I ask one or two questions?"

"Go ahead."

"If you're the great Mary Sue which everyone is talking about, how did you get trapped in another dimension?"

"Ahh, I assumed I would need to answer that. Alright, I'll explain all the necessary details, but we'll wait until next time before I do that..."