a poem written by Christian after the death of Satine. There are two final drafts here but we couldn't choose between them - we liked them both 2 much! plz review (we lack confidence in our poetic skills) thanx, love mabel and karen 14 yrs, London

A poem about the love for Satine from Christian, the day she died! It is a work in progress so we want to know any comments you have about it! I know the layout is messed up but you can grasp the general idea! Co-written with Karen!