Okay, why is Bishop so... attractive? Like, he's such a compelling villain, and he's so mysterious. Physically he's pasty and... well, likely attractive to some people, but damn, just his voice, and that black coat. Like, seeing him enter in "The Bad Day" with the coat blowing around him is just like, oh my god, I have a new favorite bad guy. I know the Bishop in this story will be an Utrom, but he may also be an antagonist of sorts. I'm working with the ideas.
I notice in my story, Leo's having the same character development as his 2003 counterpart. He's becoming more of a doer rather than a thinker, and makes rash choices out of anger. That'll be great for plot development.
So, finally, we reach "New Girl In Town". Who will this new girl be? Let's find out.
JamesBondfan007: Karai: (Shouts) All viglanties are bad! - Later, - Karai: I'm sorry i didn't mean to yell at you (hugs Mikey) - Mikey: It's okay Karai I'm not mad at you - Raph: Your Making him weak Let him be a man turtle! - Karai: Well he's not turning into you!
Me: You guys love writing your own little fluff plots. You know, if you guys want, you could write these small ideas into oneshots or something.
Guest: Shinigami will be in the next episode
Me: Hm, maybe.
Guest: can you make new girl in town Irma but human not Kraang
Me: Well, I'm not gonna say it isn't her, but I already have four chapters prewritten. It's how I stay on top of things.
LittleOldWriter12: Hmmmmmmmmmm... I have soooooooo many theories! This story is making my stomach turn!
Me: Don't throw up on your keyboard. I love all theories, they're so fun to read, mostly because most of them are wrong, but are really good ideas.
This review is from chapter 16
Guest: Wow. In the first time Raph acted rebel to Shredder, my reaction was like ... Rest in piece Raph. But its already the THIRD TIME he is rebel like this! I wonder how is he still alive... Plz don't die Raph. You're my favorite character! ;-;
Me: Meh, if he keeps this up, he might die. Raph should know better by now, but you know teenagers.
CC: I love how Karai is caring towards Mikey. She basically protected Mikey from Shredder. I just found it cute she read him bed time stories. It really shows how much she really does care and is not as bad as she appears to be. Also I can see Donnie telling Mikey not to drive the battle shell but Raph and Karai go behind his back to teach Mikey how to dive. - Raph: Okay, Mikey, start driving and also hit people while you're at it - Karai: No, we're not hitting people! We're teaching Mikey how to drive without doing anything dumb. - Raph: I'm trying to teach Mikey how to be a turtle-man so back off! - Karai: I'm not gonna back off! Mikey might get hurt! - Raph: And this is the reason Mikey is still a wimp! You keep coddling him! - Karai: I don't coddle him! - Raph: You read him bed time stories! - Karai: Oh, and encouraging Mikey to hurt people is better?! - Raph: Trust me, it'll help him! - Karai: With what?! Mikey would never do that to people - Raph: Didn't you kidnap a guy for Donnie? - Karai: You were there! - Mikey: I'm not gonna learn how to drive today, am I?
Me: Karai's never gonna live that kidnapping thing down, huh? Maybe I should start using that in my story. I think I will in later chapters, just because it's hilarious.
A week later
One thing the brothers always knew: never mess with Donnie's stuff. Donnie's stuff was a confusing web that none of their intellects could decipher. It was better left untouched, lest someone get hurt. Of course, danger had never daunted Michelangelo. So, when Snakeweed looked a little hungry, he took an opportunity.
Mikey threw his hands up in frustration." How many times do I have to say I'm sorry?"
"You can keep saying it until we catch Snakeweed again," Donnie replied.
They'd been chasing him through town until, finally, they'd cornered the giant plant mutant in an alley. But rushing in there would be a death wish. They needed a plan.
"We'll attack from above," Leo said.
But Raph shook his head. "That'll take too long."
Karai snorted a laugh at the two, arguing as always. "I can handle it."
Leo scowled. "Well, I'm the leader, you listen to my plan."
Raph turned to the other turtles. "All in favor of making Karai temporary leader." A moment, then all hands went up.
Leo could only scowl indignantly as Karai shrugged at him before pulling out her tanto and running into the alley.
Leo shook his head. There was no way she could take on Snakeweed alone. But, as soon as he turned to her, she threw some white powder into his face, blinding him. Metsubushi: The cheater's way to win.
A kick to the head put the monster down for good. The turtles cheered. All but one.
"Alright, Neesan!" Donnie cheered.
Mikey jumped up and down. "You're the best!"
Karai smiled, walking away from Snakeweed like a boxer leaving the ring after winning the championship.
"You see, Leo?" Raph said. "When we listen to Karai, things get done."
Leo's infinite scowl continued on. "My plan would've worked."
Raph smirked. "Sure, it would've."
Leo huffed, uncrossing his arms. "You know what? Fine. If you think she's so good, you can follow her orders from now on. Because I'm out."
With that, Leo turned and walked away, gone, absorbed by the night like he was a shadow of himself.
"Well," Raph said like nothing had happened. "Seems like you're leader now, Aneki."
Karai scowled, watching where Leo had disappeared. He had just walked out, and they didn't care. Leo was their big brother. He deserved better treatment than this.
"You know what, guys?" She sheathed her tanto. "No. You're all so disrespectful of Leo. He's your older brother. You're supposed to follow his orders and trust him to lead you out of danger."
Raph rolled his eyes. "Aw, c'mon, Karai. He's just a whiny baby."
Karai huffed. "If that's what you think, then have fun leading the team, Raph." She said, walking the way Leo had before he'd disappeared. "Maybe you'll respect Leo more when you fail."
Raph gaped after her for a moment, but quickly covered it up with a scowl. "Fine!" He called after her. "And I won't fail!"
Donnie touched his shoulder lightly. "Raph, let her go." He gestured to the fallen mutant. "We need to get Snakeweed back to my lab before he wakes up."
Raph huffed, taking one of Snakeweed's limbs. "Fine, but this isn't over."
"Sure, it's not." Donnie rolled his eyes. "Now, get pulling."
Karai frowned, watching over the rooftops. Leo had gone about a mile or so from the others, muttering and kicking things all the while. He's eventually stopped on a rooftop to vent silently.
This was her fault. She'd shown him up in front of the others. He was always working so hard, always so focused and dedicated. Sometimes, Karai just wished he would let loose and have fun. Maybe she could help. She'd started this problem, and now she would fix it.
But what would Leo enjoy most? He'd always seemed to have fun when they would spar. Maybe he just needed someone to play with. A devious smile crossed her face. She had an idea.
Karai grabbed her communicator and called up the lair, signaling a group of soldiers that she needed them immediately. She closed the communication line and looked back down at Leo, grumpy, fuming, unsuspecting.
This would be fun.
Karai has ideas. Maybe she's calling in that new girl... or maybe she's just gonna surprise him with ice cream.
So, guess what? I'm making a fan comic for this fic. I have the first page in pencil. I'm debating whether to color it or make it black and white except for the turtle's masks, blood, and eyes. Is there anything else I should color in if I make it black and white? Seriously, if you want a comic at all, help by advising me in the reviews.
