guys this is really bad! I want reviews on how to improve this. this includes ooc and oc and vriska x oc for soem odd reason. i wrote this way back and decided to publish this. Its pretty damn awful btw! I want to write a new story but with the same character. So please help a brother out. also i didnt write their typing the way they talk. I hate that

random story i cam up with i might continue based on some feedback. Eh i'll try to continue but its a fan made character i saw on deviant art i threw into this universe so yep...good luck reading my first horrible fanfic OC x laura basically