Um ... My name is SaphireRide i am a new fanfic writer and well i hope to get some advice on how good or bad are my stories and hope to avoid Mary sues and maybe even make a good self insert! I have already 1 animorphs story:Whispering Wind and have made many other stories at home. But the stories i will be doing in most archives are : Maximum ride, Animorphs,Alex Rider,Supernatural,Vampire Diares and maybe dabble on books i read to become fanfics! Here is my feelings on the Animorphs book i am officially sad K.A Applegate killed off rachel and made tobias become excluded from the animorphs world living on as a hawk . And when cassie and jake broke up i felt my heart practically shatter they were GREAT for eachother. Oh and when ax got tooken by the One and when she made the cliffhanger : I looked at jake his eyes wild as rachel's (or something like that) he smiled and said "Ram the bladeship" and then i was like where's the rest your just gonna leave us hanging oh come on! But now that you all know i am new here i will except any flames that might have advice but if you curse or say my story sucks and i should go delete it i will reply and you may have a enemy. Anyway i am hoping to learn more i have been writing stories for a while please read my animorph story tell me if you like it! I might even write parodies or a song fic if i have time and thanks for reading my profile. Oh and i may be putting up a new story to get the readers intrested i won't tell you the title but it will be a crossover between the book made by Stephaine Meyer called"The Host" which is better then Twilight could ever be for once Stephaine was thinking when she wrote . And It will be mixed with the animorphs book. Now all you fans of twilight and New moon i don't mean to offend you with the comment i made. But i like twilight it's an okay book although edward could be a little less of a over protective person it seems Bella is smart enough to take care of herself and Jacob is cool i like werewolves or any wolves! But to those people who hate twilight i am not saying i LOVE the book or I'm a fan i am just saying it's a decent book okay jeez so leave your insults and flames to yourself.Thank You :Rate,Comment and pleasse review my 1st story :Whispering Wind! |