Story:
The Homecoming by UnKnownSalvation
Star Rating: 3 out of 4 stars
Review: I'm Bryce Avila, and I'll tell you from beginning, I barely have nay favorites in this archive. Not because they're bad, but because they just don't get it. Sometimes we feel that we read a certain thing, not because of the characters, but because we want them to happen. I actually see very few stories that act out scenarios that you would believe the characters would do, or at least make sense. Here's one that isn't my cup of tea, but a story that gets it. Let's begin: (Henry Peters's style)
Gumball has very limited time because of an upcoming dance, one of the biggest that won't determine his social life, but what can happen with picking someone to go with. Gumball has a choice between people, but this mashes with many feuds and ideas that is just an emotional stairwell that gives us the idea that every ending, takes just one step.
I have to say that I don't like what was happening. I see Darwin acting a bit more naive while characters seem to have adjusted to a certain time line and such, but seems cheesy, as if we were just brought up to believe we will end up like this; almost like we all find true love by true love's first kiss. What I'm saying is that act like we know, but should have changed a bit differently, then some other direction.
I actually felt connected with some of these characters that have been introduced. Gumball feels the emotional ultimatum that marks a symbol in life that we all have a choice to fine the right one, while there will be obstacles and fights, but there is more to it than that. We also have tons of pressure introduced to us. We have this idea that high school won't really seem like, but have this foreshadowing task of what can happen in one of the best ideas of Gumball being in high school. It's not the best, but it's a great start to begin inspiration for ideas of how we can cherish these moments and hope for the one.
Improvement would try to ease more with the characters.
One-shot: The Homecoming is a test of friendship and love, the ending is what we hope for, but thrills us for the best one.
Review: I believe that this story has got all the ideas for a good romance (and I don't favor romances often): fate, choice, time, suspense, obstacles, thinking, friendship, more or less this is good. We have a story that focuses on high for Gumball, and remains as one of the best.
~ Bryce Avila, Author, Critic, Screenwriter
