Gim
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Author has written 5 stories for Kim Possible.

My real name is the initials G.L.M., but I like to be called Gim, just something I started in high school.

My style is more in the line of angst, love, and death. Not sure why, but I like writing those kinds of stories. Also, I now write in the style of different point of views. I did that alot in Exos Complexity. For some reason I like to show different views during the same time frame. Sometimes, I even throw in a flashback here and there. Some events in The Legacy of Shego are examples of me using flashbacks. I also used dream states in my stories and with one character, Merrick, I used alot of dream states, especially in The Legacy of Shego.

I write stories as a hobby. I never plan to get rich or famous from writing them. I write them to entertain others as well as myself. I'm not a professinal writer either. So, if I make mistakes in a story, please over look it. Rather enjoy the story instead of trying find the mistakes. However if you see a mistake, point it out to me. I will try to correct it when I get a chance.

I have always loved stories that had twist and turns. Ones were you don't know what's going to happen next. Just to note, all new stories get updated every Saturday. (Unless something comes up or I might update a story early if I get a chapter finished and in perfect order.) Also stories will get updated even if I never get another review. I'm at the point were if I like how my story is going, I'm going to continue it no matter what. The one thing about my stories are, they never end happily ever after. However, my stories do end on a high note, something good happens. One thing I will never do is shy away from touchy subjects. If an event or issue is going in the world that has people up in open arms, I will write a story that conflicts with those issues and events. It is better to oppose and be different than be like people who act like sheep.

After word for Anything's Possible: Redux

Before I get into the details of the story, I'm going to tell how I got to know the series. I didn't decide to watch the series myself. I have a neice that likes cartoons. So, one day we happened upon the Kim Possible series. I don't remember the episode's name. It was during the first season. After we watched a few of the shows, I began to relate with the series and I admit I liked watching it. Of all the characters, I think I'm more like Ron except I don't save the world nor do I have mystic monkey powers.

As for why I wrote the story. People do differnet things when they get depressed. Most of the time its destructive. Drinking, drugs, and kill one's self or others. I however wrote and thought up stories. It helped me by putting my feelings in words. I started this story five years ago because I was going through a petty depression and an idea came to me to write a story using the characters from the series. The first draft I wrote, I ended up scraping except for key points. The reason I scraped it was because my favorite character from the series wasn't even in it. That character is Shego. So I began a second draft. I wasn't really too happy with it either because Shego only appeared once through out the story.

I didn't start a third draft because things came up and I came out of my depression. So, for over two years the story sat on my computer. After those two years I went into another depression. I hinted it in the story. A girl I dated for over two years dumped me for no reason. We were close enough to talk about getting married after she graduated. So, I went back to the story.

In the third draft, Shego was in the entire story. Still, I wasn't happy with the story because it lacked something. In the fourth draft Cleburne appeared. Now, Cleburne is a character I have used in every story I ever wrote even though in this story I changed his name later in the story. He has always had some kind of superhuman ability. There is also two differnet Cleburne's I used. A pure good one and a pure evil one. In this story I used a mix of both, however, Warwick would have been the pure evil one. Warwick and Cleburne I do claim as my own. However other characters with their traits or names I don't. I do though if they have the names and traits. Also everyone that read the story can notice I never described what Cleburne looked like other than the scars and for one brief instants, he had blue eyes. These's a reason behind this, I wanted the reader to imagine him as someone they admired, loved, or cared about. Cleburne could be anyone. Course I never have thought up what he looked like.

The fourth draft I began to be happy with. I however changed it several time. The version I posted before this one ended up being the fifth draft. That's why this story is named Anything's Possible: Redux. I saw several errors I made. I had the story up to 13 chapters because I posted that many at once. I erased the story from the boards and reworked it some. I then posted it back one or two chapters at a time while looking over the future chapters for more errors. Which reviewers pointed out I still had mistakes. I will come back later and fix them. If I do come back to the story, it would be a seventh version.

I have came back and edited this story some, correcting errors, and I added some hints on who Cleburne was. The hints were in the form of Shego remembering things about Merrick, but she couldn't remember why or how she was able to remember. Shego in this story knew from the beginning Cleburne was Merrick, but she didn't want to believe it because she blamed herself for his supposed death and her feelings for Merrick were always with her, no matter how much she wanted to forget him.

At this time I like to thank the one's that have read my story and a special thanks to the ones that have reviewed my story. I will come back time from time and refine the story, but I see it as finally finished.

After word for Exos Complexity

I wrote this story as a sequel to Anything's Possible: Redux for a good reason. I couldn't develop the relationship between Shego and Merrick in the first story because I never found a place for it. It was was the one thing I wanted to show in AP:R but I never could. Instead all I did in that story was leave hints here and there. I wasn't happy about it and that caused me to write this story. Everyone who read this story can see it dealt more with Shego and Merrick than any other character. Though I tried to give every character in the story some limelight, Shego and Merrick were the main two. All the events that unfolded in both stories was because of them and their relationship except the Sons of Rah, who were the only ones uneffected by Shego leaving Go City.

The Sons of Rah is just a catchy name I gave the terrorist group. The "Rah" part means Riechstag Adolf Hitler. In the first story, Warwick said, they were once the werewolves of World War II. There was actually a group called the Werewolves and they were SS that terrorized allied troops during the end of the war with Germany. So the Werewolves were actual terrorists and if they all survived, they might have changed their name to something else. As I said in an author's note, I have more true than fiction in my stories.

I really enjoyed thinking up this story. Since it was during the holiday season, I had time to work on the story. Was the reason one of the days in the story was Christmas eve. I'm sorry if having that day in the story offends anyone, you could always substitute it for any holiday you celebrate. Having time to think over the story was another reason I had three alternate endings.

Since one ending was used, I can give a condensed version of the other two. The first ending I wrote ended similar to the one in the story except it was Shego instead of Sheena speaking. Merrick had died in the arctic never to return and Shego was telling how she ran back into Merrick and what happened ten years later. She ended up dying of old age in Go City. Dying alone and miserable. The second ending I wrote had Merrick as the only one that lived the war and he ended up on the streets of Middleton some years later. He had lost his mind and he was babbling about what happened to anyone who would stop and listen to him. Merrick ended up in a nut house where the doctors didn't know his name because he couldn't tell them. He died of extremely old age, alone and miserable.

Afterwords combined for How it Began and The Legacy of Shego

I wrote these stories at the same time. A tough ordeal. I stopped on The Legacy of Shego because How it Began was a longer story and had more details in it. How it Begun dealt with only Shego and Merrick. I was still unhappy with leaving hints to their past together. So, I decided to write an entire story that only dealt with them. Though there is sexual content in this story, I refrained from making it too detailed. Still, anyone whose a teenager or older will know what's happening. A loophole that I used to keep the rating at T.

As I said, The Legacy of Shego is the ending story of my series (though, an idea hit me for a possible 5th story). Everyone can notice a difference in the beginning and ending stories. The first one was mostly from Shego's point of view while the last one was from Merrick's point of view. No real reason why I used different points of view. I just wanted to I guess.

Now with How It Began finished, I can add the full afterword for the story. As everyone can see, not only did the story end sadly, it also ended with Merrick actually being dead in the end. Course, in the next story in the series, he was alive and well, though a lot different in the five years Shego and he was apart. Shego left Go City not because of her really wanting to be evil nor because her brothers annoyed her. I tried to show a different idea on why she left. No one makes a life changing decision in mere moments, it has to happen over time and for Shego that was no different. I showed her thinking about being evil, but she decided not to until after she found out Merrick was dead. Only then did she see there was no point in continuing to live like she had for so many years.

Now with The Legacy of Shego finished, I will finish the afterword for the story. In the end, Shego got to be the Supreme One, but differently from how she got the title in the cartoon series. I added the character Demon of Anarchy as a mystery character. I have four possible people from the my story series who could be Doa. If I post a 5th story, I will use one of those four. Until then, the series has came to a close, but its still opened to expand.

As I stated in an A/N, I used movie scenes in TLoS. I will state them in order. The idea of one person taking on a world ruler, Merrick aganist Kaigan, came from Ultra Violet. Violet took on on the world ruler, who came to power after the world became gripped with fear over a diease, which was called vampirism, and the world ruler used that fear to assume control. There was an exchange of words between Merrick and Wade that came from that movie, which started with Wade asking how Merrick was going to get through all the guards. I also used an exchange of words for Merrick and Wade that came from Final Fantasy: Advent Children. It was during the time Merrick was drinking and he and Wade cussed one another. Lastly, during the exchange of words between Merrick and Grendel, I used a dialogue and a scene from the movie Matrix: Revolution, though I altered it some. While they were fighting in the rain, Grendel asked Merrick why he kept fighting and Merrick replied "Because she would want me to," as with the scene in the movie, Neil said, "Because I choose to." If there is any other scenes I overlooked, when I spot those scenes I will post them here.

Now the list of songs in order for the chapter Raging Among the Angels. From the beginning of the chapter I listened to "What I've Done" by Linkin Park until Merrick and Grendel were alone in the tower. Once they were on the roof, I listened to "Breathe" by Breaking Benjamin until Merrick's last words in the chapter. When the chapter switched to Shego and Sheena, I listened to the sadder version of "The Diary of Jane" by Breaking Benjamin.

I like to address the review about Shego and Merrick going to the prom. If you read Exos Complexity, you will see they did go to their own prom, just it was 17 years later.

I like to take the time to answer a few questions I have been asked about Merrick. First of all, there was never anyone I knew that was simliar to Merrick. Though, I had have Shego call him by a nickname made out of his whole name, just like I'm called Gim. Its the only reference to my RL in the series. The character himself is completely made up, which is alot since I built him up into a led character by the last story he had appeared in. Yes, there is alot of mystery behind Merrick because I wanted him to be.

I caused the gaps in Merrick's life on purpose, from 18 to 25 to 35 to 53 until 123. What really happened during those years Merrick was missing, I have never thought up, except the years between 25 and 35. I imagine from 18 to 25, he was a soldier and off fighting wars, secret ones too. But from the time he was 53 to 123, I never gave it any thought. Its a long time span there, but in the story The Legacy of Shego, I did hint he was in the artic. So, I guess for nearly 70 years he was living in one of the coldest places on earth, but I'm not sure he stayed there the entire 70 years.

After word of To Kill the Immortals

The reason behind this story is because of the pms I recieved over who Doa is. People have guessed several characters from my series, but no one is right. There is only four possiblities, which I won't share until the end of the story. I, however, will say Doa is not Merrick. So, sorry to the ones who guessed that, but I did planned for him to be at first, just I changed that idea. Doa is someone no one has guessed yet. Now that I started the story, I will say that through out the story, there will be hints to who Doa is.

Chapter 1: The first chapter is mostly a prologue of the story. It happens two weeks before. The scene involving a figure and Hope Lawson is were the story actually begins.

Chapter 2: This chapter involves the the beginning of the invasion and it reveals what the plan Doa and Jes were talking about in chapter 1.

Chapter 3: This chapter involves the survivors, of the nuclear blast on Go City, making it out of the sewer. They were attacked by the Chimera and Jes along with Shego and Hope were the only ones who made it out of the sewer and to the prison Doa wanted them to make it to. After the car wreck, Shego saw someone who she thought was dead.

Chapter 4: This chapter starts with Shego in an infirmary and she learns she wasn't seeing things after the wreck. Amber thompson had lived the Chimeara encounter along with one of the soldiers.

Chronicles in the Life of Shego

How it Begun.

Details are sketchy on what happened in this period of Shego’s life. It’s rumored that Shego met her first true love in high school then she left her home city of Go City two years later. The research on the events of Shego’s teenage years continue and hopefully someday some light will be shed on what happened in this period of her life.

Anything's Possible: Redux.

This period in Shego’s life happened six years after she left Go City. Some of the events and people during this period have been shrouded in mystery. We do know Shego ran back into her high school love, who she was told died in a car wreck during the one month after she first left Go City. He, however, remembered her but didn’t know why because he had gaps in his memory. Later on he remembered everything during a raid they were involved in. Shego and her love were separated during the raid. Her love walked out on her for unknown reasons after he returned a year after the raid.

Exos Complexity.

This period in Shego’s life happened ten years after the raid she was involved with. Her love returned during this time and he was involved in an unknown war. Shego found out why he walked out on her. He wanted to protect her from the very people he was fighting. Shego and her love became engaged during this period and were going to get married after the war was over. Shego got involved in the war as well just to be with her love. During the last battle, her love was severly injuried and Shego ended the battle with an unknown power. She carried her love to others that fought with her and she accompanied her love on a transport back to where he could get medical care. Months later, Shego and her love got married and had children. It is unclear but rumors surfaced that told that Shego died 17 years after she was married to her love a second time. These rumors were believed to be myths because no records were ever found that proved the truth.

The Legacy of Shego.

Records have been found that told that Shego reappeared over 60 years after her claimed death. She was younger than she was at her supposed death but nothing was ever found that proved how she was about to regain her youthful look. Her life time love surfaced during this time as well but he was in a deep depression with no explantion to why he was in the despressed state. After the fall of the tyrant that ruled the world at this time, Shego helped lead the world to freedom, but no information has been found on what happened to her love.

To Kill the Immortals

It is unknown what happened during this time.

Chronicles in the Life of Shego.

The series in order of stories.

How It Begun (Now Completed)

Anything's Possible: Redux (Now Completed)

Exos Complexity (Now Completed)

The Legacy of Shego (Now Completed)

To Kill the Immortals (Being worked on now)

Stories outside the series.

The Trio Humor/Action/Adventure (On the drawing board for now.)

This story will involve only Kim and Ron while they deal with three villians from Shego's past.

The Damned Action/Adventure (On the drawing board for now.)

Be solely based off the movie The Condemned, which had ten prisoners competing for freedom and a wad of cash, on an island which was littered with cameras for an online reality show, but in order to win the freedom and money, one of them had to be the last one alive, which means the ten had to kill one another. My version will have some, if not all, of the villians from KP competing for the same rights along with made up characters.

Main characters or groups I have created that are in my stories.

Merrick Alexander Lawson (Mal, Fallen Angel)

Shego's high school love/ husband. From Toyah, Texas, became a supersoldier before he was twenty, tough, stubborn, hard to kill, kind, easily lose his temper for the right reason, extremity intelligent, fearless (though he's afraid of making speeches in front of large crowds), multi-millionire thanks to his adopted mom and sister's death. Has a spilt personality, which he switched back and forth to depending on how mad he got and once in a rage, his evil side took over. Also, was an genetic experiment, along with Warwick.

There are several different versions of Merrick in my stories, which as followed:

Teenage Merrick

Moved to Go City when he was sixteen and met Shego on the very first day he was in the city. Met her after she fell on top of him after a criminal pushed her off a building, which he saved her life by her falling on him and later, resulted in them dating.

Cleburne

Was Merrick without knowledge of who he really was in most of AP:R, learned who he really was at the end of the story.

Lawless

Merrick's crime fighter persona during his teenage years, recreated Shego's powers by inventing gloves that possessed the same powers. Shego's brothers believed he was a sixth person with Go powers. (Got this character idea from all places, Batman, because Merrick was a multi-millionire and, well, Shego reminds me of Wonder Woman for some reason. WW and Batman had a thing for one another.)

Blaize

Merrick's self appointed name while he led the Ories, used a fake name in order to keep the Exos from finding out where he was. Later, he told the Exos and the Ories who he really was during an air battle.

Lost Merrick

The version of Merrick in most of The Legacy of Shego. Was depressed for over 60 years because of Shego's death, mainly because he blamed himself for her death and he couldn't forgive himself while he was in the artic hunting the last Exos. Didn't really want to fight and wished for death.

Fallen Angel Merrick

The final development of Merrick after he learned he was a genetic experiment. Could control the nanobots in his blood, even to the point of creating weapons. In this form, his eye color switched from blue to red, hinting the change. Seems to feel no pain in this form, after a severe injury to his face and several wounds to his body, he still can continue like nothing is wrong with him. Unclear if he died right after Grendel or not, but it was assumed that he did.

Warwick (Archangel)

An evil version of Merrick. German, supersoldier and opposite of Merrick in every way. Was a genetic experiement along with Merrick. Killed by Merrick in a brutal fashion.

Kaigan

Warwick's clone with Warwick's memories. More violent and started ruling the world nine years after Shego's death. Was leader of the exos during the Unknown War. In the end, killed himself after Merrick destroyed the last clones of him.

Sheena Lawson

Daughter of Merrick and Sheila Lawson (Shego). Has Shego's powers but her powers are weaker. Has some of Merrick's supersoldier abilities. Became the Supreme One's right hand woman. Became the General of the Empiric Military, which the Supreme One ruled over.

Matthews Lawson (Matt)

Twin brother of Sheena Lawson. Son of Merrick and Sheila Lawson (Shego). Has same abilities as Sheena but is stronger. Killed by a clover.

Jimmy Duncan/ Jep Dean

Merrick's rival in high school, hated Merrick and was jealous of Merrick dating Shego because he liked Shego since the sixth grade and she wouldn't ever go out with him, even tried to break up the couple several times. Later, was Merrick's rival during the time Merrick was going through martial arts training. Met his demise at the hands of Merrick.

Tick/Tock/Tack

The villians for the new story The Trio. I added them to How It Began just to show a preview of the characters. They are mentally unstable and are dangerous once they snap. (Were created under the idea of a dark side of Team Go, namely Shego and the Wegoes.)

Tack/Tanya Brock

Is the only girl of the Trio and resembles the way Shego acts and looks. Tack's emotion is always mad or angry. She is the most dangerous of the Trio because of her emotion. Self appointed leader of the Trio

Tick/Tim Brock/Tock/Tom Brock

Are Tack's younger twin brothers. They have the opposite emotions of happy and sad. They can finish the other's sentence. More in control of their emotions and show they are by advising their sister.

Sons of Reichstag Adolf Hitler (Sons of Rah or SOR)

A terrorist group orginated from World War II. Were once called the werewolves. Planned to either take over the world or destroy it under the leadership of Warwick. Most were killed during the raid on Niker Research Center. Resurfaced later as the Exos.

Orions (Ories)

Soldiers that Merrick led in the Unknown War. Were watered down supersoldiers and had to wear suits that allowed them to perform some of the abilities Merrick could do without a suit. Was led by Kim after she became the de facto leader. Unit was disbanded one month after the Unknown War.

Exoskeletons (Exos)

Sons of Rah. Enemies of the ories. Was able to call upon a metal suit to cover their bodies like Warwick's. Were supersoldiers like Merrick but were weaker. Most met their demise at the hands of Shego. The last ten were killed by Merrick.

James (The blue striped Orion, Kipper)

Was Merrick's british counterpart, super soldier, seemed to be similar to Merrick and was his friend. Was killed during the last battle of the Unknown War.

Shego's Clone

Looks just like Shego when she was in her twenties, has the same memories, but lacks the real Shego's Go power. Was a regular woman. Became the Supreme One and ruled the world. Something the real Shego always wanted.

Clovers

Criminals who Kaigan created into a paramilitary unit. Supersoldiers like Merrick and could beat Merrick in a fight.

Grendel

A teenage clone of Merrick. Was created by Kaigan in the attempt to kill Merrick. A true dark side of Merrick, planned to kill both Merrick and Kaigan, then take control of the world for himself. Was later killed by Merrick and was his evil personality in the flesh.

Mirages

Were created along with Grendel by Kaigan. A group of white ninjas with abilities like Merrick and had Merrick's fighting style.

The Demon of Anarchy (Doa)

A mystery. Doesn't show loyalty to the Supreme One and vowed to bring about her down fall. Been hunted from the day he appeared. Has unnatrual powers, close to mystical.

Johnny Eric Stoppable

Was the great-grandson of Ron and Kim Stoppable. Was saved from being beat to death by Doa.

Amber Thompson

Shego's bodygaurd and friend. Very aggressive. Very loyal. Hates clovers with a passion. Seems to have traits similar to Shego when she, herself, was Dr. Drakken's bodyguard.

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To Kill the Immortals
The Lowardians return to Earth, seeking revenge, along with the Great Blue One during the Supreme One's reign.
Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 38,326 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 5/29/2008 - Published: 2/23/2008 - Shego
The Legacy of Shego reviews
What did Shego leave behind at her death beside love ones? Sequel to Exos Complexity, which must be read first. Now complete.
Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 72,326 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/10/2007 - Published: 1/18/2007 - Shego - Complete
How It Began reviews
How did Shego's last two years in high school change her life? Prequel to Anything's Possible: Redux. Story that begins my series. Now complete.
Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 154,618 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/28/2007 - Published: 1/6/2007 - Shego - Complete
Exos Complexity reviews
10 years after the raid, Kim and Ron get a message to meet a friend in Boston, which causes them to run into something unexpected. Sequel to Anything's Possible: Redux which you must read before this one. Now complete.
Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 93,695 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/18/2007 - Published: 11/27/2006 - Shego, Kim P. - Complete
Anything's Possible: Redux reviews
Dr. Drakken comes up missing while Kim and Ron are asked to go to Washington because other scientists are coming up missing as well. Shego runs into a strange sight which brings the past back and causes her to ally with her worst enemy. Now complete.
Kim Possible - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 16 - Words: 53,365 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 11/26/2006 - Published: 11/16/2006 - Shego, Kim P. - Complete