If I reviewed you, it was highly likely that I pointed out a lot of problems with your story. I see a lot of stories on here with grammar and spelling problems. Many, many young authors do not know how to punctuate speech properly. For the general information of anyone who happens on my author page, I offer you this link:
which may help you with your grammar issues. Specifically, I'd like point everyone to the rules for using quotation marks on that site:
. If you read and follow these rules, you are much less likely to see me giving you grammar lessons among your reviews.

Thank you and have a nice day.