I don't flame. I just tell you the points where you faltered and how you can improve it.

I do write stories in ff.net but I write it in another penname. Sensitive people are annoying. I just want to tell you ho wyou can improve. I'm not telling you that you should downright stop writing.

I can be pretty condemning but only if you deserve it.
Criteria for deserving this:
1. You flame other people yet you yourself deserves a flame.
2. You get into things personally like insulting a reviewer who just means well.
3. Your story is poorly written and not only that! It was written just to annoy a person who is a far better writer.
4. You twist and turn the story just to fit your standards. With so much mutilation of the original story, the fic should be in Fictionpress.
5. Especially if you committed all these crimes.

I'm not the reviewer who flames just for the sake of flaming. I don't even flame. It's how you look at it.