Hi everyone,

This is the first time I am doing anything like this. I am not a writer normally so this is a new adventure for me. (Yes, I am originally a nurse.)

I got hooked on CSI NY a couple of years ago. I loved the story line & the characters. I got frustrated w the Flack character. I thought we should be seeing him more often. What could the writers do w him because they made him look less intelligent than the others players (scientists) ? Truthfully, he seems like the perfect opportunity to create a more "normal" chacter rather than the usual dysfunctional people we usually have to tolerate. (Actually, all of the CSI NY characters seem better than the other CSI characters.) While the actor for Flack is excellent, I found the "train ride" episode disturbing. I think Flack is just hanging out there in the wind. I hope he does not get written off.

I wrote this story over the last year. Some friends liked it so I am posting it. I hope you enjoy it. I'd appreciate your comments. Best wishes, elena ricardo...(P.S. The science is correct too.)