Hey guys,
Well sorry if this isn't a chapter but I'm still working on it. It would be out soon, I just need some time. Anyway I did say at one point that I would still be adding some more commanders and Special Weapons to the army so here are some.
First some changes.
I am changing Sentinel and Mogo from Special Weapons to commanders. Sentinel's abilities don't seem too unique compared to some others and Mogo while is very strong, he doesn't have any unique powers, just incredible strength.
With Sentinel, I am changing his background: He was originally a commander who suffered a serious crippling accident. Not wanting to leave the army, he asked Dragon if there was any way for him to stay. Dragon agreed and had revolution commander Megele covert him into a cyborg.
So below are some of the new commanders and Special Weapons. I made the changes to "Profile of the Revolutionary Army" so check it out when you have a chance.
Commanders
Sentinel: Sentinel is the most powerful and advanced cyborg in the world. He was originally a commander who suffered a series crippling accident. Not wanting to leave the army, he asked Dragon if there was any way for him to stay. Dragon agreed and had revolution commander Megele covert him into a cyborg.
For Sentinel's physical appearance, think either Seth from Street Fighter or Apocalypse from X Men.
Sentinel's nanotechnology gives him the ability to form powerful weapons out of his body. He can form simple weapons like knives to powerful machine guns and laser guns from his arms. He can also launch missiles from his body. He can make an unlimited amount of ammunition so he can overwhelm his enemies with guns, lasers and missiles. Since most people don't have an unlimited amount of ammunition this makes him very dangerous. However he does need time to create more ammunition in his body so that is a disadvantage.
His body is built with a superior version of the Pacifista steel making him extremely durable. Furthermore he is also built with the ability to instantly repair any part of his body that is damaged. If for example, his arm is cut off, nanotechnology will instantly begin repairing the arm that was cut off so that it would appear as if he has extremely fast regeneration. However he can be completely overwhelmed to the point beyond repair.
He also has powerful scanners that function similarly to observation haki. Using his scanners he can easily break down the mechanics behind many attacks. He can determine speed, velocity, size, mass, temperature and many other things using his scanners. He can also determine the predicted trajectory of an attack, how much an attack will be weakened due to air resistance, if the attack will hit at all and many other things.
For example with Sanji's Diable Jambe, his scanners will be able to determine how fast he is spinning, the temperature of his leg, how fast he is kicking, how long it would take for his leg to cool down etc. Using this information he can quickly devise counter measures against his enemy.
Finally he has the ability to control other machines. So any machine is pretty much useless against him.
His ability to create a large array of weapons, study his opponents moves, repair any part of his body and control other machines. These are all very unique and powerful traits that make Sentinel extremely powerful and dangerous.
Mogo: Mogo is the most powerful giant in the world. He is not the largest, the largest is San Juan Wolf of the Blackbeard Pirates, but Mogo is the strongest by far. Big Mom as an overall fighter may be stronger than Mogo since she may have devil fruit powers but in a purely physical fight, Mogo will win. Likewise despite San Juan Wolf being far larger than Mogo, Mogo is still physically stronger than him. Assuming that San Juan Wolf doesn't have any devil fruit powers, in a physical match, Mogo will win.
Mogo grew up in the Blues outside of the Grand Line. People there are not used to seeing a giant or even know that they existed and thus treated him like a monster. Mogo as a result slowly lost his humanity until he became nothing but a monster. He was later approached by Dragon to join the army and he accepted.
Mogo is a gentle giant who is actually a very kind and gentle individual. Unfortunately his past in the Blues cause this side of him to erode to the point that he really became the monster that everyone thought he was.
Amongst all the giants in the world, Mogo boasts the most brute force. Furthermore not only is he the strongest he is also the most skilled. Most giants rely on their sheer size and power to overwhelm their enemies. Mogo however fights like a trained warrior using stances and appropriate technique. Thus he has skill, grace and finesse that giants usually lack. He possesses tremendous speed and skill which giants usually don't have. He is very skilled at using both observation and armament haki which is something giants usually don't have.
His giant status, extreme power and skill make him very unique. Most giants while strong because they don't have skill or finesse aren't as powerful as they could be. Mogo however has the greatest raw power along with incredible skill, finesse, mastery of observation and armament haki. When these traits come together, you have one of the most destructive beings in the world, a living weapon made purely for destruction.
Most giants tend to look out of shape and have pot bellies. Mogo however has a lean muscular body structure and is fairly handsome but due to his past, doesn't care about his looks. He is also fairly handsome but because everyone saw him as a monster, his looks never mattered to him, they only saw his size.
Geese: Geese posses the wire wire fruit allowing him to form razor sharp wires from his finger tips.
I did say that this story diverges after chapter 653 and episode 573 and this is one of those deviations. In this fic, Doflamingo possess the body body fruit allowing him to control an opponent's body thus making them move like puppets. He can controll a person's limb and make it "come off" thus making it appear like he sliced it off.
Geese forms a wire in each finger so at most he can have ten wires at most, five in each hand. He can use these wires to slice his enemies apart. They are also very hard to break so he can even slice rock and steel easily. However he cannot slice a building apart as it is too big and he cannot produce long enough wires to do that.
Like all commanders, he can use observation and armament haki.
Jarvan: Possess the explosion explosion fruit. This allows him to create an explosion anywhere.
Jarvan can control the location, timing and intensity of an explosion. He can touch a certain spot and that spot will explode when he wants with the explosion size that he wants. So he can touch a spot such as an opponent and have it explode immediately or he can touch another place and wait a bit before it explodes with a small or large explosion.
So for example if he's infiltrating a base, he can touch a guard to create a small immediate explosion that would kill the guard but not attract too much attention. He can likewise touch a giant to immediately create a very large explosion killing the giant. Or he can create a small explosion on a gas tank and wait for about a minute giving him time to escape before creating a small explosion which because it is a gas tank, will instead form a much larger explosion.
In this way his devil fruit is superior to Mr 5's. Mr 5 can make any part of his body a bomb while Jarvan can make any place an explosion. Mr 5 cannot time the explosions while Jarvan can. Also Mr 5 cannot control the size of intensity of the explosion while Jarvan can. The tradeoff between his and Mr 5's is that Mr 5 is immune to explosions due to his devil fruit while Jarvan isn't.
Also Jarvan is a revolutionary commander while Mr 5 is a weakling. Jarvan is also a good melee combatant and can use observation and armament haki while Mr 5 can't.
Jarvan was based on Deidara from Naruto Shippuden. Both have explosive powers. That is it. If you want Jarvan and Deidara to look the same, that is your choice, if not, then that's fine as well. Jarvan's looks are your choice.
Ganryu: Ganryu possess the mammoth mammoth fruit which allows him to turn into a mammoth.
Originally I wanted an elephant devil fruit user so that a giant zoan devil fruit user would be among the ranks of the revolutionaries. However Spandam's sword actually ate the elephant elephant fruit. So instead I gave Ganryu the mammoth mammoth fruit. The mammoth is a prehistoric form of elephant. So the mammoth mammoth fruit is an ancient zoan fruit.
Ganryu can turn into a full mammoth or human - mammoth hybrid form. In this form he has incredible strength along with tough elephant skin though the elephant skin is not as tough as Sabo's dragon scales. He can overpower and crush his opponents with his huge size and incredible strength.
I want each commander to be unique however Drake was never my character, it was Oda's so I'm not including him. So Ganryu powers do not really overlap with Drake's since I'm not including him. Also Mogo is a giant, not an massive animal so his fighting style is different from Ganryu. Also Ganryu is the only revolutionary to use a giant animal style.
Metroid: Metroid possess the steel steel fruit which allows him to cover his entire body in steel.
Metroid can cover his body in steel thus making him very durable and immune to most physical attacks. He can even use it offensively since the steel enhances the power of his attacks.
He is not a cyborg like Sentinel. He can turn his body into steel but he cannot fire machine guns or lasers.
Widow: Widow possess the spider spider fruit.
Again I said this fic diverges after chapter 653 and episode 573 and vice admiral Onigumo's devil fruit powers were not specified as a spider's until after that. Before that it was speculated to be the life return rokushiki move, similar to what CP9's Kumadori used.
Widow can use his multiple arms to overwhelm his enemies. It's hard to fight someone with eight arms. As widow is the only revolutionary to have many arms, this makes him unique.
Lucian: Lucian is an extremely powerful bowman.
Lucian is a master bowman. He is heavily based on Hawkeye from the Avengers and Legolas from Lord of the Rings.
Lucian is a master of the bow and can shoot at a very long range. However the range of his attacks is not as great as Van Auger of the Blackbeard Pirates. However Lucian is a deadly marksman and can shoot arrows in rapid succession and overwhelm his enemies with a rain of arrows.
Furthermore he can also shoot arrows with extreme force as they can even pierce through thick steel with ease.
Lucian is a bowman, and he is the only revolutionary to use a bow and arrow, so his abilities are unique in the army.
Special Weapons
Crisis: A powerful psychic, Crisis is a natural born psychic.
He can use his psychic powers to control and manipulate objects. He can make objects float and send them flying at his opponents at high speed. This can be used offensively or defensively. Offensively he can use large objects to ram and crush enemies. So he can send a large boulder at Ussop thus crushing him to death. Defensively he can use large objects to protect himself and intercept attacks. So if Ussop sends an attack at him, he can use a large object to block the attack.
However the speed at which Crisis can move objects is limited so a sufficiently fast opponent like Sanji can bypass this, especially since he has sky walk. Thus he is mostly a support fighter needing to team up with a commander or Knight to provide the real fire power. He is also capable of floating making him really appear like a psychic.
Also controlling large objects can be more tiring that lifting up smaller ones and making them move faster also drains him more. So he can be tired out if he uses his powers on large objects or makes them move quickly.
Crisis cannot read minds because that would make him too strong but he does have powerful observation haki to make it appear as if he can thus furthering his psychic powers.
His powers are not due to a devil fruit, in fact he has not eaten a devil fruit at all, he is a psychic. His powers do make it appear as if he's eaten a devil fruit, but he hasn't, it's his psychic powers. You can see why he's a special weapon, he is a psychic.
Oda has introduced a lot of races before the timeskip, giants, dinosaurs, fishmen, long armed people like Scratchmen Apoo, zombies, sea kings, etc. So here I am introducing a psychic.
Fear: Fear is a necromancer who can raise the dead. Hence he is Fear the necromancer.
Fear possess the life life fruit. It allows him to insert his life force into an inanimate object thus bringing it to life like a necromancer.
The main application is to insert his life force into a corpse. The corpse would come to life and fight for him. So he basically raises the dead like a necromancer. Any devil fruit abilities that the person had before they died, they retain it. However this only works if the person hasn't been dead for very long because then the devil fruit would have already left their bodies. So he can't resurrect Ace and Whitebeard because then they wouldn't have their powers. But he can kill a devil fruit user and then immediately implant his life force thus causing them to retain their abilities. Finally since it is his life force that brought them to life, the resurrected corpses have his life force inside them meaning they do not have any of their original personalities and have no free will, they are essentially zombies.
His devil fruit does have limitations. He implants his own life force into the corpse. Since it is his life force, the corpse would have his haki, not its own. So if for example, he resurrects Roger's corpse, it would be Roger's body, but it would have Fear's haki, not Rogers. Thus if Fear resurrects Roger, the pirate king would be significantly weaker. This coupled by the fact that if Roger had a devil fruit, he wouldn't retain it, means the resurrected Roger would be nothing like the original. The strongest warriors resurrected by Fear are actually much weaker since they don't have their own haki and if they were dead for too long, no devil fruit powers.
This ability though similar, still differs from Moriah's. Moriah implants a shadow into another corpse, not his life force. The corpse in question would retain abilities from the shadow but loose many of its own abilities. So if Moriah puts another shadow into Luffy's corpse, the corpse wouldn't fight anything like Luffy. However if Fear does put his life force into Luffy's body, the corpse would still fight exactly like Luffy. It would be weaker because it is Fear's life force and not Luffy's but still unlike Moriah, it would still fight just like him. Also Fear does not have to worry about his undead minions burning in the sunlight.
You can see why he's a special weapon. He can resurrect the dead, he is a necromancer with his own undead army. But if someone gets past his army, they can take out Fear. For that reason, Fear needs to team up with someone with good brute force like a Knight or commander to do the real fighting while he uses his army to provide support.
Yourself: Yourself is the great infiltrator of the revolutionary army.
Yourself possess the copy copy fruit. This allows him to turn into an almost perfect copy of the individual by touching them. They can take on the person's physical form, their habits, their clothes, special features such as unique weapons and even their devil fruit powers. This makes it almost impossible to distinguish between him and the real person.
His ability is similar to Bon Clay's but his is more advanced. Bon Clay can take on the person's form but he cannot change his clothes. Yourself once he touches you can take on your form perfectly, even your clothes along with any weapons you have. Secondly Bon Clay cannot copy habits and manners, he'll still act the same way, his usual okama self. Yourself however will gain their habits and manners as well so if he copies Zoro, he'll gain a passion for swordsmanship and get lost easily, however he wouldn't gain his memories so even though he gains a desire to be the world's greatest swordsman, he wouldn't know about the promise he made to Kuina. Thirdly Bon Clay cannot gain devil fruit or other special abilities. Yourself will gain any devil fruit powers the person has or special features such as if the person is a cyborg.
Of course in exchange for his devil fruit powers being more advanced, he can only change into one person at a time. Bon Clay can turn into many people. However Yourself can only change into one person at a time. The same thing applies to Special Weapon Mimic. Mimic can copy many abilities aside from devil fruit ones while Yourself can only copy one at a time, absolutely perfect, but only one. Yourself's copy copy fruit is far superior to both Bon Clay's and Mimic's. But the downside is that he can only copy one person at a time unlike Bon Clay and Mimic who can copy many people.
You can tell if the person is actually real or fake based on strength level. Yourself unfortunately cannot duplicate strength. So if he changes into Luffy, you'll notice that the fake is actually slower and weaker than the original, thus telling you that the person is actually Yourself. Likewise if Yourself changes into a civilian, you'll notice that the civilian is much stronger than he or she should be.
You can see why he's a special weapon, he can literally be anyone and provided he stays out of a fight or avoids certain situations, it is impossible to find him.
Well that's all the new guys that I added to the revolutionary army. Hope you enjoy them. These additions and changes have been made to "Profile of the Revolutionary Army" so check it out when you have a chance.
