I don't really stick to one particular genre, or any particular set of characters. But I whole heartedly love the Sonic cast, the Dragon Age Origins characters, and My Little Pony (G4 of course). I also love mythology. When I say mythology, I don’t mean loads of twilight-ish “vampires”. I mean good, original mythology.

Just so you know; I refuse to read or write anything containing a Mary-Sue. Full stop. Let the message be spread, people, Mary-Sue's ruin otherwise good stories. I believe the best and most lovable characters should have a good balance of flaws and talents, and being an orphan who's had a rough life and/or been bullied doesn't count as a flaw.

Am I not visual or descriptive enough? Am I too descriptive? Do my characters lack character? Or are they over the top? How could I make it more interesting? I am very keen on becoming a better writer, and so critique on my writing style would be more than appreciated.