I really don't know what to put in this little box so here it goes...

I live in Sebastian FL where I do and play all kinds of things. Water Polo is amazing, its the only contact sport for girls and it is viscous. Also I swear to the gods that if anyone asks if 'Water Polo is like volley ball but in a pool' I will have to murder something, but something small...like a plant or a bug. Swimming isn't as much fun as Water Polo but it does get ones ass in shape. Surfing is pretty decent over here though some days there isn't even a single decent set but every once in a long while when there is a hurricane off the coast things get pretty good. Hmmm not much girly stuff in there eh? Well that's whatever. I'm just a product of my environment, the environment being three older brothers.

When i'm not kicking ass in Polo (or getting my ass kicked) I'm usually listening to music. I love it, it's the best! Favorite bands (sort of in order): INCUBUS!, Gorillaz, , Radiohead, Kent, Led Zeppelin, The Doors, The Beetles, Audioslave, Blur, Supervillains, Slightly Stoopid and a ton that I am forgetting.

One last note I love the "Southern vampire mysteries" they are the shit. and if you haven't seen HBO's mini series GENERATION KILL I strongly advise it, the dialog is great, I love the picture it paints of the Marines (that they are crazy badasses) in Iraq cause it's from their perspective and also Alexander Skarsgard's hot ass is in it and i think he is...talented really, really talented.

The chapter that I've published is for a story that I hope is interesting and engaging (also with a twist), I wanted to re-write it with characters that are more dynamic, one's that have flaws that are more that skin deep and less obvious, it's just kinda weired that its twilight considering I didn't really care for it and think that it sorta secretly hates women. What can I say it bugged me that the whole damn book was filled with things like:

"Aren't you hungry?" he asked, distracted.

"No." I didn't feel like mentioning that my stomach was already full - full of butterflies.

Sweet Satan, please tell me that no one really thinks like that.

Also I hated that the whole "Edward sneaking into her room every night to watch her sleep" wasn't an issue with her at all. i mean how rape-y can you get?