Hello everyone!

I'm new to FanFiction.net, my friend recently recommended it to me. I checked it out, wondering it it had my favorite series. The chronicles of ancient darkness. I'm currently writing a chapter for a new story and I'll be happy to submit it soon, although, the dely is driving me nuts! Please check out my first story in Chronicles of Ancient Darkness once I submit it. I'd love some tips and maybe a few suggestions to the stories future.

Note: I usually just write off the top of my head with a mental image of the story ahead. So it may seem a little random, but please, if anyone would prefer reading my stories with planning, please say so.

Chronicles of Ancient Darkness stories/books:

The Power-

I started writing this while I was waiting for my teacher to finish giving a test, seeing as I was already finished. I plan to submit it as soon as possible. Please read.

Summary:
It starts with a young 16 year old girl, with jet black hair to her thighs in the darkness of a hole, while a Soul Eater waits for her body to be abandoned by her souls so he can turn her into a Tokoroth. His plans are foiled when Torak, far away, defeats the Demon Bear. The girl escapes from the hole, finding that she has regained her control over her will. She wanders for as long as she can, weak and starving, until, finally, she collapses on a bed of moss, and wakes up to a night that will change her entire life...