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Hey I'm Raven and I like reviewing stories. Telling the authors what I think of there work, how they did, if there really horrible. Let's face it, there are some really horrible writers on the website. But there are also some fanfictions that are really good, my favourite right now is Deadwood Covenant By Tavvy13. I read Austin &Ally, Kickin' It, and any recommend fanfictions, from any TV show, movie or what ever. Don't be offended if I say your writing is bad, I tell the truth about story's even if it hurts someone's feelings. I'm really picky with fanfictions and only favourite the ones I find really good. They have a good plot, keep you on the edge of your seat and keep you excited for the next update. I don't like stories with over used plots most of the time, for example pregnancy,bad boy and good girl, nerd and bully, the ones who always make the girl weak. Those kind of stories always appear in every fandom, I hate it. It's like they can't come up with an original plot. However, there are some that are beautifully written, but you don't come across those too often. I hate it when fanfictions are written like plays:

After school

Name walks in and sees Name sitting on the couch*

Name:How did you get here?

Those kind of fanfictions annoy me so much. It's not even a story, it's a script. All you need next is Scene one:Act One! So, if you are a author to one of those fanfictions please don't be offended by my review, it's only honest. I used to review by RossLynchLover13 but now I go by xXBeautifulDestructionXx. I when I review I can sound like a critical b* , but I'm honest. I don't sugar coat my reviews.

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Deadwood Covenant by Tavvy13 reviews
"This life chose me. I was born into it, whether I like it or not. And it's not pretty, believe me; it consumes you without so much as a god damn warning. Chews you up and spits back out monsters you pray you never have the shit luck of meeting. And there will never be an option of turning back..no redo, no second chance. You know why?...I enjoy it too much." AU/GANG violence
Austin & Ally - Rated: M - English - Romance/Crime - Chapters: 19 - Words: 115,195 - Reviews: 1343 - Favs: 378 - Follows: 413 - Updated: 5/15/2018 - Published: 4/5/2013 - Austin M., Ally D., Dez, Trish dlR.
Twisted by MakeItPopDells reviews
I was told to stay away from him. He was nothing but dangerous. He did terrible things. He "had no heart". But now it's too late. According to him, I was his. And the more time I spent with him, the more I realized just how twisted the world truly is. Because life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain.
Austin & Ally - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,099 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 51 - Updated: 4/11/2015 - Published: 10/18/2014 - Austin M., Ally D.
I won't do it again, i promise by ljitrackrunner12 reviews
Suddenly I couldn't take it anymore, I wanted to know why he was clenching his stomach so tightly, why even though he was angry, pain and agony still drizzled in his eyes. On impulse I quickly pulled his shirt up to see the worst sight of my life.
Austin & Ally - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,271 - Reviews: 66 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 10/18/2014 - Published: 6/11/2014 - Austin M., Ally D., Dez, Trish dlR.
The Skyscraper's Tale by The White Prince reviews
After a rather unfortunate incident involving Trish's new job. The gang meets a strange and musical, but damaged boy who changes their lives in more ways then one.
Austin & Ally - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 24 - Words: 133,083 - Reviews: 89 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 7/27/2013 - Published: 12/20/2011
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