Okay its been practically a year since I've updated this story.

My reasoning for that is lack of motivation and at the beginning laziness. But when I did have the motivation to write I realized that it had been so long that my writing has changed drastically. I read over this story and found many flaws and I also realized I drifted away from my original plans of this story.

So this version of the story will no longer be updated...HOWEVER I am planning to rewrite this story. It probably won't be very soon because I need to get the stories that I have finished while I still have motivation for them. So I'll say around summer is when I'll TRY to start back up

I can't make any promises because being a junior in high school I'm having to get my shit together to get ready for the real world or college...Even though technically that's what Senior year is for...but hey! I'll be prepared at least, unlike all of the *cough* idiots *cough* in my class. XD 80% of the class are slackers...

But anyways back on topic...

OKAY! So here is the real reasoning for my note, all of you that read my story, I'm not asking for ideas technically, I need criticism. GOOD criticism mind you. XD I need to know what needs to be corrected, like did the romance develop too fast? Maybe there wasn't enough conflict between the twins before they agreed to share Karly? Or perhaps something else you may have taken notice on.

ALSO my writing on M scenes is WAY better and I am no longer shy about it, so the M scenes will hopefully be better for you guys that enjoy the M scenes. XD

For those of you that don't like M scenes, I'm sorry to say but you'll either have to get used to the M stuff or move on to another story. It sounds harsh and maybe it is, but this story is supposed to be super dark, and I didn't really accomplish that the first time, so maybe the second time I'll have better luck! :D

I really, really, REALLY look forward to your comments so don't disappoint me! Kay? c;

~Blood