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You have received a reply from the author, SoraStrife92, regarding the review
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Title: What you get when you get involved with Squall
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3016662/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1071410/
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how can you say that?!?!
do you know how long i spent on it!
it was my first EVER fanfic so you just say it was crap??
i have plenty of people that say it was awesome, and so i don't need epople like
you putting me down!!
ARGH!!
thanks for nothing..

Well I didn't read all of it, the first page almost bored me to death so I thought I'd spare myself. There's no need to get angry, it's not my fault your story sucks. maybe if you spent more time thinking about what you're going to write rather that just writing random shit you'd do alot better. Also, you're welcome for nothing.

You have received a reply from the author, SoraStrife92, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: What you get when you get involved with Squall
Chapter: 8
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3016662/8/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1071410/
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I can't believe you...
Yes, I admit, there is spelling mistakes but that can't be helped, everyone has
them.
Oh, and you haven't even done ANY fics yourself, so how the hell can you take
the ps out of mine?
You haven't wrote any of your own, so there is no point in flaming mine.
Oh, and yes it wasn't a very good ending...I know. But, the point it that if you
don't like a fic, then don't say it in a review! It doesn't exactly help the
writer, it puts them down and makes them think that their way of writing is
crap..

But your way of writing is actually crap so I'm just telling the truth. And thfact that I'm a flamer...does that not make any sense to you or are you just a dumbshit?

You have received a reply from the author, SoraStrife92, regarding the review
you posted for:

Title: Luck Can Change
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3313031/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1071410/
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why can't you just leave me alone?
people like you should be banned from this site

Now where would be the fun in that?

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you really have no life do you?
haha, i laugh at people like you now...you're pathetic..

So I'm pathetic am I? That's hardly in your place to say that; at least I'm not the one who writes shit stories, posts them up on the internet and hope people give it a good review. My friend, the only reason you fet good reiviews is becuase people pity you because you wrote such a shit story. All I'm saying is the truth because other people don't have the guts to.

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penname: Cheri6661
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your retarded.

That's hardly in your place to say that. the fact that you don't know who I am so I could be someone you do or don't know. If you did know me, maybe I'd be one of your closest friends, and if you didn't know me, then how do you know I'm not just a great writer who tells the truth about people's stories because they could do so much better that the peices of shit that they've submitted.

penname: SelphieLoire
profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/846299/
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Buddy, I'm not attempting to lash out at you or anything, and I've read over
your reviews and comments towards others. I cannot say I am very stupefied by
your personal option in trying to discourage other ambitious writers such as
Sorastrife or any other people. Though you may not have reverence for others,
and due to your online behaviour, I find that you may not merit any respect that
is given to you. This seems like a cry for attention in a very negative way. I
suppose you should stop, because seriously it's really not worth anyone's time
to read such detestable language and such put downs for such a juvenile cause.
You have been called a retard, pathetic even. I wouldn't say you are retarded,
and I do admit that their are some stories that 'bore me to death', but this is
in fact feeble. I do respect the fact that you are willing to speak your mind, I
am, too. With SoraStrife's story, I did speak my mind truthfully, but I had not
used any invectives to prove how much I did
not fully agree with something. You have every right to voice your opinion, but
please, as writers, appreciate that you aren't as blunt as you are. I suggest
you start posting up your own stories, and prove that you aren't afraid of
flames and people attacking your inspirations. I also find that you would make a
very good editor as you keep an eye open for mistakes, but everyone does make
them and you should come to terms with that. I hope you understand that I am not
trying to insult you or in fact threaten you , but approach you as a mature
adult and not an immature child. I do wish that you start posting for I am now
interested in the ideas that establish in your mind. Remember, this is a comment
done out of respect despite the many intolerable acts you have put upon the
other writers. I'll be looking out for your work in the near future.

You have put forward a reasonable point. However I will continue to comment on people's stories, but only with constructive criticism rather than bluntly pointing something out. I will also be posting a story sometime in the future. My acts weren't intolerable, they were just truthfully voiced, think about it this way, if everyone lied about your story being good when it wasn't,this would give you unkown false hope because you would think that your story is good when it's not, this would lead you to write another, and more after that and I'm fed up of reading so many stories that aren't going anywhere or have very little description of anything or are utterly boring so I tell them the truth, maybe that'll make them think twice.

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oh by the way Dark, i am rewriting my story, as there is some things i really
want to add...
thanks selphie, you couldn't have put it better lol.
and those reviews put me down for a while..but you have to understand, i'm not
that good at writing, but i'm improving slowly. I try to add details and stuff,
so i'm rewriting the story to make it better..i hope you're happy, but i'm
obviously not so...yeah...
and it would be nice to see one of your own stories, i'd like to see your own
little way of writing, not to critize of course...

If you're improving at all, then it must be extremely slowly. Even if you rewrite the story, I probably wont read it, it seemed rather boring to me. Also may name is not 'Dark' it's 'Dark Narcissa', geez, get it right.

You have received a reply from the author, Cheri6661, regarding the review you
posted for:

Title: Cloud Plus Alcohol Equals WTF!
Chapter: 2
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3429266/2/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1226191/
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Hey!
Thankyou. Yeh I did originally put it in seperate paragraphs but I copied and
pasted it instead of uploading the doc...So it didn't work.
&& Yeh I wrote almost all of it, Sian(SoraStrife92) helps me with the plot and
stuff. I word it though and add to it.
Thankyou so much for the review

Okay, I didn't know that ;P lol, hmmmm so her name is Sian, interesting... :P. Yeah it doesn't seem like her boring style of writing and repetition of words :) No problem for the review :) :)

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penname: Sora-Dragon
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Dude, chill out. But, I find flamers funny. I don't appreciate you picking on my
friend, but you are funny. I can't wait to see you who you flame next (as long
as it's not one of my friends :P)

Chill out yourslef :P Sorry Natalie, or should I say Elliott :P Or even Saffron, or Sapphire, gee you seem to like having so many different names, haha. So my friend, what if I like to pick on your friends? lol. Maybe I'll flame you next ;P. Oh yeah, have fun at Alton Towers tomorrow hahhah

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penname: AL x BB
profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1213600/
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do you actually have a life leave sorastrife alone you don't deserve eny respect
or attention so far you have picked on her and most of us have had it try
posting a story yourself at least sorastrife actually attempts a story you just
i dont know you just flame others hoping you wont have competition ow and by the
way

POST THIS ON YOUR PROFILE YOU FAT FUCKING REJECT BECAUSE IF ITS NOT ALL THERE
THEN I CAN EASILY JUST MAKE A STORY CALLED

DARK NARCISSA

SUMMARY DARK IS A FAT COW WHO FLAMES OTHER BECAUSE SHE CANT EVEN WRITE A STORY
HER SELF

OW AND FLAME MY STORY INTRO I DON'T GIVE A SHIT I CAN JUST BLOCK YOU AND SHUT
REVIEWS OFF MY STORY AND PUT A NOTE DUE TO A REALLY NASTY PERSON I AM AFRAID
YOU WILL HAVE TO POST ME REVIEWS

Correction: you don't deserve any respect, for having such bad spelling. I don't come onto fanfiction to read stories with a load spelling mistakes. If her stories weren't awful, then I wouldn't say anything bad about them, and what if I didn't come onto fanfiction to write stories? What if I just created an account to read stories and leave relevant reviews because some people block anonymous reviews. Actually I'm not fat, I'm quite thin. Did you hurt yourself typing because your so dumb? You were saying 'ow' alot. Hmm, so how good are you at fighting or martial arts? probably not very good... Oh well, all the more easier for me.

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if you must know i have a black belt in karate ow and i found out what you have

Narcissistic personality disorder
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Narcissistic Personality Disorder
Classification & external resources
Narcissus, the mythical Greek youth, after whom narcissism is named, as depicted
in John William Waterhouse's "Echo and Narcissus," ca. 1903. Narcissus might
have been diagnosed as a classic, somatic narcissist.
ICD-10 F60.8
ICD-9 301.81

Narcissistic personality disorder (NPD), a term first used by Heinz Kohut in
19711, is a form of pathological narcissism acknowledged in the Diagnostic and
Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders in 1980, in the edition known as DSM
I-TR. Narcissistic personality disorder is characterized by extreme focus on
oneself, and is a maladaptive, rigid, and persistent condition that may cause
significant distress and functional impairment.

in other words you are seeking attention from others when you flame people

Uhh, yeah, no-one cares...moron...

So what if you have a blackbelt? I take martial arts; kickboxing, karate, self defence, kung fu, ninjitsu and tae kwon do as a form of anger managment and I don't give a fuck. So what if I have mental or paranoria issues? Who cares? Oh yeah, by the way, I don't have a personality disorder, that would be you seeing as you have nothing to do other than message me with a load of crap.

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who are you exactly, you seem to know natalie and about the alton towers trip at
jcc...
because if you're someone like rosstam you can just stay out of my life...
and i think i know why you didn't like my stories..i thinki it was because it
wasn't yaoi...
yeah, i couldn't help the repitition of words, but i was only in year 9 and had
a crap english teacher...ugh.., just try to calm down next time you flame
someone...

So what if I know Natalie? She has written about the Alton Towers on her profile moron, I guess you haven't read it recently have you? Incorrection: I didn't give your story a bad review because it wasn't yaoi, I just happen to like yaoi too, I gave your story a bad review because it was shit. Also, you did not start writing your stories in year 9, you started writing them in year 10. I have no reason to calm down, I am calm. And who the hell is Rosstam? Oh wait, I know REJECT! One more thing, why do you always copy other people? I've heard stories about that from several of the people that know you.

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how the fuck did you know about the 'reject' thing?
and if people carry on doing that at jcc, i'm seriously going to hurt rosstam...
HE'S the reject, not me!!

It's quite easy to know about the reject thing, you cantact a few people here and there... OOHHH You're going to hurt him!? How scary! Actually, I've been told he fits in with people quite well, and he's quite funny sometimes. I don't like to associate with rejects much

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oh, no way is he funny when he is putting you through hell at school...
and yes i will hurt him, as i'm perfectly capable of it..and i have friends
behind me on that one too.
and why can't you tell me who you are?

It's your own damn fault that he's putting you through 'hell'. OOHHHH you're going to hurt him? Oh no! The world is sooo scared. Hmm, odd, I didn't think you had friends Sian...

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penname: Sora-Dragon
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Heya
How are you today?

I'm good thanks. How are you my little star?

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I'm good thankies
I'm so glad it's finally the holidays

Me too. Umm, Star, do you still like that guy?

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gee, just broadcast it to the world why don't ya. But yes, yes I do.

I thought so :P I can believe that fool Sian asked him out, like, 3 times. Does she not understand the word no? lol

penname: Sora-Dragon
profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1066494/
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Umm, I'd like to ask a few questions:
1. What is your name?
2. Could you be a little nicer to Sian?
3. Do you have msn? Is Star my new nickname now:P

Lol, My name is Sian! Lol, oh the horrors, okay, I'll try to be nicer to her, and yes I do :P P.s You already know my real name :P Don't be lying to people now. It's not very nice :P

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penname: Sora-Dragon
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I'm not lying to her!And of course I know your real name, I have it in flowers
on my msn name
I like the nickname Star, it's pretty

You really think you're not lying to her? Think really hard about that. And the flower thing is cute. My msn address is:

terrauriza@hotmail.co.uk

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penname: Rikora6661
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i know who you are. lalalala.

PMSL I LOVE YOU. YOU ARE A GENIOUS.

Yes 'somebody' told me who you are. I was shocked. hehehehe.

Hello

Heya. I know who you are too :

Why thank you, it's not every day I get called a genious :

Hmm, I wonder who that somebody is:P