Ok I am back everyone... if you have a problem with a flamer please give me your story name and I'll read it and tell you what I think, I'll respond to those dirty bastards and what not. Please pass this around, tell those you know... cause I'm here to help everyone against people with no heart, and no brains for to look past anything. So I'm here to protect and serve those victims of Fanfictionpolice, Fanfictionsavior, and all the others.

Ok here is the reason for this name. When I got on for the first time; I started to read all these stories, Pacifically Cadedra's ( which beside the akagrammarerrors is good) I don’t care if there is Grammar problems because I like to use my brain. It is called work your brain and figure it out your self. This is because I hate the way they treat others. They think there better just because they made up some dumb wanna bee thing. They are the ones who really need to stop being rude. I say if the story is written its written, it cant be changed, some one reads it so its already out. Leave it out then. You see they are just dumb people with bad attitudes and no life wanting to take there anger out on people who are better then them. They cant write stories so they take it out on others. Well my name is Halley I live well I wont give that out, wink wink. ( I live in my fantasy world, were brad pit is mine and you know) I have green eyes brown hair 5'5" age srry that’s not something id like to share ( shh I’m16 don’t tell any one) I am tired of the fruit wannabees fan fiction police. I believe no one should treat others with out respect. Life is short to short to make enemy's. well I will up date soon. I was just going fast. here is my list of rules... a.) be kind b.) you don’t have to be a straight A student to be smart. c.) never be s prissy stuck up prep like fan fiction savior, and Lady Hades, and all those other fruits. e.) Have some dignity, be kind to others, and do to them as you would want them to do to you. F.) never get F’s on a re port card, your parents might get mad, but I wouldn’t know I have had only one f in like 1st grade, I hated my teacher. Ok here is the thing… I got into a argument with fan fiction saviour… and this person Lady Hades tries to hurt my feelings because of my belief in god, please read this so that you may understand why I do what I do, and then you can think of what you want to. To all of those who have gone through this before as well, my deepest apologies, for having to deal with morons… And she thinks she cant spell but look at hers and the errors. Donna Lynn, my apologise, but this is for fanfictionpolice/suck. Well, if you say you're 16, the education system must have severely gone down hill. Let me give you a little lesson. "your being what other people would call a bully" YOU ARE, is what you are saying at the beginning of that sentance so PLEASE use the term... YOU'RE. Dumbass. Once again I find it sad to see a 16 year old spell like that the same goes for the other shamefull mistakes you made such as... "Have you ever herd of.." herd= HEARD. Use herd when you're talking about a bunch of antelopes. Capishe. And as for your 'god' I believe it should be 'God'. "In the eyes of God" you know what that entails, that God is a physical being with eyes, that entails that you are an idiot. God is symbolism, he is for insecure people like yourself, now I don't disrespect anyone who believes in God, believe in what you want. But you, to say crap like... That FanFiction Saviour should beg forgiveness? From God? Do you seriously think that God, the big guy, in charge of the entire world, would give a shit about a insignificant flamer on a insignificant website that in the big picture is NOTHING but something, the SMALLEST minority of the world entertains themself with. Frankly I would have thought the real sins of the world would be shit like, oh I don't know try THE HALOUCAUST, or perhaps 9/11. Not flames on a website. Sweet Jesus, God doesn't care about you, me or FanFiction Saviour, he isn't real. 'He' is about as fictional as the contents of this website. Understood? Symbolism is what he is, that's what the bible is. The story of Adam and Eve is symbolism. It has hidden meanings but not hidden truths, things in that story represent other things, which are generally boring and no use to no one. Stop going on about FFS hurting her siblings, please if I was your sibling, well you just think of how many ways one could kill ones self. Flaming isn't a sin. There will always be good and evil in the world, and YOU if you believe in God then you must also believe in the devil. There is always a contrast good and bad. Wake up to that and get over it. And one more thought at the end of your little rant... "you cannot be the one to decide if someone is stupid or not only God can do that.." I thought God never judged. But hey, he's the biggest hypocrite there is. Voila. Lady Hades. fanfictionpolice/suck 2004-10-03 9 Signed Hey I am going to say what it is I always say: hurry and write a new chapter I’m waiting patiently, well I take that back, now I am beginning to freak out! ah! write soon! As for Lady Hades: oh ouch was that suppose to hurt? you most be by far dumb if you don’t know that the school education has gone down hill. As for my spelling and grammar issues, that is non of your concern and I was never talking to you until you made a stupid insecure attempt to save your little buddy. You don’t know me and the things about me, so you don’t know why I have hard times spelling and a hard time with grammar, but hey I know you want to take down any one who has a heart. Its sad that you think god is fake, or what ever you want to think. You obviously must have grown up and was raised poorly, cause that’s the only kind of people that I have HEARD of that doesn’t believe in god. And I never said we were all brothers and sisters I said in a way we were. You have no proof that he doesn’t exist, but one day ill show you my proof that he does and I might just feel sorry for the hell you’ll be living in. As for a matter of fact I do believe in the devil, and he is obviously apart of your psychotic excuse of a human being. You are obviously a childish person with multiple personalities or something, the things you say and act make me laugh, you think your putting me down when your actually making me laugh my butt off. Its so sad how you think that god doesn’t care about this little pain your inflicting on others, but your wrong, he does care, and he WILL tare you down. Trust me eventually he will bring you down to the ground begging for forgiveness. You and fan fiction saviour. Your pathetic and you call me pathetic, the pathetic person is the person starting problems with people who never even asked for there stupidity and comments of foulness. Your jealous of the fact that people are giving these people attention and YOU ARE not getting any, you pathetic baby. You have to ruin things for others. Not to mention you enjoy trying to make people feel lesser then you. But reality check chick you are just showing the world how much of a loser you really are, you upset the world with your very existence. First of all I must address its clear you are not a teenager so this leads me to a.) feel sorry for you, that you find your life or inner self so depleted you must entertain and vent your self upon people who are at the other end of this public voice form; known as fan fiction. I refer to god as a being with eyes because it states as such in the bible. We humans were created in his image. ? 4 u 2 ponder 4 ur self… Is your life that boring that you have to come on to this site and flame others? Take a look at your ten toes, your ten fingers, were do you think you got that from? In the bible it states that in the end of the world the weather would change, there would be earth quakes explosions and all kinds of weather and natural destructions, the bible predicted every thing that is happening today, including all the wars up til the wars today. Further more many other people are losing there heads and lives in a holly war. This war is for god, Iraq attacked us because there beliefs about god. Does this sound like acts for a fictional god? And a last I am not finished yet, contrary to your statement that god would not care about flaming! He cares about the behavior, and act of each soul that walks this planet. And when the day comes your soul leaves your body it is to my and many billions of others that you will have to account for every act you did on earth. Oh and another thing, not only can these kids these days not spell, but there out there killing people today; are you a product of one of these teens. There is a whole lot of things that you don’t know, and will one day know, like hopefully how to have a heart or a sense of humor. And in my youthful state you are annoying and should just shut up right now before you can possibly make your self sound any stupider. People are on this site to have fun and to read stories not listen to your non stop nagging so just shut up and go away no one wants you around. Your pathetic and your existence makes me sad. I cant stand you hypocrites who think the world is centered around you. Your going to sit in the bottom of hell and rot away as the devil tortures you, and your going to think about what I said and wish you acted on it sooner, try opening the bible, there are some things more important then knowing how to spell Heard or herd, it don’t matter it sounds the same, even if it isn’t. get the point? Your a sad person or something I read your little bio, and it isn’t cute. Its pathetic as well, your more immature then you want to believe. It was nice talking to you, hope your smart enough to understand what I’m saying. Hee hee, ha ha, toodles doodles my noodles. YOU CRAZY NOODLE! You know why you were able to read that noodle, because god was nice enough to supply you with a pair of eyes you diet cola. Aka your cancerous. May god forgive me for saying some of these things and may he forgive you for your stupidity oops I mean your un holiness. Rock the boat and don’t ever stop! Us kids are having fun while your being an old hag, you hermit! Well I gotz to goz! To every one else: I am sorry for some of the things I said, I don’t take an easy liking to people who insult God. God is are creator and he is are father we have no right to say he doesn’t exist. He gave up so much for us. So if you were offended please except my apology. And to those who don’t believe in god I’m sorry, that is how you feel your not bad for it, I just believe you’re wrong as you believe I am wrong, but I am right. So excuse the child in me who is still finishing her teenage years, I am sorry if my spelling offends you. Don’t hate the writer hate the Hades lover. To Donna Lynn: I am sorry about this, I truly am. I really enjoy your story and hope you write a new chapter soon. I hope you understand the urge to defend God. And teach the idiot a lesson of its own. Thank you for writing such a lovely story toodles!