Emergence is my first fanfiction story ever, I'm mainly experimenting with what styles work in which circumstances. Ummmm criticisms are more than welcome, cause I do want to improve, (flames however will be ignored :P). If you see any errors, feel free to point them out, (he he point all you want, whether I do anything about them, meh :P)

Oh, P.S In the first chapter of Emergence, I think I may have gotten sloppy for a couple of pages halfway through. I guess I might have been rushing to finish the chapter so I could get to the good stuff. I may come back and try and fix it later, it just seems a little off. Oh well, maybe it's not that noticeable *scratches head nervously*. Ugggh *grimaces, my summary sucks, I may have to change that in the future too lol.