Hi Everyone... I am a new writer trying to get feedback on my writing. I LOVE the twlight series and thought I would put a spin on a possible book 5. I am hoping to someday write my own book, but nothing to do with Edward and Bella. I just love the books so much I have to keep writing about them or I will go crazy.

I go to school full time and I also work. So yes that makes me an older Twilighter

I am going to try to post a chapter a day to keep the story, but somedays I get total writers block and it just doesn't come out right.

Please review my work and give me all critizism. I don't mind good or bad. We can only help each other in our quest to be better writers.

God Bless.