5 MAY 18
Yes, there is a new chapter, but it's Chapter 18. The vets will understand it more, if you're not tracking, I'm currently fixing the whole story right now. I swear it will be batter!
The fixed the chapters have been naming them so you can see where I'm at in the clean up job!
7 MAY 18
Just like before, the new chapter is 28. I think you guys will really love it!
To the Vet, in order read-
The Great Falls Part one and two
The Dark Land
Death and Rebirth
I Still Got It/from the part where he finds the painting
This is all to set up Asuka in order to understand her in all ways!
You will understand the new chapters then!
9 MAY 18
Yes... a new chapter Let's Start Your Training, but backtracking again…
12 MAY 18
The clean up on my side is completed! Nicki is fixing all the stuff I didn't, please, there might be a few more days on getting the story that I feel is graded at a B- right now up to an A+.
After a few minutes, Marco stands up and cracks his neck, "She's really gone…"
The group watched him as he looks around the stream knowing he was alone in the water "What now?" He asked to no one but himself.
"Reaper, she will always watch over you… try not to worry much." The Priest said out loud.
"Yeah… sure." He turns around and makes his way to the group, his lovers each gave him a smile and he kept looking forward… that's when he heart had enough.
"Ugh… fu…" Next thing he saw was the top of the cave as Marco fell backwards.
There was a mixed of daddy, Marco and Reaper being shouted out loud.
…
"NOOOO!" Star was the first one to jump into that water picking up his limp body.
"BRING HIM HERE?!" The Priest barked out as Star and Ryoko dragged him.
"Daddy…!" Ember was in tears seeing her father like this. It was a short time until they placed him on a table.
The Priest started to check him out and found his chest pumping looking like his heart was about to burst, "This isn't good…"
Marco was groaning with each pass over his heart…
"What in the hell is going on?! Janna, take the girls out of here NOW!?" Star was taking command of this situation.
Miia and Ryoko looked over to her, "The doctor told us his heart was in bad shape, he's been hiding it for a long time your majesty…" Miia knew Star by the marks on her cheeks.
"He's acting like a stubborn asshole like always!" Ryoko was pissed seeing him like this.
"You two were his Captain's, what has happened the few days?" Hekapoo flame was starting to get larger.
The warriors snapped to attention, "GODDESS HEKAPOO… he's been a mess the moment he's came back… Yuki would know more…" They point over to her as she jumps in the air being put on the spot.
"You… that's where he got that name from? Tell me everything you know… NOW!" The two lovers stare daggers at her.
"MOMMY?! It's not Yuki's fault… she's been helping daddy and taking care of us…!" Gidget made a brake for it to make it back at the group as the girls followed behind her.
"I don't want you guys to see your father like this now go back." Star would never get loud with the girls.
"But it's true… something is wrong with daddy… he hasn't been the same since we found him…!" Maria looks down at the ground.
"They won't listen to me… brats…!" That last part came out low as Janna popped her little girl in the back of the head.
"We apologize for any misunderstandings, but Reap-" Ryoko was stopped as Star raised a hand in the air.
"His name is Marco Diaz, he left this life behind him because of Asuka… now he's in worse shape than before!" Star was hell bent on making sure everyone knew his true name.
"Yes… Marco came back here trying to mend his past, we only wanted to help in anyway… we owe it to him." Ryoko wasn't going to back down, but had to walk a fine line.
"Ha… more like getting back into his pan-" Hekapoo elbowed her in the ribs, Star wasn't buying it.
"That's enough, be glad we found him and the kids, for the most part, somewhere safe Butterfly." The demon looks back to Marco still passed out.
"If you wouldn't mind taking this conversation somewhere else, I would appreciate it." The Priest didn't even look up to them.
"Right… let's go." Janna turns on her heels and out the cave.
"You have a very complicated life Reaper… I'm glad to see so many people care and love you…" The Priest was easing his pain.
The women stand across from each other, past and current lovers looking at one another. The girls stand in the middle not knowing what to do.
"What do we do now? I thought we came here to fix this, not start a fight?" Janna was surprisingly the voice of reasoning.
"There's nothing to fight about, he belongs with us." Star takes on stepping forward.
"We don't have a say in this?" Yuki was able to find her voice.
"No you do not! We are the mother's to his daughters and therefore his home is with us!" Hekapoo pulls back Star.
"We need to get this fixed before it causes him anymore stress… what was all that business with Asuka pointing at your stomach?" Everyone looked over to where Hekapoo's finger was pointing, which was at Yuki.
"Ummm… ummmmm… cou… could we talk about this somewhere else?" She nods over to the girls not wanting them to hear this part.
"If you've done anything to him I-" Star was not giving them an inch.
"I SAID THAT'S ENOUGH?!" Everyone jumped seeing Hekapoo's eyes turn white.
"Star… you're not making this any easier, take the girls… NOW!" The Princess stomps her foot on the ground and walks away with the girls in tow.
"Tell us right this second Yuki!" Janna was now getting pissed.
"Last night… Marco… something happened to him that ended with him passing out. We had to drag him back to Ryoko's and I stayed with him for the night…" Man it's a lot harder to tell someone that you're in love with their man.
"Marco promised that he wouldn't leave me behind like he did the first time and I confessed my love to him…" The two lovers gasped.
"You… what?" This wasn't awkward, Hekapoo crossed her arms and leaned her head forward to hear the rest.
"We… we… we…" Yuki looks to his former comrades, they place a hand on each of her shoulders.
"They shacked up last night… there might be a good chance she's carrying the fourth Reap… I mean Marco child." Ryoko said as it was common knowledge.
"WHAT DID SHE SAY?!" Star had a twitch in her neck as the last words came out from their conversation.
"Why did you do it? Was this always your plan? Who gave you the right to take on this task?" Hekapoo walks up to Yuki, but is blocked by Miia and Ryoko. They stand in front of her as Yuki's sword and shield.
"Goddess Hekapoo… we might not happy knowing this fact as well… there's no need to make this situation worse than what it is. We should wait for REAPER to regain conscious!" Looks like Miia was over all this as she narrowed her eyes at the soon to be Queen.
"GRRRRRRR… THAT'S… NOT… HIS-" Star made her way to them until a new voice was heard.
"Has his heart been injured recently?" The Priest walks up to them already knowing it has.
The Princes stopped dead in her tracks, "Uhhh… Marco showed up to my house a few days ago in real bad shape…" Yuki looks over to the older male.
"Any ideas on what lead up to that young one?" Again, The Priest already knew.
Star's eyes were streaming hot tears as her body was shaking, "No? Only that something happen at… home…" The Jinko looks over to Star.
Ryoko and Miia looked over to Star as well, "Mommy? Daddy will be okay, don't worry. Everyone has been telling us how strong he is!" Ember grabs her mother's hand as her sisters start to show some of his fighting moves.
"It's… it's my fault…!" The girls stopped and then look up to her not understanding.
"Mama Star?" Gidget steps up to the women.
"I'm sorry…!" Star hits her knees on the ground.
Ember wraps her tiny arms around her mother's neck "No, no, no mommy… daddy gets hurt a lot, but he'll be fine like always…!"
Star only started to cry harder holding the little girl.
"Mercy told us his heart was damaged a few hours ago and it might give out, what is the cause of this to happen now?" Ryoko asked not liking how this was going down.
"It seems the muscles surrounding the heart area has been separated, while not good, it will heal in time. What issues he's having now is a combination of all the past trama it had went through… I'm doing everything I can back there… I don't know how much long he has..." Everyone's face turned to horror…
"No… he can't die… he's Reaper for fuck sakes…!" Miia couldn't feel anything right now.
"There's no way… no way she's the one that's going to do him in…! "Ryoko felt like she was being smacked in the face watching all this.
I'll stay on top of this more, leave a comment.
