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Hello! I am Pinewhisker. I am of No-Clan-In-Particular.
I also go by SmilePyrVulpi. My name is Nathan.
I am one of the local hermits here on FF.

Don't be scared, I don't bite. I just read and sometimes review!

I am a grey-aromantic, grey-asexual trans man/neutrois individual. My pronouns are they or he.

I give reviews to things I read and love. I usually only give reviews to the things that really stick out of the story to me, so don't freak out if I don't reply on every part of a story.

I also give advice to authors in my reviews. If I give you advice, it doesn't mean I think you are a cruddy writer. It means I know you are doing great and can improve with simple tips.

Don't write what you know.
Write what you want to know.
Write what you love, what you hate, what scares you, what motivates you.

Any writer should feel insulted to be called "perfect".
"Perfection" means that you cannot grow and change.
Not being able to change is a weakness.

Weaknesses, other than "perfection", make us human. Don't be afraid to give your characters flaws.
But not weak crud like "She's clumsy" or "He's an orphan". Those are common in Mary-Sues. Be careful. You can have a klutzy orphan, just flesh out the personality and make us feel them as being alive. Give them other flaws and moments where they shine, as well as moments where they fail.

Make them seem like a human/cat/dog/anthropomorphisized rabbit/elf/tree! Make it relatable, but don't be afraid to make it wild.

Make it seem real. Writers are the architects of Universes! That story is the readers universe at the moment they read it. Flesh it out fully!

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Pokemon: The Origin of Species by DaystarEld reviews
Enter the world of Pokémon from a rational perspective. Instead of starting his journey in ignorance, Red has spent his years studying the creatures so central to his world... and he doesn't quite agree with all the information in his books. No time for rookie mistakes here: he's on a quest to discover the true nature of Pokémon, and maybe even find out where they really come from.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 71 - Words: 647,094 - Reviews: 1702 - Favs: 2,440 - Follows: 2,878 - Updated: 7/31 - Published: 10/25/2013 - Red, Leaf, Blue O./Green O. (male)
Derpédex by C7sus4 reviews
Starting out on a journey? Couldn't afford a normal pokédex? Then this is for you. This is your guide to the world of pokémon for now. Lucky you. Rated M for graphic language, among other things. [Thanks a lot for 100 chapters, guys!]
Pokémon - Rated: M - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 147 - Words: 228,051 - Reviews: 833 - Favs: 249 - Follows: 196 - Updated: 12/25/2018 - Published: 2/1/2012
Living Under Void Nights: When Jone and Jode Fail by AedricDaedra reviews
When the Mane of Elsweyr is assassinated and impersonated, and the moons suddenly disappear, only a group of Khajiit orphans know the truth. Now, they're the most wanted criminals in Elsweyr. This is the first part of a trilogy about the Void Nights, and how a pride of Khajiit of the different furstocks of the Lunar Lattice work together to save Elsweyr and bring the Moons back.
Elder Scroll series - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 13 - Words: 108,569 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 6/21/2018 - Published: 5/6/2015 - Khajiit - Complete
Redemption by PokeSpeBanette reviews
Forced to learn how to 'connect' with his pokemon, Green Oak was already having a bad day. And to top it all off? Oak was now sending him on an entirely new journey with a new ability and pokemon that Green never wanted in the first place. DISCONTINUED SEE VIVA LA DEVIANTS FOR THE REMAKE
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 54 - Words: 196,211 - Reviews: 232 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 49 - Updated: 6/2/2017 - Published: 6/25/2014 - Blue O./Green O. (male) - Complete
Emulated by PokeSpeBanette reviews
Ten years ago, he had an identity he was proud of. Now, ten years later, he was still the same person- but he was terrified of being recognised. DISCONTINUED BUT IMMA LEAVE IT HERE BECAUSE APPARENTLY PEOPLE LIKE THIS SHIT
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 32,467 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 6/2/2017 - Published: 5/3/2015 - Blue O./Green O. (male)
The Untold by Brighteyes of Thunderclan reviews
An orphan? No. At least, she doesn't believe so. She has a family. But are they really her own? Thunderclan has kept the secret loyally for many moons now, but will her history inhibit her future? Brighteyes carries on her shoulders a story untold, and in the early generations of the Clans, kin is all that matters. Will she honor her blood, or spill it?
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,632 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 3/14/2017 - Published: 1/5/2016
The Rejection by severys reviews
Leopardkit didn't ask to be born like this. She never asked for the Clan rules to be this twisted. In this world, deformities in the Clan are not allowed, and Leopardkit is determined to put a stop to it.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 33 - Words: 46,245 - Reviews: 197 - Favs: 45 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 8/17/2016 - Published: 8/3/2014 - Complete
sιℓeиce by Miss Goldenwing reviews
I am a white cat with blue eyes. My litter mates are too, but I /had/ to have an unlucky trait. As beautiful I may be, I cannot hear a sound. SILENCE
Warriors - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 12 - Words: 7,263 - Reviews: 131 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 8/1/2016 - Published: 7/24/2013
Innocent or Guilty? by Robincall22 reviews
Robincall judges whether a cat from the Dark Forest, or possibly Starclan, are innocent, and deserve to be in Starclan, or guilty, and belong in the Dark Forest.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Crime/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,468 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/15/2016 - Published: 4/26/2016
100 OneShot Book by Prin Pardus reviews
100 One-shots of various themes selected by yours truly, ranging from love to hate to happiness to sorrow to loss, and everything in between. You can still join in if you want, so long as you follow the rules!
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 61 - Words: 181,022 - Reviews: 334 - Favs: 93 - Follows: 69 - Updated: 5/9/2016 - Published: 6/11/2010
Warriors: Well, I'll Be Doggone by CJ Walker reviews
December 2017 Update: The version of this story is discontinued. A newer and improved installment is currently being written on FanFiction and AO3 under the name of "Warriors: They Call Me It". Check it out!
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,241 - Reviews: 115 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 1/2/2016 - Published: 3/2/2012
Unmasked by wildspiritontheloose reviews
In a Clan where emotions are strictly forbidden and any talk of the Old Life punishable by death, Nightpaw finds himself apprenticed to the only cat with an ounce of freedom: the truth-teller, a cat chosen by the Masked to keep the history of DarkClan. Yet, Nightpaw doubts the truth in this history, especially when he is visited by a member of the fallen StarClan.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,717 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 1/2/2016 - Published: 10/4/2015
Moving Clouds by Night of StarClan reviews
Princess hasn't seen the "wild" members of her family for many seasons. Now all of her kits and their kits visit her in her garden, but one tom is missing. Cloudtail. Or is he? REWRITE of "When the Clouds move on" - Rated for Char. death.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,408 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 6 - Published: 11/22/2015 - Firestar, Cloudtail, Princess - Complete
Erosion by snidely reviews
Drought has forced MesaClan to fight for water, and when Icestar becomes leader, he announces a new strategy for victory. Meanwhile, one fierce apprentice harbors ambition that may one day reach dangerous proportions. Full summary inside.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 36,352 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 10/17/2015 - Published: 3/17/2015 - Complete
Chasing the Sun - Old (please read the new version!) by ThiefofSong reviews
Most cats, from the time they're young kits to the time they're warriors, aspire to be the best that they can be. To be clan deputy, or even the leader someday. Minkkit just wants to be good enough.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 8 - Words: 15,887 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 7/5/2015 - Published: 7/17/2014
Forest of Memories by industria reviews
Darkstripe explores his feelings for Tigerstar, trying to figure out how to gain his favor. Tigerstar, meanwhile, is preoccupied with getting his revenge against Firestar. Will be DarkXTiger eventually.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,343 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 6/2/2015 - Published: 4/25/2009 - Tigerstar, Darkstripe
In This Bright Future by The Right Hand of Light reviews
Because not all struggles involve prophecy or StarClan. Brightpaw is determined to serve her Clan, Lilypaw wants to be a medicine cat, Owlpaw dreams of being leader, and Beechpaw, who cannot speak, just wants to figure out where he fits in. The story of four siblings as they grow up, find their paths in life, and uncover their pasts. ON HOLD, rewriting.
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 13,532 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 4/14/2015 - Published: 1/19/2015 - OC
Shattered Faith by Bazinsky reviews
Basically a two-shot involving Cloudtail and Mothwing thinking about StarClan and faith and what it means to them. UPDATE: A third chapter has been added.
Warriors - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,468 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 3/12/2015 - Published: 4/1/2009 - Cloudtail, Mothwing - Complete
Beyond the Binary by Blizzard of the Caverns reviews
Long ago a terrible feud divided cats by gender, and from the conflict came the creation of two clans: DeltaClan and KarstClan. However different they were, toms and she-cats knew they relied on one another for survival, for this was the way of the world, and how it always was and would be. However, one day a kit is born and denies either gender, thus disrupting the frail order.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 21,043 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 1/12/2015 - Published: 12/9/2014
Back to Life by Night of StarClan reviews
Somewhere in the future of ThunderClan 10 kits are born on one day. What's so special about them? Those kits remember a past that has been long since forgotten. Parings warning: FireXSand, GreyXSilver,...
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 28 - Words: 91,985 - Reviews: 371 - Favs: 247 - Follows: 149 - Updated: 2/10/2014 - Published: 1/29/2012 - Firestar, Bluestar, Sandstorm - Complete
Chosen by Spinosa reviews
Each newleaf is supposed to be a time of new life. But for the Clans of the forest, it is not that time. From each Clan a kit must be chosen to be taken away by the spirits of StarClan, to appease their ancestors. And those kits never return. One queen is determined to stop this from happening again, even if it means risking everything she has been raised by. Rated T for safety.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 36,521 - Reviews: 119 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 11/10/2013 - Published: 5/29/2013 - Complete
Secrets, Secrets by Wolfgrowl reviews
A pelt yellow as sand, stained red with blood. Bloody claws, sheathed, the crime hidden, lost in the past, never to be brought up again. But secrets can hurt someone and what do you do when your past literally comes back to haunt you?
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,428 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 10/31/2013 - Published: 10/19/2013 - Complete
Quarry of Ash by snidely reviews
A medicine cat. A rogue. Heartache in a time of turmoil. Peace that may not last. When guilt and loneliness bare their teeth, how can Doveheart heal the evil in the Clan while battling questions of loyalty and legacy that haunt the medicine cat code?
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 14 - Words: 29,038 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 10/20/2013 - Published: 4/22/2013 - OC - Complete
Little Fires by TheJaguar reviews
Emberpaw has never really fit in. She's never felt right in her body, never felt right with her Clanmates. What can you do when you're a molly stuck in a body everyone else calls a tom's? But when she hears of a magical place where stars touch the earth, she and her best friend Tawnypaw may discover what bravery really is. [img by tarale on flickr]
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 39,101 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 9/29/2013 - Published: 7/6/2013
A Leaf in the Shadows by Silvershadow1142 reviews
Flametail has died and Littlecloud is old and weak. Shadowclan needs someone to train the medicine cat apprentice. Leafpool misses the life she used to have and is constantly tormented in her own clan, so she agrees to Littlecloud's request. Soon she becomes more comfortable in Shadowclan than she ever did in Thunderclan. Will Leafpool stay or go home and work things things out?
Warriors - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 21 - Words: 36,241 - Reviews: 149 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 5/28/2013 - Published: 11/21/2012 - Leafpool - Complete
The Trouble With Rain by Empress Tansy reviews
Taking place one season cycle after the Last Hope, this story follows the life of a young RiverClan she-cat who does not feel like she fits in with her Clan. When she finds out the identity of her father, she vows to leave RiverClan and join him in the hope that his Clan will be a better fit for her, but this unleashes a terror that only she can stop.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 26 - Words: 29,324 - Reviews: 136 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 4/19/2013 - Published: 4/9/2013 - Jayfeather, Willowshine - Complete
Specialized: A Warriors Parody by Elmie reviews
Specialpaw - the daughter of beautiful Beautybreeze and deadly Deathtalon - is a very special cat indeed. StarClan has chosen a wonderful destiny for her, and she has been gifted with incredible powers. Throughout an epic journey of new friendships, lost loves and strange prophecies, will Specialpaw be able to save SpecialClan from evil? *SPOILER ALERT: She probably will.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Parody - Chapters: 6 - Words: 12,834 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 2/22/2013 - Published: 8/12/2012
Echos in The Dark by Wolfgrowl reviews
An echo, a reflection, you can convince yourself that it's another cat. But in the end, you're looking at yourself. Written for The Forest Challenge.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,691 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/24/2012 - Complete
Heretic by Shadesaurus reviews
She's a sick, weak mess, unworthy of her bloodline.
Warriors - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,620 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/21/2012 - Complete
Flying High: A Warriors Parody by Prin Pardus reviews
Kitekit, born to CenterClan, the center of the universe, doesn't think she's a hero. However, as she battles enemy Clans and her own demons, she must rise to the challenge of a terrible prophecy, that will change StarClan forever....Or not.
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,976 - Reviews: 208 - Favs: 78 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 1/3/2012 - Published: 4/21/2010
SoylentBlocks by TheBananaSlug reviews
What are you eating? A Cheeseburger? Stop, it's your childhood Miltank! Read and find out the truth of the food of the PokeWorld and have your mindworld messed with! KNOW THE TRUTH! KNOW THE EVIL! DROP THAT MAGIKARP! STOP DOING "THAT" WITH GARDEVOIR! Rated M for cursing and sexual references. Crackfic. Oneshot.
Pokémon - Rated: M - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,713 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/31/2011 - Ash K./Satoshi, Brock/Takeshi, Dawn/Hikari - Complete
The Prodigy by DeathbyFanfiction1029 reviews
What if due to safety the Pokemon League decided to raise the starting trainer age to 13? How would this affect Ash and co.? Imagine a more mature, smarter Ash embarking on his Kanto journey prepared, and ready to take the Pokemon world by storm.
Pokémon - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 37,343 - Reviews: 168 - Favs: 650 - Follows: 640 - Updated: 7/12/2011 - Published: 4/16/2011 - Ash K./Satoshi
Submerged by nyahxneko reviews
Falling in love with Red was the stupidest thing he had ever done so this time, Green disappears. No one will miss him anyway. RED&GREEN, game-verse; originalshipping
Pokémon - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,503 - Reviews: 47 - Favs: 564 - Follows: 75 - Published: 7/4/2011 - Red, Blue O./Green O. (male) - Complete
Fireheart's Betrayal by Jayie The Hufflepuff reviews
In a stunning twist, the noble Fireheart betrays his Clan. Can a timid loner save ThunderClan from disaster?
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,215 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 11 - Published: 2/1/2011 - Firestar, Ravenpaw
Snatched: The Story of Snowkit by Prin Pardus reviews
Snowkit was always assumed dead by ThunderClan. But what if he wasn't? What if StarClan took him away from the Clan that would have never given him a chance? What if he had a greater destiny than anyone in ThunderClan could have believed?
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 36 - Words: 131,597 - Reviews: 1346 - Favs: 654 - Follows: 244 - Updated: 6/27/2010 - Published: 3/19/2010 - Complete
Journey to Redemption by Prin Pardus reviews
Tigerstar is in the Dark Forest, as he has been for many moons. However, when he finds an innocent kit there, a unique case, he realizes he must help her find her way to StarClan. Together they embark on a journey, to StarClan and to redemption.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 30 - Words: 44,822 - Reviews: 320 - Favs: 144 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 3/17/2010 - Published: 2/13/2010 - Tigerstar - Complete
The Adder by Prin Pardus reviews
To the other apprentices of ThunderClan, Ravenpaw catching the adder was just luck. But, what if it was more to Ravenpaw? What if that single event helped shape the course of the rest of his life? Oneshot.
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 746 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 54 - Follows: 15 - Published: 1/16/2010 - Ravenpaw - Complete
The Lie I've Lived by jbern reviews
Not all of James died that night. Not all of Harry lived. The Triwizard Tournament as it should have been and a hero discovering who he really wants to be.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 234,571 - Reviews: 4734 - Favs: 12,222 - Follows: 5,629 - Updated: 5/28/2009 - Published: 2/9/2007 - Harry P., Fleur D. - Complete
Exile by Natureboy3 reviews
What if Bluestar's idea for the perfect punishment for a traitor was different? What if Fireheart was exiled? Spoilers for A Dangerous Path and The Darkest Hour. FireheartxSandstorm CloudpawxLostface COMPLETE.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 22,674 - Reviews: 433 - Favs: 56 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 5/13/2009 - Published: 2/19/2009 - Brightheart, Sandstorm - Complete
Second Thoughts by Brightfang reviews
We all know what Fireheart felt about being leader, but what about his friends and Clanmates. Cats reflecting on how they think Firestar will do as Clan leader. Takes place during nine lives ceremony. First three are Graystripe, Whitestorm and Sandstorm.
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 18 - Words: 13,186 - Reviews: 123 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 3/7/2007 - Published: 5/16/2005