Author Notes, and notes on the author.

I'm 23 and not saying anything of a personal nature about myself, period.

Besides the fact I really dislike these adverts on my profile, but I suppose the site must get it's money from some where.

I use UK spellings , unfortunately I'm pretty much a crappy speller, I'll try to eliminate most of the errors before it goes up , if I spot them afterwards I'll correct them.

If I make any mistakes, (cultural, grammatical, stuff from the manga and so on) please feel free to point them out and I'll corrrect them.

Reviews

I will write/happily/update without reviews, but if no one tells me if/when the story stops making sense, well don't blame me for carrying on not making much sense;though I will endeavour to.

If you want to Pm me instead I'll happily respond.

Fiction

A Plot too far

Answers to reviews

Thank you to BitterSweetNightmare for being the first to review.

D-Scyther

Thank you for your critique, don't sweat the details they're coming up slowly in the next chapters .Sorry for the blanks, I just didn't want to blow the whole story line to quickly.The plot line is a bit simplistic once it's all together, although it will include some new characters as it progresses, I hope it doesn't disappoint you and again thank you for the review.I'll try to slow it down a bit in future chapters.

xXxTsukuyomixXx

Thank you for taking the time to review, I'm glad your enjoying the story so far.

DiMeraslover

Thank you for your kind comments , although I'm going to have to dash your hopes a bit, it's not going to be a Mousse Akane pairing, more of an alliance.Yes I also like that shade of Mousses personality it makes him a rather interesting one to write, especially since he is vengeance orientated, but can still draw the line some where(even though it should have been drawn a lot earlier ).

Thank you for continuing to read and review, it's gratifying to know that the story is living up to your expectations.

Yes things are getting a bit trickier and they will continue to do so.So far I've got more than six original characters yet to add to the mix (three of which I still don't know where the hell they've come from, seem to have invented and invited themselves).

Yes the Amazon village and it's politics will be more involved in this story, mainly because I wish there had been more fleshing out the details of it in the manga , and to make it at least little interesting to read.

About that law keep it in mind.He he he I have plans, and they're are not the usual someone else gets accidentally engaged excuse of a loop hole.

A plot too far is going to have a lot a sub plots going on (damn things are sprouting like weeds. I may need to do some pruning or shift them to another story, so there might be a series the these unused plot lines I leave open)Eventually all the lines will tie in together( I hope, I pray , I doubt) and the title will make a lot more sense when I'm finished(If I ever do get all of this down).

I was aiming for that but didn't know if I'd hit the mark.DiMeraslover thank you :salute: , that review made my night.

James Birdsong

Thank you for the applause and continuing to read & review , it is very much appreciated.

hey-there

Don't worry I'm still working on this I've just had to suddenly put the fiction on hold for a bit, I'm starting to pick up the threads and the next chapter will be coming soon.

Ps if you think this is a cliff hanger wait till you see the next one. : )

LadySorrow1121

Thank you for the thoughtful review LadySorrow1121 it was a pleasure to read, and I apologise for making you and everyone else wait so long, but as promised above I'll make sure to get the next stream of updates up quickly.

Um about the not showing what side of the line I'm on I hate to say it, and I'm very grateful for the compliment but don't be too impressed, because as far as I'm concerned there isn't just one line, just one for every person.

Although please let me know if I cross the fine line between degrading comments from other characters directed towards Shampoo, and outright character bashing.

Character bashing is one of the few things that irks me in fan fiction and I'd really like to avoid it in my own stories.

(there is a reason for these comments and the characters attitude but your going to have to wait until chapter eight before it gets fully revealed)

On a general note

Any further updates are just going to be in 1,000-2,000 word chapters until I hit about 20,000, then it will all be condensed again, and the cycle will continue.I will put warnings up before I do this.

Warning warning add in the sirens if you please, roughly three more chapters to go and then everything goes into one nice big lump again. Just so you know.

One shots

Questions

DekriThank you for taking the time to review.

I've now rewritten the piece to eleminate the majority of the spelling and gramatical errors.

Gatshicenteri - Happy to amuse, if only for a little while

Ducky'sgirl4ever-Glad you liked it.

sweetyamiyugigirl

Nope, this is set well after the final episode.The First One have been gone since the Shadow war's end, Kosh is dead , and all the races we know and love have either died or gone beyond the rim (personally I like to think they'll all have gone beyond the rim).

Someone would have to go back, and two races might start the cycle again... to borrow from Terry Pratchett "one might be enough"

So I thought, of any of the charaters to gain 'enlightenment' which would you send back as a sheperd?

Reread and think along those lines and it's pretty easy to guess who it is -

Singing in my sleep

sweetyamiyugigirl

Thank you for being the first to review this piece I know it's not one of my better fics, and I appreciate you taking the time to drop me a line on what you thought of it.

To answer your questions I had planned on leaving Kosh's answer to readers imagination (I'm being slightly lazy/ evil) Also as stated in the summery it is going to be a two chapter fic though the second chapter is from the ships point of view high jacking heads. I won't say any more or I'll blow the next chapter.