Ok, I'm thirteen and I've just started writing. My first story, "Forgotten Hopes," is based on the creatures on the site Neopets if you don't know what Neopets is and what's on it, here's a quick run over...Lupes, the main character of my story, are basically wolves. And Usuls, the creature Spirit tried to attack, are like squirrels. My story, "Forgotten Hopes," is not finished yet and it will probably have five or more chapters in all when I'm finished. I encourage you to criticize my story, compliment it, and give me a few pointers.